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Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 29/11/09 01:27 PM · On: Epilogue

Great story! I liked Molly, and her reasons for standing in to protect Dean. Hurt Dean was lovely, of course, and so was the scary black dog! Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you! Molly started out completely different, but she refused to sit back and let Dean rescue her. I love it when the characters take over...

Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 26/11/09 10:56 PM · On: Epilogue

Great ending. Loved the description of what Sam faced as he arrived at the scene. Great imagery. I really enjoyed story. I'll be sure to share it with my SN buddies!

Author's Response:
Thanks for the kind words! I didn't know the story had posted yet, so I was thrilled to see so many reviews so soon!
Nachuma

Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 26/11/09 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 7

Good thinking on Dean's part, to quickly teach Molly since he was losing ground quickly. I like the mention of the heat in the gun from Dean's feverish hand. Nice detail.

Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 26/11/09 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 6

Wow. They both have a lot of baggage to deal with. Nothing like a Blackdog to take your mind off your sorrows!! Good thing Dean didn't get sucked into the chick-flick moment too much.....his hunters senses still work well!

Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 26/11/09 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 5

Oh man! Another tough call for Sam. He'll be out there all alone. And the 2 wounded are sitting ducks, too! :o

Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 26/11/09 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 4

"You promised Sam".....ahhhh, Molly's a smart cookie!

Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 26/11/09 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 3

Sammy's stuck between a rock and a hard place if he's decided to leave a civvie holding pressure on Dean's bleeding wound. loving the story!

Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 26/11/09 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 2

So, Dean's been watching Sammy's sad face, too. Nice insight into the brothers' concern for each other. Too bad for that rookie mistake, though!

Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 26/11/09 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 1

Ouch! No good deed goes unpunished. That'll complicate the hunt!

Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 26/11/09 10:38 PM · On: Prologue

Love how Sammy knows just what to do. Great set up for the story. Nothing like a nice Black dog hunt to get Dean back on track:)

Reviewer: zuimar (Signed) · Date: 26/11/09 12:41 PM · On: Epilogue

Can you post a story every day? This one was brilliant, absolutely riveting to read! Molly is a very likeable character with a sad history of her own. Really good job you did!

Author's Response:
Thanks! I've got three or four more stories done; I was just waiting to get the OK to submit. So, coming soon...
Nachuma

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 26/11/09 10:24 AM · On: Epilogue

I just discovered your story and really loved it. You really got the feel of Dean and Sam. I really liked Molly, too. Great to see a female character that is not a love interest or a Mary Sue. She was great. Poor Dean, he sure had a hard time here, but seemed to come to some sort of peace here. Thanks for the great story!

Author's Response:
Thanks so much. I love to torture poor Dean, but I always try to fix him again...

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