Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 30/05/10 08:19 AM · On: Chapter 11
Now we know why Dean hates witches so much. Not just because of all the spewing bodily fluids but because they messed up his brother. A great end to a very entertaining and heart-breaking story! Thanks Spela!
Author's Response: ahahha, yeah, I just had to include that Dean's hate of witches! LOL..it just made sense! LOL thank you sooo much babe! thank you for taking your time and reading this and reviewing every chapter! *hugs you* thank you! and I'm really happy that it was entertaining! :) love, S.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 30/05/10 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 10
What the hell happened?!
Author's Response: :O I don't know! *laughs* S.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 30/05/10 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 9
so that's what he saw! How devastating! Exactly what he feared had come true (or at least he'd been made to believe it was true). John, get your butt back in that motel room!
Author's Response: yeah, that's what he saw! poor Sammy! John is on his way... he has to take care of his baby boy! :) hugs, S.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 30/05/10 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 8
It was like his skin was crying shadows of the rain drops. cool visual! I wondered when we'd find out whether the witch was a man or a woman. Dean constantly referred to the witch as 'she' but Sam saw a man die. That made all sorts of thoughts swirl in my brain.
Author's Response: *giggles* what thoughts!? LOL :)))))) and yup, like I said... nothing is ever what it seems to be! :) hugs, S.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 30/05/10 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 7
Something fell in the bathroom and Dean was just about to ask 'what the hell' when Sam yelled: " 'm fine!" Dean smiled... dork. Too funny! A typical clumsy fifteen year old boy who is growing faster than he can keep up with. All the little remarks about Sam drooling keep reminding me that despite everything, Sam is just a fifteen year old boy. And he and Dean have a typical brotherly bond. Dean smirked… dork.
Author's Response: OMG ARE YOU STILL READING!!!??? :O you don't have too! it's a silly story, really! :))) you'll be disappointed by the end! I can tell you that! LOL yup, a typical clumsy 15 yeah old boy.... heh...and Sam is growing and he's probably not even used to his long limbs and all.. LOL and I just needed something funny in all the angst! LOL yeah...totally...just brothers... no slash anywhere! jeez.. no way! LOL so yeah, they are just brothers who jut happen to spend all days all hours together! :)) hugs, S.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 29/05/10 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 6
As many times as John and Dean say 'I know' you know they're both trying to reassure themselves as much as the other. ...but they were there, along with the smell of the Impala that drowned out the smell of death. A disturbing and vivid sentence fragment that transports us into the story.
Once you smell that smell, you never forget it. ...either he was pissed or he was worried. With his Dad, it could go both ways. So true! A very astute comment. ... riding through a tunnel of trees, tunnel of darkness and Dean thought about where Sam was... stuck in the darkness of unconsciousness. Stuck with that man maybe, stuck with the memories surely and he knew it would be a long way to get Sam back. ... but life does teach you to never assume things. Especially not with your own children. Amen, brother! Capital N, capital EVER. So Sam didn't just watch and evil man die, he was cursed before the creep kicked the bucket? So not fair! Putting us in Sam's head while he was unconscious was unexpected and revealing. I had no idea he was being tortured by his thoughts (or the curse). I thought he was only unconscious. The panic overtook him, overtook his mind and gripped it tight... Dean and Dad were somewhere and he wasn't there. Now we know how terrified Sam is, feel the loneliness and helplessness that he must feel.
Author's Response: yup! yeah, totally.... I mean... well all do that... we say it's okay, just to reassure us more then to reassure someone else! :) yup, Sam was cursed! poor baby! ahhaha....well.... as you'll come to see and learn....in my stories... nothing is as it seems to be! :) coz I'm mean like that! :=) thank you so much, babe! thank you! :) hugs, S.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 29/05/10 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 5
Funny, I've never heard Sam described before as tiny. I suppose that at 15 he was tiny to Dean's 19 year old 6'1" frame. I think it also helped me realize that tiny isn't just a physical size but it can be used to measure experience and innocence. Dean's desire to drive the Impala, feel the comfort she offers, fix Sam is a clever insight here. We all know that that yearning only increases until its a reality. It becomes one of his coping techniques.
