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Reviewer: Armaita (Signed) · Date: 07/11/09 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 1

Yes, Dean is a tragic hero, but the real tragedy is that he's too stoic to admit how much all of those losses really affect him. Thanks for this insight into Dean's character!

Reviewer: Swordstress (Signed) · Date: 24/09/09 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 1

Very lovely and sad.  Thanks.

Author's Response: I so glad that the emotions were felt on reading it and they were there on writing.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  D

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 24/09/09 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oh, so sad!  When does Dean get to follow his own dreams?  WELL done!

Author's Response: When family is involved,  when do anyone gets to follow their dreams?  Thanks for reading and reviewing.   D

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 24/09/09 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 1

You really did a great job describing Dean's journey.

Author's Response: I wanted to keep it simple, but Dean's past was so complicated.  Glad you like what I did.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  D

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 24/09/09 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 1

Just lovely I'm always impressed by anyone that gives any type of poetry a go, I"m such a hopeless case with it...lol.  THanks for the read ;) Kel

Author's Response: Was never much on the poetry thing.  Excited that my first attempt was so well liked.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  D

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 24/09/09 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 1

Very touching!  you've captured Dean's crushing and cruel life in only a few short sentences.  I think we forget about what was and might have been and focus on the Dean Winchester of today.  How tragically sad that the little boy was denied everything his heart wanted.

Author's Response: Like you, I have to agree on the focus on today's Dean.  Like in real life,  our past shapes our future and dreams are sometimes the first victim to the world.  Dean just makes it easy to write about.  Thanks again.  D

Reviewer: thirdwatchfanatic (Signed) · Date: 23/09/09 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wonderful!!!

Author's Response: Thank you and Thank you for reading and review, Dude.  D

Reviewer: RoweenaC (Signed) · Date: 23/09/09 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 1

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!

And damned did Dean and Sam's dreams die. Like all things, they seriously do die.

Wait!? Does that mean the boys can die too? AGAIN?????????

Just kidding. Thanks for sharing I am a sucker for some nice, sweet, heartbreaking poetry and this one certainly had pace, lovely choice of words, the perfect scenes chosen from the show and a great, gutwrenching ending!

Brilliant! And above all it got a featured!!! Congrats!

Cheers, Ilka



Author's Response: Thought you should know,  I wrote it in between 12hr shifts.  Some of the words and feelings came from me, but I so do like to channel Dean.  hehe.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  D

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 23/09/09 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 1

this is just simply tragic- but I just adore it.... beautiful, simple yet complex. Wonderfuly constructed. Well done!!!!

Author's Response: I have to say,  Thank you.  I only wanted to share this, but didn't expected the wonderful reviews.  But to tell the truth,  I was more excited with my name and story on the Featured Stories List.  I now felt like I have made it.  I'm a somebody.  Thanks again for the review.  D

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