Reviewer: CastielFaii (Signed) · Date: 27/12/12 09:52 PM · On: Prologue

Can't Wait For More 

Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 16/03/10 07:02 AM · On: Father Son... Stuff

Hi there, just popped in to read a shortish chapter to see what the story is about. Its a good plot from the small amount I have seen but you do have a LOT of spelling errors, do you have anyone to beta for you?

When I have more time I will read this from the start, which I guess I should have done first...lol, but you said you needed input and I know it really does help when a reviewer points out my errors. That way, hopefully we will get better and maybe then attract more reviews/readers.

If I can help at all contact me though the 'contact me' bit on my profile :) (I am only passable at the punctuation/grammar thing though!)

Jacq

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 05/11/09 11:38 AM · On: Reunited

haha its Sam lol loved it!

 

Jess

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 05/11/09 11:28 AM · On: A Quest For Answers

short chapter...hm it was a good one!

 loved it!

 Jess

Reviewer: kezza2kerri (Signed) · Date: 02/11/09 12:45 PM · On: Reunited

i think this is good would like to see dean get involved though but cant wait for the next chapter