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Reviewer: whitewave (Signed) · Date: 29/04/07 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 5

OOh, nothing like being in the dark and not knowing what you are going to touch: rats, garbage, dead bodies - Yikes! OK I still like Myrtle -- the bra was great :)

Author's Response: I have a feeling Myrt and Dean would have hit it off it she was 50 years younger, LOL - K

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 29/04/07 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 5

YIKES! Skinned alive - definitely not a pixie! Well, the pixie could be bringing the food right? Why do I get the bad feeling that Dean's smart mouth is going to get him into trouble here....

Author's Response: Yeah, I know Yuck right. LOL - K

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 29/04/07 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 4

Oh my god! I cannot wait for the next update!
~Kayla

Author's Response: Hold on Hold on I'm typing as quickly as I can - LOL K

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 29/04/07 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 3

Oh no! Dean!!!! He's going to be okay right?
~Kayla

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 29/04/07 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 2

Aww, wonderful chapter! I'm now officially hooked. :0) I would comment more, but I need to kep reading!
~Kayla

Reviewer: whitewave (Signed) · Date: 29/04/07 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 4

Smart of Sam to try to figure out what was going on rather than search without any idea what he was looking for.
Oh no, not another cliff hanger -- Who do the eyes belong to? Are they alive or dead? Are they those who were taken earlier? So many questions so few answers LOL Seriously, nicely done as usual. Can't wait for the answers. Jenny

Author's Response: Got to try and keep you all guessing Jenny - Thanks for the review - K

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 29/04/07 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 1

great start!

Author's Response: Thanks much, -K

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 29/04/07 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 4

Great chapter! Thank you for the latin translation - I've been meaning to google it but never quite got there. Things are certainly heating up. Why do I get the feeling that things are going to get more complicated?

Author's Response: Glad to help, I'm happy you're enjoying it. - K

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 29/04/07 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 3

Sorry, sent that last one before I remembered to say how much I enjoyed the boys tug-of-war over the front seat - very nicely written. Also love that Jeanie is so much like Dean - how could Sam not fall for her?

Author's Response: Thanks it works for me that Sam would like a little brashness in a girl after so many months spent with Dean - K

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 29/04/07 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 3

oooohhhh - Dean carried off by the pixies? Maybe not pixies.... Can't wait to find out where our dear boy has gone.

Author's Response: I just posted again, and he's about to find out. - K

Reviewer: whitewave (Signed) · Date: 29/04/07 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 3

Liked how you started off with a sweet couple who reminded me of my folks (also full time RVers). Nice to have Sam attracted to the female this time too. Then of course Dean disappears which always heightens the suspense. Looking forward to more. Jenny

Author's Response: Thanks much Jenny, don't get too attached to the elderly couply yet though - K

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 29/04/07 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 3

hey, you're writing at full speed, and two stories at same time, impressive ! Did you recently sold your kids or something to have all this work done ?! So, this little adventure probably wouldn't restore any love for camping by our brothers ! And be careful, in chapter two you called Jeanie Sara.

Author's Response: Thanks for noticing the slip, I'll go back and fix. Nope kids are still here, I've been writing through the miricle of insomnia. Why lay in bed staring at the ceiling when I can write. - LOL K

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 28/04/07 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 2

Reaaalllly looking forward to Dean's explanation...

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 27/04/07 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great start! Pixies maybe? Don't they have glowing fingers fingers and sharp little teeth....? I'm intrigued already..... why do I think the boys are going to have even less reason to like camping...

Author's Response:
We shall see, Thanks for the review. - K

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