ok i know i know it and it's gonna bug the crap out of me coz i can't for the life of me think of what disney movie that's from. Can you help a girl out and let me know?

This was a good story.  I really liked the way Rachel just meshed right in with the boys.  Keep up the good work.  Hope to hear more from Rachel soon!

it was good, i liked the dialouge and story. My only issue was that it ended kind of abruptly. eccelent writing

Author's Response: It's not over. I still have one more chapter to go. it'll probably be up by this week end. I would't spend so much time on a story to end it like that.....lol. keep a look out. it'll be up soon.

awsome, cool!!!

what ganna happen next with them??? now that the case is over???

they will leave together?!!, she will gone??!!  what???!!!

:):):)

good job

great

hi, deans girl, keep the good job!!!!

i hope t read more ! i like the story

soon, please!!!!

nice you msnaged to stay to the script and eveything good job

please hurry up!!!  i want to read the entire story!  is addicted!!!! by tomorrow please!!!!!!


Author's Response: lol, i'm trying I swear!! The whole thing is still a ways off as I do one chapter at a time and usually work on one chapter every weekend. That's when I have the time. I promise you will have the next chapter by sunday though. Thank you so much for liking it like that and for looking forward to it so much.

funny ending. i love it as usual nice tist on blood marie

good stuff yet again

nice job in caoturing dean's sweet and ******* side

good, but hurry up, i want t finished.

 

Author's Response: lol, I'm so glad you liked it. I'll have the next part up a.s.a.p. I promise. If I could ask, what do you like about it. I find feed back very very helpful in how the sroty comes along so please, if you have anything to say, good or bad, let me know.

good, interesting.... go on!