Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 13/06/07 07:26 PM · On: Why

It is what it is alright nutty - and it's great! Loved the tug-of-war for Sam, and the en masse rescue of Dean ...... after all, he deserves a little supernatural help once in a while! And of course you are exactly  right: Dean Winchester IS worth it, but convincing him isn't easy. Fabulous job!

 

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 13/06/07 11:44 AM · On: Why

That was an excellent ending! Thank you for sharing this little gem of a story! You are amazing!

~Kayla

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 13/06/07 12:45 AM · On: Which

Have to admit to feeling a teeny bit guilty if I was responsible for any pummelling ......aw, heck, no I'm not! Great chapter nutty. It's suspenseful, it's angsty, it's funny..... "Put the fingers down." LOL. 

Can't wait for more, but no pressure ..... seriously! 

Author's Response:

No guilt allowed! At least now I've finished the fic and I have you and few others to thank for that.

Very glad youenjoyed it and I hope you like the ending.

Thanks so much for reading and posting feedback.  You definitely fed my pen this time around :D

Nutty
(hmm, stomach is empty, must go find food)

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 11/06/07 02:06 PM · On: Which

Oh sh**! Out of the frying pan and into the fire as it were.... OMG!

This is an awesome story. Fabulous pacing.... but please, please, please up date soon??!!!

Author's Response:

All updated :D  And all finished.

Thanks for your lovely comments.  I am so glad you enjoyed it.  And yes, I am very evil to our poor boys.

Nuty
(whose fingers are still cold)

 

Reviewer: gaelicspirit (Signed) · Date: 19/05/07 02:22 PM · On: Will

This was great -- why against advice? Perhaps because there was more planned for this part? As long as the story isn't done, which it's obviously not, then all is well. Except for our boys... holy crap.

My suspicions were confirmed... Chrissy did indeed put the evil that was in her into Dean. Whimper. Reaper wraith -- VERY creepy. And I loved how you layered the same description of Dean waking up in the wrecked Impala (oh, my poor Metallicar) and saying he was an excellent tracker, grabbing Sam's coat in much the same way Sam had done in the previous chapter. Nice.

And I particularly love the detail with the little etchings on the pellets. Very clever.

Can't wait for more... In memory and in present, both Sam and Dean are searching and you'll forgive me if I say this... the Truth is out there. ;)

Reviewer: gaelicspirit (Signed) · Date: 19/05/07 02:20 PM · On: Wail

Ach, Nutty... this is getting so good. Not that it wasn't good before. I just mean, oh, hell with it, you know what I mean. I love how you're slowly unveiling the story -- almost as if you know exactly where you're going *wink*.

You had so many great lines in this chapter:

>> And an urgent knock at the door took an extra ten years off Sam’s life.

I know the moment was supposed to be tense, but that made me laugh. I could just see Sam jump as I would have jumped.

>> Go the hell away, sir.

HA! All right, Sammy! You know he's thinking that half the time behind those puppy-dog eyes and sweet smile.

>> Intelligence on the part of scum tended to be confined to the occasional evil genius...

Dude, this line was worthy of Steve Buscemi in Resevoir Dogs. I love it.

Okay, but now... how did Dean get out? Is there a back door to the hotel room? Did he climb out the window? And what were they too late for? Had the human scum like... planted something inside the girl? I have one of those 'very bad feelings' that she doesn't make it in a very, very awful way. Which has to be the trigger for Dean's total freak-out.

Reviewer: gaelicspirit (Signed) · Date: 19/05/07 02:17 PM · On: Want

Okay, so here's the thing. You got me all interested in your LJ site and I totally forgot that you post here as well! So, because I love this fic so much, I wanted to leave you a review here. It may sound familiar. *wink*

 Wonderful, heartfelt -- and heartbreaking. I almost don't care *what* has happened to Dean. It almost doesn't matter (I say almost because I am a cat and curiousity does strange things to me). It could just be this life they lead that is finally, utterly drowning him. I was listening to Breaking Benjamin's "Breath" as I read this and the song mixed with your words and pulled tears from stubborn eyes.

In particular, I loved this line: Tonight they climbed into his dreams and ate away his sleep.

Very vivid. I'm so happy the muse is poking his head around your corner, and try, try to turn a blind eye to the evil time suckage that is Ork. RL may need to be excused once in awhile. We all have our cross to bear. But I'm giddy that you're writing again, and I can't wait for more. I will wait, of course... but I might not be happy about it. ;)

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 16/05/07 09:12 PM · On: Will

Your descriptions are so beautiful in this chapter, both in the flashbacks and in real time. I am VERY worried about Dean! (I'm always very worried about Dean.)

By the way, this review is a bit of a milestone for me.  It was a pleasure to reach this point on your story. Thanks again.

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 15/05/07 07:26 PM · On: Will

ooooh! Another cliffhanger huh? Well, I'm sure you know what I'm going to say...but I'll say it anyway. Great update and i want more please!

~Kayla

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 15/05/07 01:44 PM · On: Will

OOHHH can't wait for more...

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 13/05/07 04:14 AM · On: Where

So sorry I am so late Gumnut - that's what happens when you volunteer to help your sister move house and it takes 3 freaking days! Anywaaay....this is a great chapter, you are really on a roll with this story. Poor Dean is still running, and I love it that Sam is after him - and he apparently has more of a clue than I do about what's going on. I hope he doesn't catch up with Dean too soon, because  Dean's running around in the rain without his shirt and....you know....nice mental image.

Ciel 

P.S. I know, with computers you don't have to do a P.S. , but since I now have a tendency to invent vocabulary, I may as well revert to old fashioned practices as well. Have I mentioned that I love the chapter names? I do. Very clever.

P.P.S.  I haven't written any stories, which is why you can't find any for me...but thanks for the compliment (I think!)

Reviewer: whitewave (Signed) · Date: 10/05/07 01:41 AM · On: Where

I feel like I should be greatful for every little tidbit that you pass on to me in a chapter.  Now I have a name, Chrissy, and some of the reason he is running away.  You keep me wanting more.

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 09/05/07 05:41 PM · On: Where

OMG!! This story just gets better and better - You have me totally hooked. What is this clawed/devil-girl thingy? What the he** did it do to Dean? At least now we know what happened to the impala... Please, please, please, more asap!!!!!!1