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Reviews For Not On My Watch
Reviewer: Star (Signed) · Date: 10/12/09 11:30 PM · On: Chapter 1

i really enjoyed that! The certainty of Dean's words. The fact that Sam trusts Dean. i really miss that dynamic between the boys.

Author's Response:

Thanks! I know, right? Guh. *wants to smack them both*

Thanks for the awesome review! :D

M

Reviewer: Micaiah (Signed) · Date: 25/11/09 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 1

Stories like this just break my heart now that we know the outcome of things.  Well written and I love the characterization of the priest.

Author's Response:

Don't they though? If I'd had the foresight to write this back in Season 2 it would have been a fluffy feel-good fic.

Now it's just kind of bittersweet. *sigh*

But I have faith that our boys will get back here someday.

Barring that, I have an armory full of toys Dean would like and Sam's mad google.maps-fu skillz. Eric had better think carefully before he decides how to end this story of his. ;)

Thanks for the awesome review! :D

M

 

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 23/11/09 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 1

I liked it and enjoyed the characterisation of the priest and it was intelligently written . I found the stacatto line spacing slightly off putting. It interrupted the flow a little bit. Did you use it for a particualr purpose?

Bird x



Author's Response:

Thanks! Mostly the purpose is that I sort of fail at paragraphing. *sheepish* I'm having a friend look over it for me and maybe see if she can figure out what my short circuit is.

Thanks for the concrit though! I love the happy feedback, but it never hurts to get a little spit and polish when my story needs it.

M

 

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 23/11/09 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 1

I liked the idea that they might run into someone else John had saved.  It was nice to have someone else offer some encouragement. 

Author's Response:

It is sort of refreshing to have someone John knew that DOESN'T hate him for some reason, isn't it? :D

And I didn't expect anyone but SamnDean in this fic, but he seems to have been needed. Poor stubborn Sammy. *shakes head*

Thanks for the awesome review! :D

M

 

Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 22/11/09 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 1

Nice touch: Fr. Priestly!  I like that he knew John and knew what the boys needed the Holy Water for.

Author's Response:

I actually didn't expect anyone in this fic but Sam and Dean, but then Fr. P just sort of showed up. I think I like him. :D

Thanks for the awesome review! :D

M

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