Reviewer: supernaturalsam (Signed) · Date: 26/12/09 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 6 - He Ain't Heavy, Irismay42
Awesome chapter, Iris! Our boys get tormented even when they're completely stoned. Where's the justice in that? Though I have to say, it was so vivid that I saw it happening in my head. Especially when Dean had Sam and Sam all of a sudden opened his eyes and told Dean to help them...I saw that entire scene in my head being played out! And the cliffhangers...what's up with all the cliffhangers? Just because Kripke does it to us does not give you ladies the right to...Oh, who the hell am I kidding? I thrive on cliffhangers... Great job, Iris! Off to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Steph, you really didn't expect me to not put a cliffie in there did you?? Heh heh. Glad the whole thing played out in your head like that - me too! Love it when that happens! Iris
Reviewer: supernaturalsam (Signed) · Date: 26/12/09 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Writing On The Wall, by BJXmas
Sorry it took me so long to review! Getting ready for Christmas is a real bitch, let me tell ya! Doesn't give you any time to read this great jewel of y'alls... :) Poor Dean...he's really losing it quick and it's really causing Sam quite a strain. I believe he's getting quite a few gray hairs on this one...LOL. I love Dean when he's dilerious...he's way too funny. Well, Sam got them a fire started and now they have the unconscious fuzzies...glad I don't have to wait and see what happens next! Great chapter!
Author's Response: No appologies necessary, we are all swamped with holiday commitments. Glad you found the time to read and review, much appreciated. Yep, I think Sam might be due a few grey hairs over this predicament. And all the flavors of Dean make me happy, but writing him delirious and in a purple haze was quite fun. Take care, B.J.
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 26/12/09 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Up The Rabbit Hole, by RoweenaC
Well... Where to begin, Ilka.. I gotta start with Dean shot his tall brother a grateful look, topped it off with a lopsided smirk, finally holding his Colt, hand wrapped around the grip, fingers savoring the familiar feel. The cool metal soothed the hunter's roaring panic, reducing it to a whining murmur in the back of his mind. To Dean, holding a weapon equaled protecting, fulfilling his purpose in life. A weapon represented normality, control and strength. - I'm not sure I've read anything that might have summed up Dean Winchester quite as nicely as those lines just did... lovely, lovely words... Its soo easy for people to talk about Dean and his love affair with his Colt- but too many times people just make him look guncrazy- when thats not the case at all. This actually shows us that his gun ( and I'm a little reminded of AVSC when we see that even WAYYY back then he was sleeping with a gun under his pillow) - he learned that in order to protect Sam, he had to carry... in order for life to be NORMAL, he had to carry... for Dean not to have a gun in his hand- it would be like many of us not to breathe.... So great job with those lines hun... And then there was the GORE.... Anyone that knows how I write- knows I tend to go for the supreme in describing the gore - and dude- you did this one fantastic here.... loved these lines.... Both men lost their footing every so often when a skeleton gave way or their limbs got entangled with protruding bones. Ten minutes later, halfway up and drenched in sweat, Sam lost his grip on a particularly mushy corpse and cartwheeled down a few feet ending up nose down in the ribcage of an indiscernible, fair-haired female corpse clad in a previously bright-red summer dress. He wrinkled his nose at the putrid stench arising from the decaying body, decomp juice mixing with sweat beads on his face. Breathing through his nose, mouth squeezed shut tightly in fear of swallowing some of the rotten remains by mistake, he fought the overwhelming urge to dry-heave This was TOTALLY picturesque.... well to me at least- I LOVED it... could absolutely see it in my head... in all its CSI-like glory!!!! *high-five* But added in to all that- you still gave me snarky Dean- messing with his brother- pulling from Sam that whole irritated, petulant Sammy- that only Dean can... but also getting WorriedSam too- the Sam that knows his big brother can play tough all day long even when he's going under for the last time. I also loved Frantic Sam too- knowing they're really in one helluva mess- Ticho coming after them- plus his own brand of sarcasm too... "Pathogenic.. it means.." Nevermind... I could see Sam's exasperation one minute only to be followed by his utter worry and panic a few minutes later when he sees how bad Dean's ankle is... Now- I cant say that I'm loving the critter in the center of the lake thing where you've left us... OH- and before I finish here... I have to still chuckle at the whole "Let's see if its snowing in Hell" comment... FREAKING HILARIOUS!!!!! only Dean!!! Awesome job Ilka!!!
