Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 09/05/07 02:20 PM · On: Where
god i'm exhausted to see everyone runnig so much ! Seriously dude, you can install a climate of tension and oppression and mistery. I'm waiting for your next update...
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 08/05/07 10:02 AM · On: Wail
can't believe i missed this chapter two days ago. But if i'd known that you'll leave us with "So he ran", maybe i had refrained myself ! Evil is possessing every writers aroud here...
Author's Response: Comes with the territory :D Evil is a necessary ingredient to be a writer, though it manifests in several different ways. Usually it is just bad news for the characters, but occasionally it overflows and attacks the readers. I've been a long time sufferer of cliffhangeritis :D I'm looking for a cure, honest :D Thanks so much for reading and posting feedback. Hopefully I'll get the next bit finished today. Nutty
(the higher the cliff, the more chance of flying before hitting rock bottom)
Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 08/05/07 05:31 AM · On: Wail
LOL at the old lady with the baseball bat and Sammy taking on a few Deanisms "Yes sir. No of course not sir. Go the hell away sir!". Story continues to keep me hooked!!!! Thanks for posting so soon - especially as your cliffhangers are cruel!!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm afraid Sammy will pick up a few Deanisms from me, cos I actually find Sam a little hard to write and Dean keeps creeping in :D I have a history of cliffhangeritis. I'm still looking for a cure :D Hopefully I can finish of Part 4 today ::eyes the list of errands:: I'll cross some body parts. Thanks for reading and posting feedback. You feed my pen. Nutty
(with a fluffy spider perched on her computer speakers)
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 07/05/07 05:30 AM · On: Wail
Wheee! Great stuff Nutty (may I call you that?) You are describing it so well I can actually see it, and you have the mix of flash back and real time, and the pace, just right. Please refer to my review of chapter 1 to see how accurate my predictions were in relation to my reaction to this story.(hmmm ....that sentence made sense in my head....) Have you checked? See? I love it - and I totally knew I would! Many thanks!
Author's Response: Of course you can ::grin:: I am, in fact, Nutty the slightly unstable dwarf :D But the story behind that would have you questioning my sanity...if I had any. Thank you so much for all your encouragement, hon. I love hearing from you :D I want to know why you don't have any stories to your name. I went looking! ::hugs:: Nutty
(sense is not a requirement)
Reviewer: whitewave (Signed) · Date: 07/05/07 04:44 AM · On: Wail
You continue to slowly drop hints as to what is going on with the flashbacks, yet keep your readers on the edge of their seats with the unbelievable pain that Dean is going through. Wonderful job!!!! Can't wait to see if what I think is happening is right. Love the titles of your chapters, Want, Wish, Wail, each expressing Dean's need to to get out. By the way, how did Dean get out of the room? bathroom window?? just curious. Jenny
Author's Response: I am so mean to poor Dean :D And the fact I'm saying that with a grin is a worry :D The answer to that question is in the first line of the next part. Hopefully I'll have enough time to finish it and post today. Thanks so much for reading and posting feedback. You so feed my pen. Nutty
(catch up on everything day today)
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 06/05/07 02:16 PM · On: Wail
Excellent update! I can't seem to get enough of this story! ~Kayla
Author's Response: Hi, Kayla :D Then hopefully I'll be able to provide you with some more today :D Thanks so much for reading and posting feedback. Nutty
(in need of food)
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 06/05/07 12:33 PM · On: Wail
Another great chapter. I love how you are spinning this out and can't wait to see how all these pieces are going to fit together. The old woman with the baseball bat was worth the price of admission! As always, waiting impatiently for more... And, definitely as much junk food as you need to keep you going (all calorie free of course!)
