:: Supernaturalville

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 12/11/09 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 11

Ok ... this was the best !!!!!!!
I'm still wiping my eyes from the tears of laughter from the 2 bet scenes.AWESOME JOB!!!!!!
Sammy in the nude -oh boy......that certainly makes the day better......
Dean with a blow up male doll-tooooooooooooooooooooo much-I'm still laughing at the visual that put into my head.
the song won't stop playing in my mind- OUTSTANDING writing!!
I liked everything about this story...especially how you turned it around...EXCELLENT storytelling!!!
You have an interesting atyle and you have a good handle on the Winchester way.
another story with these characters would be great!!!!
MORE PLEASE!!!!!

BRAVO!!!!

Author's Response: I have another in the works that's waiting to get validated but not as light hearted. It features crazy Gordon again it's a dark fic so be prepared. I'm glad you liked my light hearted fic and my turn around.~Thanx Charity

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 10/11/09 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 2

oh god a bet haha, I think dean will win...but idk...haha from what you told me

Author's Response: I know I had to throw something in there to tie it all together but it get's juicer and the plot thickens but you never know who will win I make people ponder I'm evil~Thnax Charity

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 10/11/09 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 1

lobster head...hah! so funy, anyway, if you need a beta im free now so I can do it for you:)
jess

Author's Response: Lobster head came out of no where and will be used often. I'm going to finish up my other story and try to write new things so that's in store. ~ Thanx Charity

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 05/11/09 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 6

I waited until now to review because i wanted to see where you were going with this story.AWESOME JOB!!!!!!
you have gotten the banter between the boys spot on.I like your style and dialog-you have captured the boys brotherly ways perfectly.OUTSTANDING!!!!!
you have built up the drama with style and ease-I love it!!!!
MORE PLEASE!!!!!
BRAVO!!!!!!

Author's Response: Yea I just kicked the bucket around the plot but I finally gottne to it and i'm writing more so stay tune thanx ~charity

Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 04/11/09 05:48 AM · On: Chapter 1

This is a good begining, your layout is good and it is easy to read, it outlines the plot basis and I reckon you do the 'Brother banter' quite well. (Better than I do!) Nice chapter...onto the next, between phone calls at work...lol
Jacq

Author's Response: Actually it's my first try so I take it I did ok lol thanx ~charity

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