Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 27/04/10 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 17
HAHAHAHAHAHA. . . i love your intro note very hillarious. This chapter was very comical and it would be cool if it was on a grafiled comic strip. You did well, and thank you for all you have done.
Author's Response: Thanks, I wish I could draw, but sadly that's not one of my talents, but hey, can't be perfect in everything. Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 27/04/10 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 16
what can i say that has not been said. . .this is amazing and whom ever sponsered your story deserves a millioin dollor expense drive to hollywood as well as shoping spree and for you. a scholar mansion all paid with everything. for the fact of a killer kick ass story that i have not finished yet and absorbing its hidden message. thanks love the both of you.
Author's Response: Thanks, this is such an awesome thing you said. Just made my day. Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 27/04/10 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 15
it was filled as every writer would want it to be. filled with different emotions. i like it thank yhou.
Author's Response: Thank you, it is very important to me to hear the emotions I tried to relay came through. Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 26/04/10 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 14
this is so much different fromt her other chapter previous. the shade of color that you have portrayed on Dean is of blue, red and white. he can sense that his one and only son will find his way home, sadness over takes him for the last statement his stupid father bestowed on him with so much pressure, and last but not least is the fact that the md's ae speaking to the both of themas idjits.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 26/04/10 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 14
this is so much different fromt her other chapter previous. the shade of color that you have portrayed on Dean is of blue, red and white. he can sense that his one and only son will find his way home, sadness over takes him for the last statement his stupid father bestowed on him with so much pressure, and last but not least is the fact that the md's ae speaking to the both of themas idjits.
Author's Response: Thanks once again. I like your reviews. Dean is really so much more than just a brother and father to Sam. The two of them have a special bond. John almost destroyed that with what he said, although I'm sure that wasn't his intention. Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 26/04/10 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 13
well thank you and right back at you. for the first time dean finally got an answer that he was missing and that was him being a young father to his only son which was his offical sam. now to repair this factor will be hard. lwts hope that bobby and dean can make this better for the youngster.
Author's Response: Dean needed this so much. He knows what he did for Sam growing up, but never really consider himself anything special. This is going to be hard work for Bobby and Dean. Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 26/04/10 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 12
this was a very dangerous but also perspective point of what sam was capable of proceding in doing. I bet you anything that when the dr. finds out what he was trying to do neither her or bobby nor dean would like that.
Author's Response: You're right, they probably wouldn't. Sam isn't in a very good state of mind. Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 26/04/10 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 11
well, whom ever did that i would like to thank them personaly and i would like to know how one can nominate a perfect writer such as you and others that they also know that im a fanatic fan of theres and they know me. they also thnik that im a nutty goof ball, but like the character of sam . . . anything to make a power pack writer such as yourself and others that i devote my time to read till midd afternoon can call me what ever they wouold like. some of the words where not writen well, so i understand that you may have been tired. this piece is something else, thank you.
Author's Response: Well, I for once like nutty goof balls, so don't worry about it. I'm glad you think I'm perfect, although I know there are a lot of writers out there that are much better. I do enjoy writing though. And yes, sometimes I get stressed or tired and I make more mistakes. English has been my primary language for 20 some years, but it isn't my first one. I'm so happy you are enjoying this. Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 26/04/10 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 10
i do, can i ask a ? whom is. . .and i ddon't mean to break any rules or be disrespectfulbut whom may i ask is vonnie. . .funny you put an i in front and you have me my true name. anyways sorry, i do love this story. im so tired but i cant leave it for i am afraid that if i co it will no longer be ther when i come back and i do want to finish it. Thnak you in case i have not stated it before, i will one day.
Author's Response: You certainly can ask. My real name is Yvonne, but I have been called Vonnie ever since I was little. So our names are pretty much the same. And I promise you my story isn't going to disappear. It will stay right here. Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 26/04/10 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 9
i do like it but it hurts so much. . .it just reminded me of a very close sister that is sleeping a lot more and she is playing the character of sam and i am dean in some way. that again is another story. this is embracfull and power pack that i fell that i was once again tossed by the amtrack, but didnt survive. i do respect u as a creative story and i think i can consider myself as a huge fanatic starving for more creative stories like this one. very heart felt thank you. let there be no more pain forthe brother's pleasw if you can. sinc e you are the professional and creative writer.
Author's Response: I'm sorry that this story is bringing you so much pain and it is already mostly posted, so there won't be a changing it. I do promise a happy ending though, as in my stories the brothers get through everything. Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 26/04/10 04:09 AM · On: Chapter 8
i do like this very much, but this terrrorized me and i can place my self in the mind of the character of sam. it is as if i am also senseing the defeat and the structure that the image beholding infront of him was dean and letting him know what he done. . . the sense in me feel that it is me and my mother. that is another story. i am so much like sam. i don't know how to feel for the things i once had to what i have lost. i would like to ask so kindly if i can get a copy of it and when ever i feel alone i can read for confort thanks.
Author's Response: I'm sorry for whatever you had to go through. You certainly can have a copy of this, if it makes you feel better. I feel honored that you feel that way and it is good to know that my scribbling is doing something more than just entertain. Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 26/04/10 02:48 AM · On: Chapter 7
okay, now it is scaring the hell out of me. the only place that sam would be in is the car in his birthday suite. hmmmm, not unless he found away to get on top of uncle bobbies house. . . oh you are good . . .