Author's Response: Neither can I ::off centre laugh:: cAlorie free food is wonderful stuff. I need to invest in its development :D Thanks for reding and posting feedback. You guys are spurring me on. Nutty
(who hopes to write some more today)
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 06/05/07 10:26 AM · On: Wail
Great, Great loving it so far, keep it coming. K
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it. More to come soon. Thanks for reading and posting feedback. Nutty
(before breakfast things get scary)
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 04/05/07 08:50 AM · On: Wish
Verrrry Nice, Keep it coming. K
Author's Response: Thanks and I'm planning too. Nutty
(in search of breakfast)
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 04/05/07 04:46 AM · On: Wish
I would like to think that all of the encouraging reviews you received for your first chapter (including mine!) really spurred you on. Everyone was right of course, (including me!) because this is as awesome as the first chapter! Blind Freddy could see that you have a flair for writing and you should stop worrying. Well done - roll on chapter 3! I want to know why Dean is afraid of Sam!
Author's Response: Oh, yes. ::bows to the Ciel:: I have been spurred (and not a little amazed) by the response I have received for this fic. You're a wonderful group here and I'm thorughly enjoying myself :D Chapter three is rolling and I hope to have it finished today since there is an absence of work (cos I'm planning to ignore a great deal of it :D) Thanks, hon, for all your wonderful encouragement. Nutty
(off the edge, but learning to fly)
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 03/05/07 09:57 PM · On: Wish
What happened to Dean? He's going to be okay right? you really have me wondering here ~Kayla
Author's Response: Good question. As soon as I know the answer, I'll let you know :D But he has a while to go yet. Thanks for reading, and don't worry, I'm not a fan of death fic, just your average whumper :D Nutty
(whose characters always end up glaring at her)
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 03/05/07 07:56 PM · On: Wish
Don't know where you've been hiding this story Gumnut- but I am so grateful that you let it out into the sun for all the rest of us to enjoy. I - for one - am completely enthralled. Hope you don't take long to update cause I sure want to know why the hell Dean is acting the way he is. Awesome story! Quit apologizing for anything!
Author's Response: I don't know where it was hiding either. My muse does pretty much what it feels like. I have little control ::glares at it:: Yes, ma'am ::grin:: I just get irritated when I'm not writing at my best, which seems to be a regular occurence of late. ::glares at self:: Thanks for reading and posting feedback. It is so good t know that you're enjoying my fic. Nutty
(there will be fic! You hear that, you vagrant muse of mine?)
Reviewer: whitewave (Signed) · Date: 03/05/07 02:48 PM · On: Wish
Jesus, what is wrong with Dean? You so have me mesmerized with this story. I like what you are doing by not explaining the reasons things are so messed up with Dean -- It is like we are on the journey with Sam trying to figure out what the hell happened. Great job Jenny.
Author's Response: A lot of things. But then he let me write him, so it's all his fault :D I think I'm on that journey too :D I'm so glad you're enjoying it and thanks so much for reading and posting feedback. You feed my pen. Nutty
(to write or not to write is not a question)
Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 03/05/07 12:47 PM · On: Wish
Why is Dean's pain and deamons so facinating.... certainly how you write it! More importantly - why is he screaming???!!!!!
Author's Response: He has good reason, I promise :D And I'm ignoring the psychology :D I know I'm disturbed, but I'm hoping it's in a good way ::grin:: Hoping to write more today. Thanks for reading and posting feedback. Nutty
(there will be breakfast and Supernatural, but after that? Fic is everything.)
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 03/05/07 12:01 PM · On: Wish
OMG!!! Dean screaming?!! And you left it there???? Are we talking a full week or a business days week? Could we negotiate that to a week with a holiday weekend thrown in? More please, soon! Loved Dean as stubborn unconscious as when conscious. And the image of the dust around his boots after firing the shotgun was beautiful.
Author's Response: But he screams so nicely ::evil grin:: I'm hoping to get some more written today. So hopefully there will be more soon :D I'll do my best. As for the holiday weekend, I'll never say no to that one. Does it come complete with a free reign on junkfood? And yes, Dean is a stubborn little shit at times. Probably just as well, since life thwaps him around the head all the time. And thanks for the comment on the image. I love images like that, but getting them to work in a fic sometimes doesn't. So I'm glad you enjoyed it :D Nutty
(must write today)
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 03/05/07 11:41 AM · On: Wish
so one part per week... no, it's not working for me, not enough ! A second chapter as good as the first one, looks like i'm already hoocked...
