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Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 29/04/13 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 6

A wonderful story!  And the ending was perfect--- trust restored in one another, themselves, and the future good their Triad would do.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 29/04/13 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 5

I didn't expect all three boys to be attacked at the first meeting.  Fabulous!  I can't wait to finish reading.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 29/04/13 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 4

Pastor Jim?!  Fantastic!  Now Dean will have to realize this is what's meant to be and accept his role as The Guardian.   

In the first stories I didn't like Joshua because he was unkind to Caleb and didn't have the moxy to stand up against others for what he believed.  As time has passed he's grown into a very steadfast and reliable member of The Brotherhood and earned my respect (as well as that of Caleb, Sam, and Dean).

Great comment about Jethro Tull!

Dean shrugged his shoulders.  "I'm delegating."  Looks like Dean's already slipping into his leadership role. 

 

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 29/04/13 07:07 AM · On: Chapter 3

Great chapter!  The little ways that the women insert themselves in the previously all male household is nicely done.  I like that Caleb has mixed feelings; being uncomfortable in a home in which he'd lived, appreciating the tea and the encouragement from Esme and Jocelyn and most of all recognizing his father's happiness and putting that above all else.

Slowly but surely Dean is coming around, too.  Dean isn't used to wanting things for himself so it just might take Mac's recent marriage and happiness for the first time in years for Dean to step up.  And Caleb sees that.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 29/04/13 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 2

Oooooh!  Very intriguing- a monster that takes the form of their mothers (or maybe possesses their mothers?).

I love the turmoil within the soon-to-be Triad.  I never really though about Joshua and Caleb being the only ones who've accepted their future roles in The Brotherhood.  As for Dean and Sam- it's one thing knowing you're going to be the Triad and quite another to step into those shoes. 

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 29/07/10 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 1

Yay!  I'm glad Mac and Esme finally made it official.  And I'm excited to see how the next Triad works together and what trials they face.  And, of course, if Cullen and Jocelyn hook up.    ;^)

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 01/01/10 03:13 PM · On: Epilogue

:-) Loved it, and can't wait for the next story of the new era...

Reviewer: lynne88 (Signed) · Date: 28/12/09 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 6

Thanks for the New Year's present. Very nice job - can't wait for the next installment.

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 28/12/09 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 6

Yessss! The Triad, the Guardian, yesss! And when I was in NYC, I sat on one of theat mushrooms, lol. Thankfully I saw no rats! Anyway, waiting for the wrapping up, probably next year right. So have a nice and fun slide into 2010, see you soon. 

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 26/12/09 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 5

Wow, vicious baddie we have here. What worse for our boys than someone using their mothers appearance. Great chapter, looking forward to next one. Happy Holidays to you and your loved ones. 

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 22/12/09 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 5

please update soon! glad they found out who the bad person was lol, happy holidays!!

Jess

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 14/12/09 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 4

Liked that chapter. Curious to learn more about the kids, glad to see Joshua and Sam talking. And as always waiting for more!

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 14/12/09 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 4

aw I loved the end of this chapter, wow pastor jim? this'll be an interesting story

 Jess

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 14/12/09 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 3

Can't get enough of Dean and Caleb. And happy for Mac. And onto next chapter.

Reviewer: GreyCat (Signed) · Date: 07/12/09 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 3

I'm getting more and more curious with every chapter Tidia!

Dany

 

 

Reviewer: red11 (Signed) · Date: 29/11/09 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 2

Ohhh, Another Story. Great start on both chapters. Hope you have a happy holiday season and I look forward to the next chapter. Thanks!

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 29/11/09 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 2

Great chapter! So Dean sees dead people now... And Caleb and Joshua. :-) Looking forward to next chater.

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 28/11/09 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 1

Just married, awesome! So we're there huh, the new Triad is about to raise. I can't wait to see that!

Reviewer: GreyCat (Signed) · Date: 28/11/09 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 2

And I thinking this was just about the how the new triad begun! 

Children spirits? You just spike my curiosity Tidia. Can't wait for the rest, hope you update soon.

Dany

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 27/11/09 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 2

oooo I liked this, excited to see what happens next...update soon please! :)

Reviewer: Rhesa (Signed) · Date: 21/11/09 11:11 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great start. Im hooked. So glad Mac and Esme tied the knot, and as always love that jocelyn and Cullen have Josh and Caleb worried. Its so good to see JOsh again.

 I love how you included the effects of Jo and Ellen's deaths here, especially on Bobby, who clearly was close to Ellen in your AU. I love how Sam was willing to step up for redemption, and love how Dean is so worried that he's not ready with the way things are. Can't wait for more

 

Best wishes

Rhesa



Author's Response:

Thanks!  This has been quite a project for me, but it is fun and there is a lot going on, too

 

Tidia

Reviewer: GreyCat (Signed) · Date: 21/11/09 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great start Tidia! I'll be, eagerly, waiting for the rest!

Dany



Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 21/11/09 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 1

Nice start. Can't wait for more.

You and Ridley are the only writers this season that I can't resist reading even when I may get 'spoiled' because the clues you give are so small in relation to scale of the universe  you have built so successfully.

 

 



Author's Response: Wow, thanks-- we work hard to build and maintain the AU :)

Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 21/11/09 03:05 AM · On: Chapter 1

Momentus occassion - so thrilled that you are writing this Tida. Satisfy's my curiosity AND feeds my Brotherhood fix - :)

 

The easy flow you have when you write about this family of hunters is so wholesome and well rounded I just kind of loose myself in it. And then you write an action piece and I remember how well you "pen" kicks ass!!! LOL

Thanks for the read. Abi

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 20/11/09 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 1

haha I loved the end of this chapter, looking forward to the next update tidia, just one question, what season does thistake place in??

Jess



Author's Response: Next week-- I hope with the Thanksgiving Holiday :)

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