Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 20/10/09 03:43 AM · On: Chapter 3
Just read the whole story, that was fantastic, tension, drama and much more, especially loved the gentle personal touches when they both needed to change out of wet clothes. A story that could be read more than once...nice one. Jacq
Author's Response: wow thank you! thank you so much! :) I love me some drama and gentelness.... :) read more then once!? seriously!? *blushes* it wasn't that good of a story, really.... there's something missing, but I just couldn't figure it out so I just posted it! LOL.... so... thank you so very much!
thank you for reading! hugs, S.
Reviewer: marian_dnsg4l (Signed) · Date: 18/10/09 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 3
Oh, this was a great ending! I loved everything, from the description of the cold and Sam's pain and desperation, to Dean slamming the wall with strenght he didn't know he had. That just speaks volumes of how far he would go for his brother. But my favorite line has to be "Something shifted in Sam's eyes. Something from 'I'm scared' to 'I trust you' and Dean was so happy he could scream." --> I loved this. Awesome story, adding it to favorites. :)
Author's Response: heya! favorits!? seriously!? thank you! awesome! because I'm the author of the story, I have to say that this one isn't one of my favorites, but you're the reader so I believe you when you say that it has a great ending and that it's worthy of being favorited! LOL :)) thank you!
yeah, I think that in times when you're really desperate, you find strenght when you've almost given up! you know!? and Dean would do anything for his brother, and I think that he will always find strenght to help Sam!
thank you so very much for reading! hugs, S.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 17/10/09 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 3
Very exciting! You have the expressions and mannerisms of the Winchesters perfectly!
Author's Response: thank you! you made me blush! don't do that! LOL :) thank you so very much for reading! hugs, S.
Reviewer: kiara_ratterjmouse (Signed) · Date: 17/10/09 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 3
Iliked this... classic limp sam... thanks for fulfilling my sadistic need... kiara
Author's Response: mwhahahahahahaah......yes, yes, yes....sadistic..aha aha aha...poor Sammy! But this...this is nothing...yet! *grins*
thank you for reading! hugs, S.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 17/10/09 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 3
That was a very good fic, thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Thank YOU for reading! hugs, S.
Reviewer: GreyCat (Signed) · Date: 17/10/09 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 3
Girl you really like to almost drown Sam, don't you? No, I'm not complaining, as long as you keep putting Dean there to save him you can almost drown him a little more! Needless to say that I really liked this one is it? Dany
Author's Response: hahahah yeah, I do love to 'almost' drown Sam....idk why...hmmmm *thinks really hard* noup no idea! it's just fun! LOL :))) and Dean will always be there to save Sam! thank you! thank you so much for reading! hugs, S.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 12/10/09 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 2
Love how you slowly built up the excitement! And the repetition of the splash and where it touches Sam, how it affects him is great!
Author's Response: splash... yeah.... that was the only thing I had when I started to write this story... I had the word splash and I wanted to write a story using the word... and voila... I did it! LOL hugs, S.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 12/10/09 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 1
“Oh, yeah…duh, I know that.” I had to chuckle at that one! The whole bit about the apple pie was hilarious! I like how his train of thought wanders smoothly from cake to pie to waitress names then back to pie. A very human stream of consciousness. "Lindsay, Linda, Lisa, Theresa, Becky, Clara or something in that neighborhood..." Hilarious! Like Lindsay and Clara sound so much alike. Blame it on the pie! "…you don’t compare any smell to the one of a rotting corpse…it’s just…you shouldn’t even know how a rotting corpse smells like. Just goes to prove how weird their lives really are." Just one more reason the Winchesters are unique. You really brought that out.
Author's Response: BABE! ROFL... ahahahha, well we all know Dean... he's all over the place sometimes and I think that Lindsay and Clara does sound the same to him! especially when he has pie in front of him! LOL :) aww thank you! I really love it that the boys ARE unique like you say... it makes them special! ordinary is boring! :)) thank you for reading! hugs, S.
Reviewer: marian_dnsg4l (Signed) · Date: 12/10/09 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 2
Well, holy crap. What an awesome chapter. Again, loved Dean's rambling to keep the panic at bay, and the way that Sam's bits are in second person gave me a creepy feeling of being there with him. Great touch there. The exchange between the brothers made me happy. I miss the old days when they would have that kind of brotherly banter... Thanks for the lovely reminder. I loved the whole thing. Looking forward to the last chapter.
Author's Response: *laughs* I never made anyone say holy crap before! I like it! phew, okay this is awesome.... I was really worried that me changing ''persons'' will be bad and not work, but phew thank you so much for saying that it worked! this is good, this is great...thank you! aw yeah I miss the brotherly banter soooo much! so so so much... this season is just way to angsty for me! but I love it! awesome... I'll post the last chapter soon! thank you so much for reading! hugs, S.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 12/10/09 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 2
Very mysterious, creepy as well,looking forward to more.
Author's Response: *beams* awesome! I love mystery and creepy stuff... 'm so happy that this is working for you! more soon! hugs, S.
Reviewer: CatzEye (Signed) · Date: 08/10/09 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oooh - very foreboding! - Looking forward to more... I think (shudders...) ;)
Author's Response: hey! *giggles* I hope it won't be that scary, but well you never know! LOL
more soon! thank you for reading!
hugs, S.
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 08/10/09 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 1
Holy crap! Where is Sam? Or is it Dean that has gone missing and he thinks that Sam is the one missing or vice versa? Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: I don't know where Sam is *shrugs and winks* hmmm well Sam is missing to Dean, so I guess Dean is missing to Sam!! LOL :))) more soon! thank you for reading! hugs, S.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 08/10/09 05:08 AM · On: Chapter 1
A great start, looking forward to finding out whats going on.
Author's Response: hmmm, really... what IS going on!? *shrugs* I'll update soon. LOL tnx for reading! hugs, S.
Reviewer: marian_dnsg4l (Signed) · Date: 07/10/09 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oh, cool first chapter! I loved Dean's mental rambling about pie and the waitress, all the while taking note of everything around him. Always the hunter, but always our Dean, too. But my favorite part was the smells that are embedded Dean's memory . Lovely touch. Well, I'm in. I'm really looking forward to the rest of this. :)
Author's Response: GOTCHA! awesome! and thank you so much for pointing out what you liked and what worked for you! I think that when I wrote Dean's rambling about that pie, I was eating a piece of pie and it was sooooo good, that I had to like make Dean describe it....LOL....and yeah, even though Dean rambles about food, he's always aware of his surroundings. more soon! thanks for reading!
hugs, S.
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 07/10/09 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 1
Okay interesting...weird but interesting! Write some more hun! Bird x
Author's Response: I LOVE WEIRD! teehee more soon! hugs, S.
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