Author's Response: yup, tiny can mean sooo much more then just physical appearance! most people forget that! and I just... saw him as this boneless little body, coz I mean Sam (Colin) at 14 was really kind of skinny... and adorable btw.... and I just saw him be tiny! tiny as a physical thing and just how innocent he looks and is and just... I bet he felt really small in Dean's arms... coz Dean didn't know what to do! yeah.. Dean wanted to drive the Impala, because he wasn't able to do anything else and driving the imapa is a coping techique for him, coz it allows him to concentrate on something other then his baby brother passed out! and yes, she provides comfort... and that's maybe what Dean really needed right then! hugs, S.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 29/05/10 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 4
Okay, I can't say enough about how incredible this chapter is! It's... wow!... just wow! You blend the unnatural with the natural of their environment and how the dying of the man affects Sam, how the affect on Sam affects Dean. It's superb! The touch, the hand, the strength, the unspoken I'll fix this, Sam. He leaned into the hand, rearranged his weight so that Dean took the most of it. Trusting Dean to take it all, to support, to fix it. Another beautiful moment where the brothers depend on one another, know exactly what to do to heal themselves and one another. The leaves shhhhhhhed again, and Sam heard the calm down, over the roaring in his ears, calm down over the darkness that he found himself in. What a cool way to say that Dean was finally breaking through Sam's stupor! It was so subtle and yet made a huge difference. It's the beginning of Sam's struggle to rejoin Dean and control his body's responses. Hurt in places he didn't want Sam to be hurt. Awww! How sweet! I know how he feels. you want to be able to protect your baby brother from everything but there are some things you can't stop, some things you can't heal. And that is an awful, helpless feeling. And when Sam's eyes rolled back, when white was all that was seen, when his body swayed and became light, like it didn't have a bond in it, Dean could have sworn he heard the moon say: "You weren't fast enough. he saw, he heard, he felt..." The moon seems to taunt both brothers with the same message: too slow, too late. I like the repetition of that sentiment from chapter one. Sam reaching toward Dean's heart was very compelling. Especially when at first Dean didn't know what he was doing, then once Sam touched him, he began to match his heart beat to Dean's, began to let the soothing presence sink into him.
Author's Response: I don't know what to say! I mean..reviews like this make writing worth it, you know!? thank you so much! you really didn't have to go and read sooo many chapters! :) thank you!!! so much! you got it all...everything I wanted to say... from the trust, the helplesness, the protection, the moon taunting them and just... everything! thank you!
hugs, S.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 29/05/10 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 3
It has been so long since I started this story that I had to go back and re-read the first two chapters. I must have read them late at night when I was tired because my reviews were sparse and didn't come close to expressing the awesomeness of your work. I might even go back and point out some of my favorite parts--- the ones that really grabbed me. Very descriptive! OMG! I felt like I was in Sam's skin... and then I was Dean worrying about Sam. The horror of Sam watching the man cry out to him was exquisite! The ensuing confusion was superb. I could just feel Sam trying to come to grips with what he was seeing, numbing fog taking over his mind. "You hurt anywhere else?" besides your soul? Auggghhh! That just pierced right through me. Dean agonizing over the last little bit of Sam's innocence being taken and his failure at allowing that to happen. "Sam?" he went for a whisper, he went for gentle, he went for an order. It had the right oomph--- whisper, gentle, then order. We knew the exact tone of Dean's voice, knew the emotion behind it.
Author's Response: I can not believe that you went back and re-read it and just... *hugs* hey, even if you just say..I liked it... I'll love it, coz it's a review from you! :)))) thank you!!! well you know me and details and trying to... make the readers see and feel what the boys feel! *hugs* there, there...Sam is okay!!
hehe... Dean's voice can hold so much! even at that age! :) thank you! hugs, S.
Reviewer: GreyCat (Signed) · Date: 19/01/10 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 11
During the first chapters I bother you about not posting fast enough 'cause I was really curious and enjoying this so much and then what do i do? I go completely m.i.a. and completely miss the final chapters (it's official, real life sometimes sucks big time!). But know, finally, I'm starting to put my reading on track (so much to read! I didn't even read the Christmas stories! Ahhhhhhh!). Anyway, I loved this final chapters. Good job soncnica. Dany
Author's Response: HEY!!! awwwww 's cool .... I KNOW ABOUT REAL LIFE.... believe me!!!! so *hugs* thank you for coming back and reading this!!!!! thank you so much! 'm really happy that you enjoyed this .... *beams* hugs, S.