Author's Response: Tree, you dunno how much fun it was to work on this project and I am pleased to see you liked my contribution to it! As for summin up Dean with his gun-love... It's just how I'd explain his need for any weapon. Security and the ability to protect - be it Sam or other people. Coz that's what he is all about. Protecting and saving. Gawd I love him....
The gore was so much fun to do. I love those tiny icky details that make you wanna look away but somehow pull your eyes to them, like staring into the sun... it's mesmerizing yet it can be dangerous! lol. I could see that heap of ickiness, could smell it in fact when I was writin! It's one of the things I love about horror movies/stories the most. The palpable gore. I know I am weird that way and am glad you feel the same way! Glad you liked the different aspects of Dean and Sam coz I just love to write them from all angles! In all, I have to say I am grateful for being part of this awesome journey and if the ones that preceded this chappie hadn't done such a great job -they really made the story up, I only built on it- I couldn't have done it half as good. And from now on, I will be reading this one too. Coz I think I only read 2 more of the chapters and then it's all new to me... so, I can't tell you were it's heading but I can say this much: Strap in... More hurt, comfort, fun and action is definitely heading our way! Hugs! Ilka
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 25/12/09 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 6 - He Ain't Heavy, Irismay42
I Am, it was a dream holy crap had me on the edge of my seat; great job. would like to know what Sam dreamed. hope the next chapter will be up soon. Renee
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! I would think Sam probably dreamed something very similar to what Dean dreamed... Next chapter up soon! Iris
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 22/12/09 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 6 - He Ain't Heavy, Irismay42
Gripping chapter and how evil to leave Dean and Sam in danger to be drowned by Ticholtsodi until Boxing Day. Can't wait for Friday. To all authors and readers have a wonderful Christmas.
Author's Response: You too Oceane! Glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: bjxmas (Signed) · Date: 22/12/09 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Beating War Drums, by Birdy
Hey, Birdy! What a joy to revisit this chapter! You set up the action perfectly for my chapter, so thanks! I could picture the boys throughout. I really love the Space Coyote gag, gave me another reference in my chapter. And the worry, snark and brotherly love are all evident. I just love putting the boys in these situations and then just sitting back and watching how they deal. And it is just like watching an episode, all the Sam-worry and the Dean-smartass, and then I love that Dean is trying to play mediator and keep Sam from getting them in deeper. And the very real image of Dean succumbing to the cold and Sam's frustration at not being able to get this Trickster to cooperate comes through clearly. Tony sure is annoying, but still amusing in his weird way. Great job! Thanks for giving me so much to work with in my chapter. Later, B.J.
Author's Response: Hi BJ, Thanks so much for a lovely detailed review. I'm glad my chapter gave you something to work with. Only so much to do in a pitch black cave, eh? Although most of us wouldn't mind being stuck in there with a Winchester for company. I love a morally ambiguous foil for the brothers and Tricksters are just that. Thanks again for reviewing. It was fun working with all you grown up writers. Kirsty x
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 22/12/09 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 6 - He Ain't Heavy, Irismay42
Heh. As soon as I read what BJ had done, I wondered who the next author was, and HOW they were going to deal with the Peyote vision quest! You did a great job! How fun was that?!? I loved your chapter!
Author's Response: Heh heh heh, well I'm not good at the blood and the guts and the sticky-out-bones stuff as I'm very squeamish, so I was more than thankful that BJ left me with a doped up Dean who I could just get angsty and emo with! Glad you enjoyed the chapter! Iris
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 22/12/09 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 6 - He Ain't Heavy, Irismay42
First- Love the banner- That pic from Dead in the Water always gets me... Love this chapter Shaz... never reallly sure for a while if this was real or part of Dean's "purple-haze"- lol. So much desperation - him trying to find Sam... and I just loved the mantra - Sam, Sam, Sam - its Sam! - part plea- and that bit of Sam's voice coming through reminding him of his "proper" name... grounding him perhaps. But then- even in the dream state- that whole futilitity of Dean finding his brother- cold and dead... sooo sad. His desperation - so palpable- his agony of failure of being left alone- only to wake up (hands fisted in Sam's shirt- always love that ) to a VERY much alive Sam... You can just "FEEL" his heart pounding in his chest- Then its all Winchester brothers in action- gotta love the brain-trust coming together- starting to piece it all together... knowing despite the obstacles and the situation- they sorta have a direction now. Of course- then you go and give us another evil cliffie... and of course- you did manage to sneak in some classic Dean snark among all that angst - Sam grabbed his brother’s arm and slung it around his own shoulder, with his other hand taking hold of Dean about the waist.
