OK ..I waited again until I saw where you were going with the story.AWESOME JOB!!!!
I like your style of writing and the way you portray Gordon. He is truly on my hate list since Blood Lust.
You have a definite grasp of Dean's "big brother- mother hen " mode .You have captured the boys ways and actions-QUTSTANDING!!!!!
I like the addition of the hillbilly hotel clerk- that by itself would make me nuts!!!
Kudos to the twist of Bobby texting- not his style at all-EXCELLENT writing
Author's Response: Thank you. I got such great response with koo koo gordon that people wanted more so I gave them a little something more. I'm glad your liking it so far. ~Thanx Charity