Author's Response: I'm glad I scared you, sorry but it was intentional.Thanks and hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 26/04/10 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 6
this bit was off the wall. the reaction of deans venoums words would seriously destroy sam. What is not understanding is that why did Dean not tell bobby what trully was happening to sam and he was not doing it on purpose. i blame the father for being such a dick to the boys and for telling his elder son that he had to take care of hsi young sibling or kill him what parent whould do that?
Author's Response: This was completely my intention here. Dean is so distraught, he is saying things he really doesn't mean. And yes, it is completely John's fault. Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 26/04/10 01:19 AM · On: Chapter 5
i may have never gone through that, but i can understand where the character is comeing from its like your writing in someway or another me; and i thank u for it.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks, you just made my day. Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 25/04/10 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 4
this was great, i do like the structure of this one and in how revolution around the brother's in tell. ther unity was one that even their father would not be able to take that power of unity form from them.
Author's Response: Thanks and you're right, John would never been able to take that away from them. Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 25/04/10 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 3
thanks, for im the same, but maybe with just one scratch then im pertty much tammed as well. . .thank you for this one it has hit my heart. thanks so much.
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to read and leave me comments. That certainly makes my day. Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 25/04/10 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 2
now there is a first mistake. . .thinking of not telling the youngest that is equaly excessively dangerous. i have a ? if he was out cold, should he not have checked the color of his toung. . .for if it is blue then he may have a serious blow to the head and he may sufficate himslef with his toung. Sorry if i screwed you up with the story i do applaude it though.
Author's Response: Thanks again, you are right, it is never good to not tell Sammy. About your question, you don't have to check the color of the tongue, it won't tell you anything. Just have to make sure that the patient is not positioned on his back, so the the tongue is not obstructing. If you can't move him to the side, then you have to watch so that you can see the chest move. You are not screwing me up at all and I appreciate questions, as sometimes I do make mistakes. Thanks again and hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 25/04/10 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 1
wow, that can happen to many kids. i know this one is going to be a bitch ass story that i may want a copy and applaude you for your intro. you got me by suprise i love it already.
Author's Response: Thanks,nice to see you found my little story and like it too. Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 21/04/10 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 28
Boring? NO, never, actually this chapter was pure bliss for me as Sam and Dean are exactly where they belong, content and in perfect sync with each other; did I love when Dean made it so perfectly clear what his little brother means to him, "Don't even go there...I know what your're thinking, but you're wrong, it is worth it and there is nothing you can do to keep me..." Noting the nod from the older hunter, he corrected himself,"...keep us from sticking with you!" Perfect!
Author's Response: Thanks, once again you make my day. You always know how to say exactly the right thing to make me feel good. Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 19/04/10 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 26
I love Sam on drugs. Poor guy....
Author's Response: Thanks, I do to. Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 10/04/10 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 27
So sweet Dean asked the young nurse to date Sam, tells how much his little brother means to him as this couldn't have been easy for a true ladies man like Dean. But it was the scene in Sam's room when Dean understood why Sam needed to gain back a bit of independency, some control to deal with everything I loved the most cause it showed so well this special connection between the two, they are so attuned to each other - and the icing on the cake was Sam using his puppy eyes on Dean, "He squeezed Sam's shoulder, almost melting at the repeat of the puppy look he received, only this time is was one of thankfullness." Who could resist these eyes? Oh, and about the doc walking out I honestly hope it wasn't because something is seriously wrong with Sam and he only was very tired. Wonderful chap, can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: I'm glad the scene between Dean and the nurse came out the way I intended it to. I really wanted to show how much Sam means to Dean, the same thing later, when he understood Sam's need for independence. This season has torn them apart so much that I can hardly stand it anymore. I just need a good dose of brotherly love. As for the doc, guess you'll have to see. Thanks for another sweet and wonderful review. Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 01/04/10 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 26
Aww, I'm so glad you write about the steps of Sam's recovery, it feels so good to see him getting better!! Totally loved loopy Sam, adorable and Bobby once more did a wonderful job caring for his boy. Get sidetracked as long as you want to with the story, I thoroughly enjoyed it!
Author's Response: Hey thanks, I'm glad that you liked the idea my muse had. Bobby is made of awesomeness, isn't he? Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 16/03/10 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 25
*grin* You really did get them all together somewhere! Awesome!
Author's Response: Yep, couldn't tear them apart again, wouldn't be healthy. Thanks. Hug, Vonnie
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 16/03/10 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 25
After Dean and Bobby so wonderfully helped Sam to clear this final hurdle (and it was a heavy burden for him) by making him see he means the world to them - "We are family and there is no way to get rid of us"!!! - Sam clearly is now on the way to recovery. Also loved very much both brothers told Bobby what an important part of this family he is. Still smiling here!!
Author's Response: Well, its always great to hear I made you smile. They are indeed family and nothing can change that. Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: Micaiah (Signed) · Date: 16/03/10 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 25
Poor Sammy and his ever present guilt and shame. *sniff* I hope that things get back to "normal" for all three guys soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to comment again. I promise the boys will be fine eventually. Hugs, Vonnie
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