Dean smirked at him fondly. “Aww, does Sammy need a hug?” Great chapter Sharron - I'm sooo glad to see you among the gang here!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it, chuck! That was, after all, the object of the exercise! I'm not particularly good at the physical Hurt!Dean stuff, which is why I opted to batter him a bit emotionally for you! Hope that sufficed! Sharron / Iris / Shaz / Whatever
Reviewer: bjxmas (Signed) · Date: 21/12/09 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Big Brothers Know Best, by LostatC
I wrote a long, detailed review and this stupid computer lost it... First off, sorry it is taking me so long to read, I'm finally getting a chapter a day in on my lunch break at work. That certainly gives me some much needed relaxation. I love how you write the Wee!chesters. The flashback layers in so much depth, not to mention reminding us of their close bond. I love big brother Dean looking out for Sammy, ensuring he not disappoint their dad when John starts his gun lessons. And I love that Dean is the teacher and that little bro, Sammy, is listening and learning from Dean's experience and know-how. Their conversations were spot-on and I could picture the entire scene in my head. The pencil bit was unusual but so cool. I've been around guns my entire life and never heard of that one, but I ran it by my brother-in-law and he gave the thumbs up on all the technical stuff. And while Dean gave Sam a lot of practical info, you made it flow and not seem like technical stuff. Not an easy thing to do, but you did it! And then all that brotherly concern is there, both in the flashback and in the peril they are in now. Loved how you brought that out and kept up the suspense of how they were going to get Dean out of there. Poor boy needs a soft bed! Fantastic job, a truly enjoyable and educational read. Take care, B.J.
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 20/12/09 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Writing On The Wall, by BJXmas
Love me some supernaturally stoned Winchesters!! Such a creative and fun turn in our story. Nothing like purple haze for a God-like creature to get his point across. And this line "You gotta be kidding me - Hendrix?" just cracked me up! I loved the whole conversation about getting Dean warm, just sensational. This chapter was beautifully written to show us what's going on in each brothers head. This really is your forte. You give us each man's perspective on the events as they occur in absolute sync with their characters. You nailed it. So, now our brothers are warm, but off their faces. Great place to hand our fic over to our next co-conspirator.
Author's Response: Hey, Cookie! Yep, it is always fun to play with the boys and putting them in a purple haze was great fun. I do love to get into their heads so I appreciate hearing when I get their characters right. I think all credit really goes to the Js and how expertly they let us know who these guys really are. This sure was fun seeing how each individual author handled their chapter and put their own spin on it while keeping the continuity going. Later, B.J.
Reviewer: bjxmas (Signed) · Date: 20/12/09 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Mountains Washed Away, by Cookie6
Hey, Cookie! Sorry it is taking me so long to read and review, dang all that RL crap! You had a tough chapter, detailing the lore and what the boys were facing, but you did a great job of setting the scene and getting us to wonder what has upset this creature and brought it back to its killing ways. And the brotherly concern is front and center while Dean's injuries seem worse and worse. Yep, they are in a shit-load of trouble! Great job, B.J.
Author's Response: Thank you, BJ. Don't you just hate that RL gets in the way of fantasy!?!Sure cramps our style! I am basking in the glory of your praise. It was great fun to to get stuck into the lore and see how it panned out in the Winchester's voices and sticky predicament. And brotherly concern is a bit addictive. Thanks for your lovely comment. And yep, handed that shit-load of trouble over to the rest of you!!! Your glowing stars are beautiful - thanks a bunch.
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 17/12/09 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Writing On The Wall, by BJXmas
LOL! Drugged wood. Love it! At least we got Dean warmed up, but the next chapter ought to be interesting .... GREAT job!
