:: Supernaturalville

Reviewer: kezza2kerri (Signed) · Date: 25/02/10 04:55 PM · On: Prologue

i cant wait to see where you take this story next

Reviewer: kezza2kerri (Signed) · Date: 09/02/10 01:03 PM · On: On The Run

this is great cant wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 22/09/09 08:43 PM · On: What The Hell?

ooooohhh angel....haha, loved this again! I really like this story.

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 22/09/09 08:41 PM · On: Arrival.

It IS a buffy crossover!!!

I liked your way of beginning this and ending this...haha I think they should bring back Buffy so it coud do a crossover night with Supernatural, how COOL would that be??!!

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 22/09/09 08:38 PM · On: Prologue

ooo A Buffy crossove am I correct?

Reviewer: birdandbaby2008 (Signed) · Date: 22/09/09 04:42 PM · On: Arrival.

Okay, I am a major Buffy and Supernatural fan, so this story looks really interesting.
But it would be so much more readable if you double-spaced. They way it is now, the text is so dense and compact, your eyes go blurry trying to read it on the computer screen. Also, evertime a new character speak, you have to start a new paragraph. (I don't know if you actually worte it that way, and the formatting got lost when you posted, but...)

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