Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 19/07/10 03:40 AM · On: Chapter 1

Marvelous!  The confusion of which tense to use makes the piece really stand out in a very Dean-ish way.

Naming all the people who predict Sam's fall, including Sam himself, was a clever way to show how much the odds were against him.  But none of that made a difference.  As long as Dean believed in Sam, he could beat the odds.

But that's not the bad decision I made... Cuz I made a stupid decision   And now I'm gonna    Fix it    The epiphany for Dean.  Most people would have thought of saying yes to Michael before Sam could say yes to Lucifer in hopes that he could kill the devil before the damage was done.  But Dean figured it differently.

And he was able to trick him    Because I left him    Left Sammy like I didn't give a crap   And maybe I didn't    And maybe I thought I didn't   But I do now   Love this passage!