Author's Response: Thanks, Primrose! This was a great honor being asked to join in on this story and I was glad to put my spin on it. I love writing the bantering Winchesters and the drugged wood seemed like a cool way to take the story in a slightly different direction and maybe, just maybe, get them some more answers. Sharron does a wonderful job with the next chapter and I know the entire story will be awesome. I can't wait to read it all too. Take care, B.J.
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 16/12/09 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Writing On The Wall, by BJXmas
Gotta love the brotherly banter, always put a smile on my face. They finally warmed but stoned, what's going to happen next, can't wait to know.
Author's Response: Thanks, Oceane! I love writing the brotherly banter and had to warm Dean up before he passed out from all his injuries...gotta have a talkin' Dean to play with! Sharron has the next chapter and did a fantastic job with our stoned and sleepy Winchesters. I know you are going to enjoy all the chapters, just as I will since I fell behind and haven't kept up and am as anxious to see what happens as the other readers. Thanks again, B.J.
Reviewer: BritLit (Signed) · Date: 16/12/09 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Writing On The Wall, by BJXmas
I'm a "BJ Fan"---heard about this story from a mutual friend---really enjoying it and also appreciating the other talented writers! You each have your own unique and delightful contributions...as always,BJ, I love your sensitively spot on characterizations of the boys.....keep it coming! :)
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! What a lovely review and thanks for all the support on my stories. I love exploring what makes the Winchesters tick, and with Jensen and Jared bringing them to such vivid life in my head, it is all just a matter of listening to what they have to say. These characters are so very fascinating and exploring their psyches gives me a lot of pleasure. Learning more about them and trying to figure out their actions and conversations is the entire purpose behind my writing endeavors. My good friend, Sharron, is next up and it was wonderful to be able to set up the dliffie and hand it off to her. We pretty much had simliar ideas on where we wanted the story to go and she did a great job enhancing and bringing that to life. Enjoy! - B.J.
Reviewer: irismay42 (Signed) · Date: 16/12/09 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Writing On The Wall, by BJXmas
Gah! The boys and the purple haze! What's going on? (Heh...I might know someone with an answer to that one...!) Can I just "ditto" what Tree said here? I love your Dean AND your Sam, BJ. It's rare to find someone who writes both boys equally as brilliantly. For anyone reviewing, BJ's having "technical issues" so please bear with her - she might not manage to reply to reviews!
Author's Response: Hey, Sharron! Yep, still having those technical issues and hoping that I get a computer going again soon! Talk about withdrawal! But then work is also kicking my butt something awful! You are too kind, but thanks for all the support. Dean's always been my guy, but I love that I feel more confident writing Sam and that it appears I'm hitting the mark with him too. Working on this project, being "part of the team" like Dean enjoyed in HB has been a highlight of this year. I wish I hadn't been so absent for much of the later stuff, (apologies again to all my fellow conspirators) but RL has a way of dictating the time management stuff. It was really fortunate that my chapter came up early and I could get it done before I got so dang busy. My great joy was working in tandem with you and knowing that I could set up this cliffie and hand it off to such capable hands. I love where you took it... Glad to see our story is doing so well. Later, B.J.