Reviewer: ThePasserby (Signed) · Date: 13/01/10 02:07 AM · On: Chapter 2
wow. just wow. that last line was brilliant.
Author's Response: hey!!!! awww thank you for deciding to read this!!! :)))) awesome!!! the last line?! *runs to read it* awh thank you!!! :)) I hope you'll read the story until the end ;))) hugs, S.
Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 13/12/09 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 11
Enjoyable story. Thanks so much for sharing.
Author's Response: aww don't thank me for sharing.. it's my pleasure! Thank you so much for reading!!!!! hugs, S.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 13/12/09 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 11
Awww, a lovely ending to a great story, i've really enjoyed reading it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! I really loved writing this story.... it was hard at times, but... the boys... I mean, how can you not like writing about the boys!?LOL thank you so much! hugs, S.
Reviewer: GreyCat (Signed) · Date: 30/11/09 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 9
All this time Sam has been "seeing" John? wow! I wasn't expecting that! So, where are those answers? (yes, I want more!) You're going to give those just in the last chapter aren't you o evil one? Look into my eyes, you're felling sleepy, know, when I clap my hands you're going feel a urge to update the rest (yes, the all rest) of this story and you're not going to fight it, you're going to update. *claps hands* So, did it work? ;) I'll be eagerly waiting for the next update. Great job soncnica!" *hugs* Dany
Author's Response: Sam has been seeing John...yup! :)))
there are no more answers... or did I miss anything?! LOL...maybe there are some more answers, but... I don't think so...LOL
mwhahaha...that ain't gonna work for me!!! mwhahahha..... and I have a strange desire to go to sleep btw! LOL
anyways....LOL me updating isn't dependable on me, but it depends on my crappy internet connection! *le sigh*
today 'm having sooo much trouble, it took me 15 minutes for this page to load and I'm not gonna put my fragile mental status through waiting for the page to upload a story to load!! LOL
you'll just have to wait for my connection to speed up more then the speed of a snail it's currently in! LOL
thank you so much for reading the story and commenting! it means so much to me!
hugs,
S.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 29/11/09 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 9
Poor Sam, he really is in an awful place, another two excellent chapters.
Author's Response: hey!!! yeah the poor boy is in a really awful place atm, but... things are gonna change really soon! There are only 2 more chapters to go! thank you so much for reading! hugs, S.
Reviewer: GreyCat (Signed) · Date: 28/11/09 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 8
Great chapter soncnica! But you're still not giving answers, are you? Sam screamed? Where's the rest? Evil cliff....nooo! Better update soon! Come on, you know you want it! Dany
Author's Response: heyo!!!! noup, noooo answers yet! *evil giggle* Sam totally screamed and the rest is.. on its way?! LOL :)))) *bites lip* I so want to update! grr oh what the hell... 'm gonna update right now... you'll probably have to wait for the chapter to be validated! LOL hugs, S.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 21/11/09 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 7
An exciting chapter, so Sam's under a spell, can't wait for more.
Author's Response: YEY!!!! YUP, YUP, YUP *nods* Sam is under a spell.... no wonder Dean hates witches! LOL 'm really happy that you're following this fic! hugs, S.
Reviewer: GreyCat (Signed) · Date: 21/11/09 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 7
Great chapter! It's raining over here so while I was reading I've felt like I was there with Dean, feeling the same way *shivers* And Sam, poor, poor Sammy! So it's a spell? Still loving it oh evil one! :p (and still waiting for that major plot answers) Dany
Author's Response: awesome! raining!? gosh what I wouldn't give for some rain over here too... the weather report says I'll have to wait until Monday! *sighs* yup it's a spell....a very nasty spell.... *giggles* I really LOVE mystery and not giving up the surprise until the very end! but well there are only 4 chapters left to go, so the major plot answer(s) will come sooooon! 'm so happy you're still reading this! hugs, S.
