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Reviews For Smoke And Mirrors
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 08/01/10 09:09 PM · On: Take From Me What I Take From You

Souxie,

another great story.

like the Dark Angel reference; X5 and then X5-494 and Smart Alec.

good job.

Renee

Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 05/01/10 10:56 PM · On: Take From Me What I Take From You

awesome story. Your desciptions are so vivid that there was never any doubt in my mind which Sam and Dean you were referring to at any one time. No mean feat  as I'm easily confused at christmas time!

thanks for a great story, looking forward to the next.

P.S. love them eyerolls!

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 05/01/10 07:55 AM · On: Take From Me What I Take From You

Thanks for another brilliant story, i really enjoyed this one, Alt Dean's right about our Sam and Dean, they do need to stick together and start trusting each other again.

Reviewer: karmyn31 (Signed) · Date: 04/01/10 04:16 AM · On: I Told You So

Holy Crap! Cliffhanger! Love it. And the Deans fighting. Can't wait to see how it all ends.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 03/01/10 12:40 PM · On: I Told You So

Ooh, evil cliffie, can't wait to find out what short haired Sam is up to.

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 03/01/10 10:15 AM · On: I Told You So

What the frack?? Who is Short haired Sam aiming at? Larissa? She's the only one who can send them back, so I'm not sure why he want to shoot her. Our Dean? but why? Because he tried to beat up alternate Dean??? Very curious! I just loved the visual of the 2 Deans fighting, sigh...I can't wait 'till we find out who alternate Sam is trying to shoot!  

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 03/01/10 08:37 AM · On: I Told You So

Uh-oh another cliffhanger. Just what is short haired Sam doing with the colt? Trouble is I think I know and it isn't good news for our Sam.

Hope you don't keep us waiting too long for the final update. 

In case I forget to mention it at the end of the next update, this story has got better and better as its gone along and it had me hooked from Chapter One.

Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 03/01/10 05:06 AM · On: I Told You So

short-haired Sam raised the colt! WTH! you can't leave it there! whats next?

 On the upside, love the visuals of the two Deans fighting. waiting impatiently for your update.

Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 30/12/09 11:21 PM · On: Here's A Demon, There's A Demon, And Another Little Demon...

WOW! Don't know how that happened, I blinked and missed this update. don't worry about responding to reviews, with updates like this your forgiven. Happy New Year

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 30/12/09 04:03 PM · On: Here's A Demon, There's A Demon, And Another Little Demon...

Fantastic update, so did Sam get nasty Urobach or maybe it's a bit to easy, can't wait to find out.

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 30/12/09 10:20 AM · On: Here's A Demon, There's A Demon, And Another Little Demon...

Amazing chapter and a fabulous end. I loved that our Sam got to be the one to fire at Urobach. Just hoping it did the job and Uroback is dead for good.

Unfortunately a little bit of me is thinking that it might just have been too easy and the brothers are all unscathed, so that doesn't bode well for the success of Sam's shot.

Damned it feels a very long way 'till Sunday.

Have a great New Year.

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 30/12/09 09:56 AM · On: Here's A Demon, There's A Demon, And Another Little Demon...

Yikes! Is he telling the truth? I hope it's dead, but somehow I doubt it. I love how alternate Dean is beginning to act more like our Dean, he just can't help himself because he is Dean! Looking forward to the next part.

Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 28/12/09 02:18 AM · On: Bring On The Dancing Girls And Put The Champagne On Ice

love the competition between the two Deans, of course our Dean won! can't wait to see how differently the two sets of Winchesters approach this hunt. great job.

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 27/12/09 10:38 AM · On: Bring On The Dancing Girls And Put The Champagne On Ice

I hope their plans work and they can get the alternate Winchesters back to their plane of existence! I absolutely love the two Deans trying to up one on each other over the Karma Sutra chapters! Tee hee, figures that our Dean would come out on top (oops!!). Can't wait till the next chapter.

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 27/12/09 09:58 AM · On: Thank You Sir, Please Come Again

Go figure! It would be our Dean to offer himself up to save Sam even if it was alternate Sam! I'm glad that alternate Sam is alive even as Dean says he is a dick in away. Hopefully, that will be all the half demon demands of Dean. Looking forward to the next part.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 27/12/09 08:11 AM · On: Bring On The Dancing Girls And Put The Champagne On Ice

Two excellent chapters, still loving this story.

Merry christmas.

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 27/12/09 05:56 AM · On: Bring On The Dancing Girls And Put The Champagne On Ice

You're leaving it there - how dare you, it's just getting interesting - well even more interesting - I want more now! Not tomorrow, not next week, now, now, now!

In case you haven't got the message, I'm loving this story. 

 

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 24/12/09 04:40 PM · On: Thank You Sir, Please Come Again

I just knew you'd kill the duplicate Winchesters and so you have - well one of them anyway - but I'll admit to not expecting him to come back and certainly not for it to be our Dean making the deal. 

I must take my hat off to you, for constructing such a convoluted story with double Winchesters, two demons and parallel universes. Talk about making your readers work their brain cells to keep track of all that's happening, but I think I'm keeping up and loving the challenge. Keep it coming and I'll keep working.

Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 23/12/09 04:35 PM · On: Thank You Sir, Please Come Again

thanks for a great update. Have a great christmas and if you don't celebrate christmas then have a great weekend. Good luck with the hangover, I know I'm gonna need it!

Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 20/12/09 05:38 PM · On: As We Forgive Those Who Trespass Against Us

so is Larissa really  agood guy or do half-demons lie too?  And just how many Winchesters in alternate realities are there?  And why can't I meet one?

Can't wait to see what happens when they're all together.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 20/12/09 01:16 PM · On: As We Forgive Those Who Trespass Against Us

Brilliant chapter, really enjoyed this one.

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 20/12/09 01:04 PM · On: Knock Knock

Whoops, I'm way behind on reviewing this thing. But I still love it! The tension between the two pairs of brothers is perfect, distrust and an anger that (and I may be reading too much into this) feels almost a little like jealousy.

Somehow, I can't decide whether or not to trust Larissa. I want to - the idea that a half demon could stick it in the eye to the rest of them is so appealing, and what it would mean for both Sam and Dean is great, but somehow... I dunno. I don't like her. I mean, I love to hate her. We'll see!

 

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 20/12/09 11:07 AM · On: As We Forgive Those Who Trespass Against Us

Gulp, I was thinking the same thing.  Here we have all the players in one room! I'm hoping that all of them can get out of this mess. I like the idea of how Larissa tried to show Sam how things could have been different. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 20/12/09 10:52 AM · On: Guns Don't Kill People, Demons Do

Oh no. Alternate Sam seems to be hurt pretty badly here. I love that Larissa was actually trying to help people for free. I guess all four of them really do need to work together.

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 20/12/09 10:40 AM · On: Better The Demon You Know

I have nothing against the other Sam, so far. So, the alt Winchesters are in a bit of a spot. I wonder how they will get out of this one. Did they get they were called "alt" Winchesters by the demon? Looking forward to reading the next chapter.

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