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Reviewer: Star (Signed) · Date: 10/08/10 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 1

Been trying to get this review done for days. Seems my internet is possessed and the masterplan of that black-eyed son of a b**** is to never let me review this story. Lol!

I'm not sure what gives you the opinion that I'm not as dangerous as my brother, but I suggest you change your mind. Seriously loved this line because people usually think because Sam chooses the path of least resistance that he is not as dangerous as Dean but I beg to differ.

But I kinda get where Deb is coming from because when you don't know Dean it often seems like if he is uncaring and brash and a hard-case.

Love this! Bring on the next chapter!

Reviewer: Armybrat (Signed) · Date: 11/12/08 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 6

i love this whole series but please let them be together?

Author's Response: hm...aw, army, no worries I think these two are pretty much inevitable.  Plus I"m too much of a sucker for a happy ending not to keep them together ;) Thanks for caring - kel ;)

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 29/05/08 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 6

i love this series... well, i love everything this evening...

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 29/05/08 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 3

you already had a nice dynamic between Dean and Sara, even if only over the phone... And you know, Deb was a good character, maybe in a future story... Another meeting between Dean and her could be fun... If you re-write a Sara story one day of course... After a few months of begging... ;)

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 29/05/08 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 1

of course he'll answer when it's Sara calling... hey there, it's me! Doing a little Sara pilgrimage... And noticed i haven't reviewed this first chapter, bad bad me...

Reviewer: PropGal (Signed) · Date: 21/04/08 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 6

hehe. Since I got an "A" for the last one, thought I should try again for that A+.  lol!  I absolutely loved slightly drunk deb in the middle of fight in the basement.  

Author's Response: LOL, slightly drunk Deb is based on an old friend...glad to see she gave you a laugh.  You got that A + hands down for working your way through the series...catch you later - Kel

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 17/02/08 04:08 AM · On: Chapter 5

Great update - but did you really mean 'emancipated to the point of nothingness'? Emancipation means to be freed from anothers control!

Author's Response: LOL, Cal, I feel like I owe you a pair of steak knives for finding that mistake.  you're right emaciated works much better...  ;)  Kel

Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 01/11/07 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 6

I've been doing what I guess you'd call catch up reading, things posted before I tumbled into this site, so just found this.  I've read the other stories with Sara and I really like them, love the idea of Dean with a steady flame, especially one that still lets him be Dean!  Thannks for the fun!

Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 31/10/07 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 6

Loved it!! Off to the next one now. LOL. 

Author's Response: Hey I know I don't know you but I think I love ya...lol.  Two stories in one night and now you're off to awake..lol.  Too sweet - thanks K

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 14/10/07 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 6

Good job!  Very entertaining story.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 14/10/07 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 5

I like the banter between the brothers and it was good to see Sara join in.

I can't believe Deb knew about the body the entire time the others were searching for it.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 14/10/07 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 4

A basement?!  Kind of a big thing to forget.  I can understand how it was overlooked and also why it angered the Winchesters.

I'm glad Sara made an appearance.  Hopefully she'll bring out the more human side of Deb.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 14/10/07 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 3

Geez, poor Deb.  I know she's said some stupid things, but she's pissed off both Winchesters.  I'd hate to be her!

You picked the perfect undercover assignments for them.  Ususally Dean gets stuck as a janitor, but a gym teacher is perfect.  Funny that Sam isn't coping very well.



Author's Response: Ah.. you have to love Deb.. poor thing is so out of her element. Glad you're still enjoying - K

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 14/10/07 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 2

Wow!  Sam really surprised me.  I know he sticks up for his brother, but he was pretty angry.  I think I like it!

I love that your stories are full of action and emotion.  You keep a good balance.



Author's Response: Thank you so much, I always try to balance my stories like the show, never too much of one or the other.  Glad to see it's paying off.  Thanks for the review - K

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 14/10/07 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 1

Exciting beginning!  I'm off to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks Shannon, hope you enjoy - K

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 13/05/07 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 6

kept catching references to sara in other stories of yours....but never have read the main event .....  not sure how I feel about our sexy boy with a 'mother of 3'  .....great story line though...loved it as usual

Author's Response: Thanks much, if you're interested it's called Thank You.  Imagining Dean with a mother of three is just a fantasy of mine. LOL Glad you enjoyed Milton - K

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 10/05/07 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 1

interesting start, can't wait to see where this leads! bambers;)

Author's Response: Thanks Bambers hope you like it, I know you're one of my favorite authors - K

Reviewer: whitewave (Signed) · Date: 03/05/07 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 6

What a great story.  It was nice to read one that was a little lighter and really funny. Great job as always.  Jenny

Author's Response: Thanks Jenny you can usually count on me for lighter, I always feel guilty for putting the boys through the rough stuff. - LOL  K

Reviewer: whitewave (Signed) · Date: 03/05/07 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 5

Only you would have an officer stop by to flirt and miss the body wrapped in the tarp -- very funny!  Still love what you have done with Deb.  Having her drunk and finding the body was so great. Poetic justice for all her bitching too.  Loved the line about still being afraid of him even when she imagines him naked.  Great chapter -- Jenny

Author's Response: Thanks Jenny, Everyone loves a hapless cop, LOL -K

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 01/05/07 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 6

Awww I'm a sucker for happy endings. I loved it. I love your stuff!!!

~Kayla



Author's Response:

Thanks much Kayla, I really appreciate the fact that you take the time to review.  Thanks again. -  K

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 01/05/07 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 5

You know, if I were deb, I would most certainly keep Sam company...hell, I would push Sara out of the way to keep both of my boys company. lol. excellent chapter!

~Kayla



Author's Response:

Thanks Kayla, I'm glad you enjoyed.  I agree with you Deb's and A** for not trying - LOL  K

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 01/05/07 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 4

I'm loving this story! What a wonderful chapter. You've got a real winner on your hands here. :0)

~Kayla

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 01/05/07 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 6

Great story. Glad to see that Deb could actually loosen up! I knew I liked Sara, and her facility with language just makes her even more attractive!



Author's Response: Glad you liked it I didn't expect it turn out so lighthearted. Thanks for the kind reviews. - K

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 01/05/07 04:39 AM · On: Chapter 5

   i think Deb is funny in some hysterical and drunk way... And it's also great that she's so not attracted to Dean, makes it even better. OK, waiting for the next chapter, don't need to tell you to hurry, you're probably the faster updater around here. Until your insomnia period will end...

Author's Response: Thanks much Fredo, Not sure how Deb can resist Dean but there's no accounting for taste, right?  LOL - K

Reviewer: whitewave (Signed) · Date: 30/04/07 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 4

Wanted to let you know I like the way you have developed Deb's character in the story.  She could be a non-entity, but instead she is a strong person who isn't dealing well with being out of control and lashes out at the very people who are trying to help her.  Made the story more interesting that way.  Making Dean do the outdoor gathering on Helmit Safety one such point. Her way to make him deal with his request -- funny. 

Of course Sara and Dean were great as always.  Loved the scent of vanilla and Sara's only being relaxed when she's with Dean.



Author's Response: thanks much you're comments mean a lot. - Hope you enjoy the rest of the story  - K

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