Reviewer: GreyCat (Signed) · Date: 15/11/09 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 6
Ok! I'm sitting on the edge of my chair know! What the eck are you up to? uh? What's wrong with Sam? Oh, right! Major plot questions still not getting answered! Great chapter! I'll be eagerly waiting for the next one (which I hope will answer something, pretty please?) Dany
Author's Response: *giggles madly!* I don't even know which question to answer first! LOL :) What the eck are you up to? uh? *whistles* nothin'
What's wrong with Sam? ummm *bites lip* nothin' LOL I'll update soon! dontcha worry! Everything will fall into place sooner or later! *grins* hugs, S.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 14/11/09 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 6
Another brilliant chapter, the tension of the situation just pulls you in,very gripping.
Author's Response: *jumps up and down* thank you, thank you, thank you!!!! 'm so glad you're liking this!!!! 'm gonna update soon.... gotta fix a few errors in the next chapter and then it's going up! hugs, S.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 10/11/09 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 5
Another fantastic chapter. as for answering major plot questions, i don't think so lol.
Author's Response: LOL thank you for reading!!!!! 'm gonna update soon! maybe today or tomorrow! :))) *grins* hugs, S.
Reviewer: GreyCat (Signed) · Date: 09/11/09 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 5
This was so worth the wait (haunted/waiting for validation chapter and everything), but know I don't know if I'm felling more sorry for poor Sam or if for poor Dean (don't care what he says I still think that Sam wasn't the only one to young for this). Answering major plot questions? As if... you're evil :) . 11 chapters!? And this is only the 5th *screams a little* I'll probably die of curiosity before the end! Dany
Author's Response: ARGH....validation thingy is getting on my nerves! LOL :))) hmmm well Sam was to young to see that, because (doesn't wanna reveal the big plot surprise)but Dean was totally okay with seeing that, becasue well he had seen it lots of times before I think! but that's allthe question of plot so... you'll just have to wait! *evil grin* hahahaa, I'll update today or tomorrow...:))) thank you so much for reading! hugs, S.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 08/11/09 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 2
Beautiful! Very descriptive and emotional. I felt like I was being held tight by Dean, pressed against him with Sam.
Author's Response: heya! thank you!!!!! I so wanted to describe how it is/what it feels like when someone is holding you like that! and it worked!!!! *beams* hugs, S.
Reviewer: GreyCat (Signed) · Date: 07/11/09 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 1
So I tried to read chapter 5 and there's nothing there! Not one single word! (really trying to kill me her aren't you? admit it! ;) ) Hoping and waiting for you to fix this little, tiny problem. Dany
Author's Response: ROFL!!! 'm not trying to kill ya, I swear! even if I did, I would never confess... mwhahaha!!! *sticks out her tongue* I seriously don't know why there's nothing there.... huh... I went to the manage stories page and I saw that the chapter wasn't validated yet... maybe that has something to do with the fact that there's nothing to read! *screams* I don't know how these things work! ummmm.... idk... I'll wait until tomorrow, okay, and I saw you're from Portugal so your tomorrow is my tomorrow too, LOL and if there's still nothing there by then then... I'll put the chapter up again! I loged out and tried to access CH5 and I couldn't ... but when I'm loged in as the author of the story I can see CH5, so maybe it's because the chapter hasn't been validated yet!
so maybe we have to wait for that---for it to be validated! *shrugs* I have absolutely no clue! so hows that sound!? we wait until tomorrow and see!? :)) thank you for telling me this btw... so strange... maybe I'm haunted! *screams* NOOOOOOOO----omg...this is freaky! hugs, S.
Reviewer: GreyCat (Signed) · Date: 06/11/09 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 4
You weren't kidding when you said this was gonna get worst! Damn good chapters! But this evil cliffie? Are you trying to kill me here? Better update soon! You know you want it... come on... Loved it! Dany
Author's Response: noup I was sooo not kidding! LOL but dontcha worry - Dean's gonna make it all better.... in a way, sort of, kind of...! *bites lip* ummmm....yeah.
*giggles* it wasn't an EVOL CLIFFIE!? was it?! *gasps* nooooooooo, it wasn't..... *shakes head* and because I don't wanna kill anyone...especially not you... the next chapter is gonna be up today!
thank you so much for reading! hugs, S.
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