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 16/12/09 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Writing On The Wall, by BJXmas
ok- Thats soooo not right... I mean- its one thing to leave an evil cliffie where the big bad creature or demon is just about to kill them or something but damn.... to leave them about to redo a little DALDOM - come on - have a heart ?!?!?!?!?!?! LOL (I'm sensing that I'll get no sympathy here!) BJ - you of course- totally captured the brother relationship wonderfully. I dont know if anyone can delve into their psyche as perfectly as you do. "Nope," Dean adamantly replied, the force of his words stronger, almost making Sam believe he was stronger. At least he was hoping Dean was stronger...knowing that somehow Dean always managed to be strong enough, whatever the challenge. His big brother then continued on with a line culled straight from the Dean Winchester Big Brother manual, "Now, if you were freezing to death...no problem. Hell, I'd do it in a heartbeat...take it as my duty - They both recognize what's going on - one masking- one knowing the other is doing it... He brought his hand up to Dean's face, the sticky mess of all that blood marking him, soiling his heart as it had Dean's shirt. - That - was simply heartbreaking and beautiful- how awful to feel so helpless and have that helplessness be so damning... Sam felt his chest tighten, his ineffectiveness churning up all those latent feelings of failure. He only wanted to care for Dean, take care of big brother like Dean had always taken care of him. Yet through all the hurt and bravado, you captured the humor "Fire good, Sam - fire very good!" -that makes Dean-Dean and despite all the worry and self-doubt- you have confidence and determination that makes Sam-Sam. There's no weakness in either, none of that 16 year-old Sam making an appearance like so many other writers do- where Sam regresses and can't function without Dean to guide his every move... this is a functioning Sam - even if Dean is teasing and spotting wood or handing over a lighter, even if Sam is a little freaked and has his back against the wall - he's still in control- still processing, still on top of the situation and desperate to save his brother and get them out of the predicament. These are the brothers- with all their baggage- in a deep load of crap- but still working together to get out of it. Awesome job BJ (of course!). And really- you totally caught me off-guard with the whole peyote -Purple Haze - unconscious Winchester cliffie at the end... so wasnt expecting that.. and not entirely sure where that's going to take them either... Monday huh? Crap!!! I'll be driving to Pittsburgh for the holiday... damn damn damn!!!!
Author's Response: Ah, Tree! Really glad you are enjoying our story. You should get plenty of hurt Dean throughout. I did want to offer up some of that Winchester bantering and then, of course, the concern for each other that is their trademark. For me it is always about their relationship and exploring the complexity of these intriguing men. This was a wonderful opportunity to work as a team on a joint project, and it was especially nice that I could set up the cliffie and hand it off to the capable hands of our good friend, Sharron. I think you're going to enjoy her chapter immensely, just as you will enjoy all the chapters. A lot of talent involved in this project and all for a great cause, to thank you and Steph for all the hard work you do keeping this site going. Thanks for everything you do, much appreciated. Enjoy the rest of the story! B.J.
Reviewer: PADavis (Signed) · Date: 15/12/09 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Beating War Drums, by Birdy
Just love Tonenili, grinning and saying I did so too tell you. Tricksters are such a whacky lovable bunch. Wonderful chapter. Another uber-cool banner too. Phoebe
Author's Response: The banners are fab, aren't they? I wonder if it's Cal or Louy we have to thank for them. Ahh Tony, didn't exctly save the day did he? Tricksters are such fun (unless you're trapped in a cave with one and your injured brother.) Thanks for the review, Phoebe. Kirsty x
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 14/12/09 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Beating War Drums, by Birdy
The plot thickens! Wonderful job of building the detail while escalating the suspense.You steered our story in such a creative and clever direction. I loved the two way conversations you had going on, you sure had that cave a busy place! Dean's snark made me snigger (alot!) and I could just feel Sams' frustration as he tried to work out what the heck was going on while trying to settle his brother. All while Tonenili was driving them crazy with his obscure clues.*applause* And yep, that ending was an absolute corker!! Just perfect!!
Author's Response: Well, there's only so much you can do in a pitch black cave and I couldn't feasibly work in a shower scene so I thought banter with a Trickster would be the next best thing. Thanks Petra. Kirsty x
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 13/12/09 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Beating War Drums, by Birdy
I'm enjoying the ride all right. Yei saved Dean and Sam from the sea monster but didn't help them to get out of there, he wanted them to fight it. This story is getting better and better, I'm loving it so far. Looking forward to Wednesday.
Author's Response: The thing about Tricksters is they're a bit, well, tricky and not always terribly helpful. Really glad you're enjoying and thanks for the review. Kirsty x
Reviewer: RoweenaC (Signed) · Date: 12/12/09 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Beating War Drums, by Birdy
Hey Twinnie! How's that baby-business coming? Anyhoo... just thought I'd leave ya a coupla words. I still LOVE the Yei-Yay joke... And OMG the Space cowboys plus the last sentence. Befuddled Dean is just yummy. Sam, on the other hand, has a lot to take care of... a smartass bro and a smartass god... Poor guy. Your chapter just came in the right moment. A possibility to breathe before the next load of angst and crap is being piled on the boys. Hugs ya hun! Shame you cant make it in February. Take care! Ilka
Author's Response: Ahh, my sl*tty sibling, baby business is booming - how are you doing m'dear? All flavours of Dean are yummy but I confess to a weakness for him slightly confused. I think it's the little frown/pout comb thing he does. Mmmm. Sam'll be fine, he's had a lot of practice dealing with smart arse-ness (is so a term!) And as you know there's plenty of angst on they way! Thanks for reviewing. Hope you have a fab time in Feb, wish I could make it. Kirsty x
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 12/12/09 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Beating War Drums, by Birdy
Birdie, I think you had a tough chapter- start explaining what's going on but don't give too much away! You did well, setting things up. It will be interesting to see what the authors after you did with it. Hee. This is fun! Great chapter!