Author's Response: Hmm, perhaps we could negotiate...I may get the next bit out early due to time off work..will that help? ::grin:: Thanks so much for reading and posting feedback. You feed my pen. Nutty
(whose brain is asleep at the wheel)
Reviewer: Thru Terrys Eyes (Signed) · Date: 03/05/07 09:03 AM · On: Wish
Very cool....
Author's Response: Thanks! ::bows in reverence to great VS writer:: Nutty
(there will be fic!)
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 28/04/07 01:58 AM · On: Want
TBC? Okay Gumnut prepare yourself for some straight talking here. Ready? Good. You have written two other wonderful fics which I read, enjoyed thoroughly and reviewed glowingly. (please note confident use of a word I am not sure exists) You have made an awesome start on a third fic which already has angst, suspense, brotherly concern and Dean whumpage - so I am obviously going to love it. I am sure times of frustration and anxiety are a big part of a writer's experience, but with my gentle help and encouragement I hope you will now SNAP OUT OF IT! I have every confidence in you. Write on, friend, write on!
Author's Response: Okay ::straightens shoulders and listens attentively:: ::considers the existence of the word 'glowingly' and comes up empty handed:: ::grins at lovely feedback:: ::snaps out of it:: Oooh, thanks, I needed that :D ::thwaps muse across head:: Now all I have to see is if the muse will behave ::glares at it:: Thanks, hon, for your lovely encouragement, and for reading it in the first place. Nutty
(spoilt by all you peoples)
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 27/04/07 07:46 AM · On: Want
TBC ! Of course. I don't know why i so much like Dean's breakdown...
Author's Response: I don't think any of us want to explore the psychology behind our fascination with whump :D So I guess we'll just have to enjoy it instead. Thanks for reading and posting feedback. Nutty
(who intends to be mean to Dean, the poor bugger)
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 26/04/07 10:05 PM · On: Want
You have a very unique writing style, and I gotta say, it's amazing! Great job! ~Kayla
Author's Response: Why, thankyou :D I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for posting feedback. You feed my pen. Nutty
(sleep typing is a skill)
Reviewer: Gobigorstayhome (Signed) · Date: 26/04/07 03:14 PM · On: Want
Do you actually have to ask whether or not you should continue....?!?! Well, in case no one else has mentioned it.....YOU DANG WELL BETTER CONTINUE THIS!!! ;) No seriously, I was so caught up, it was as if I wasn't breathing. You have to finish this before I turn blue and pass out. There is so MUCH!! So much hurt Dean, so much Dean hurting, he needs to let it out, and I want to be there to see it. So in a nutshell, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, let me see what can/does happen next. Great job!!! New (one of them) favorite author. :)
Author's Response: My fic doesn't come with medical insurance, so no collapsing allowed. ::tickles you in an attempt to get you to breathe:: I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much for reading and all your encouragement. Nutty
(planning to write today)
Reviewer: whitewave (Signed) · Date: 26/04/07 03:13 PM · On: Want
Sorry you struggled to get it written -- it was worth the effort. You have me hooked already. You really expressed his panic,his need without ever really saying what has pushed him to the breaking point. It's there and I want more.
Author's Response: Eh, it's just a case of the muse misbehaving and me being too tired from work ::glares at it:: But! I will persist! Thanks for reading and posting feedback. You feed my pen. Nutty
(wakefulness is an illusion)
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 26/04/07 12:33 PM · On: Want
Nice start so far!
Author's Response: Thanks! And thanks for reading. Nutty
(not quite awake yet)
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 26/04/07 11:16 AM · On: Want
tbc? TBC????? OMG - HELL YES! This was fabulous - please, please more. What the h*** is going on with Dean? I love how you have captured what has to be Dean's internal torment. We know he's tired and wants out but has to stay and protect Sam, and we know that Sam isn't really giving Dean his opportunity to lay low and get a handle on things, but this seems like there is even more going on here. Really, really want more - *whine*
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it. It took so much arguing with my brain to get it out, I'm so happy you found it worked for you. Thank you so much for reading and commenting and for your wonderful encouragement. Nutty
(determined to write some today)
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