Hey there! Welcome to the fray! LOL
I have been fiercely avoiding S4 and 5 fic, but I thought I'd give this a look, since it's your first post here.
"Sam nodded but he couldn’t get the image out of his mind. He had crushed his brother’s neck like he was a bug and as he watched, Lucifer was whispering in his ear: You will say yes." I actually think Sam finding out Lucifer had killed Dean while possessing him is a really good reason to tell Sam what happened in 2014. He'd never agree to house Lucifer if he knew it would result in his brother's death. I'm glad you let him find out here.
"He was filthy with other people’s blood and no amount of scrubbing could ever remove the dark stain from his soul." Wow. Powerfully said. And such a sad image--Sam in the shower, sitting and crying. Heartbreaking.
Loved that Sam overheard Dean's conversation with Cas and the boys talked. I'm glad Sam believed Dean, too.
“He’s the freaking prince of lies!” Yes--I wish they'd point this out on the show! People keep taking what Lucifer says as truth.
"“Hey Dean,” Sam’s voice was slightly slurred. “What do you think the road to redemption is paved with?” Dean smiled. “Lots of ass-kicking, I hope.” LOVED this ending. Great question, and perfect Winchester response.
Good writing! And again--welcome! *hug* (Also, don't be discouraged if you don't get many reviews, they are very hard to come by here, especially when you first start posting.)
Thanks so much! And again, thanks for helping me out the other day.
I'm just wondering why you've been avoiding S4 & 5 fics. I really feel honored that you read mine!
Thanks for the heads up about the reviews. :) I get worried if I don't get reviews but it never stops me from writing!