Author's Response: Well thanks very much, I'm glad you're enjoying so far. There may be a few twists and turns to come... Kirsty x
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 11/12/09 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Beating War Drums, by Birdy
LOL! I could easily see Dean saying that in the end, so DEAN!! Hmmmm....I wonder if Tonenili is going to help or not. I imagine Sam was getting really frustrated with the ambiguous god. Looking forward to the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Ahh, these annoying supernatural beings are never as much help as they could be. You'll find out what Tony's real contribution is eventually... Thanks for reviewing. Kirsty x
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 11/12/09 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Big Brothers Know Best, by LostatC
Great day! That was truly strange happening in that cave. Poor Dean, he mus have been in an awful lot of pain to run like he did on his ankle. Loved the flashback of Dean and Sam as kids. That is how I would picture Dean teaching Sam how to shoot a gun. Looking forward to reading chapter 4!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it. I see Dean as being that way with Sam too and wanting very much to help his brother through the difficult years with his father. It was a really fun chapter to write. Enjoy the rest! Kim
Reviewer: irismay42 (Signed) · Date: 11/12/09 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Beating War Drums, by Birdy
You did a great job of making plot exposition interesting in this chapter! No easy task, I can tell you! And I still love Dean's "Space Coyote"!!
Author's Response: Did I? Great, I appreciate you saying so. That Simpsons line just will not leave me alone so I was giving it to Dean in the hopes he would exorcise it for me. Didn't work. Think I might need some Sammy Latin, too. Thanks for reviewing. Kirsty x
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 11/12/09 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Beating War Drums, by Birdy
I'm not sure which I would enjoy more- the sarcastic battle between a concussed Dean and Tonelili or the real verbal battle between Sam and the Spirit. I loved that you could just "feel" how irritated Sam was becoming- not wanting to play guessing games with the ghost- yet just not "getting" what the Indian was trying to tell him - and really who could blame the poor guy- he's got an injured brother on his hands, a flooding cave and a truly pissed off creature that wouldnt mind killing them both. I am utterly amazed at how well you all just soo seemlessly pick up one after another... the continuity and flow is awesome- even to the point of the language. I truly dont even pick up that this is being written by different authors- HUGE KUDOS there. And Kirsty - I'm lovin' the Dean Snark in this chapter- while last section fed my gun addiction- and nearly all the chapters have fed my HurtDean - you gave me concussed snarky silly- Dean - the whole "never let them see you sweat" Defiant till the end -Dean... and honestly- who needs the evil cliffie when you end with "Dont think Tony likes you much, dude!" - I'm still rolling over that one. I could literaly see him, head lolling, eyes glazed, barely coherant- look up at Sam and manage that one last sentence- as if Sam didnt have enough on his mind... and as if he really needed Dean to tell him that... AWESOME!!! and sooo Dean! Great chapter ladies - I sooo wait for that little email 'ding' to alert me... I'm worse than a rat waiting for a dinner bell... Omg- I've turned into Dean with the massaging fingers... anybody got a quarter???
Author's Response: Well, we shouldn't really enable your sick habit... but we will. Tree, I'm so glad you're enjoying this. We worked hard on keeping the flow between the chapters but I had it particularly easy, going after Kim, as I'm more than familiar with her style. Angst and injury are very enjoyable (because we're all sickos) but my favourite Dean is sarcastic and irreverant so I'm pleased you liked him like that too. Thanks for for giving me my gateway into Supernatural fanfic. I never knew it existed before finding this site and you have consistently fed my addiction for two years now. Oh, thanks for the review, too. Kirsty x
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