Reviewer: Armaita (Signed) · Date: 04/12/09 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 3

I wrote a fic (set after 'Jus in Bello') where Henricksen decides to become a Hunter, but I like your take on this better. It seems more realistic, that Henricksen would stay in his own job, but help the Winchesters however he could. Great story, and keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Armaita (Signed) · Date: 04/12/09 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great chapter! I like how easy it is for Henricksen to dismiss Sam and Dean's reality under the guise of a tragic, twisted childhood...and yet, that's the very reality he uses to calm Dean down after the cave-in. =)

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 08/10/09 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 3

Thank you. That was a great read that I enjoyed every single word of.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 07/10/09 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 2

This is really really good, and I wish I had to time to read more right now, but sadly I must wait until tomorrow.

I'm really enjoying Henrickson getting enlightened on the wonderful world of ghosts and all things that go bump in the night. Shame on me, I even enjoyed Henrickson deliberately hurting Dean when he thought he was messing with him. Now I'm enjoying him feeling guilty about it. 

Suppose I should say I'm glad Ruby rescued Sam and is helping him (sort of) find Dean, but I'm not really, I don't like that demon one little bit. Never did, never will.

 

Author's Response:

,No shame is to be had in enjoying the whumping of a good character' Says right there, page 52 of the good fan guidebook ;o)

Don't like Ruby all that much either, mainly because she makes Sam look dumb (even before the big season 4 final reveal)

Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment on all the chapters :o) You're awesome!

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 07/10/09 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 3

This was really GREAT!!!!!!

I truly enjoyed reading this version about the boys and my least favorite FBI agent-AWESOME writing!!!

You truly captured the typical mindset of a typical FBI agent- narrow- self important -mental midget with a god complex- and yet, you made him human-OUTSTANDING verbage!!!

The turnabout was excellent and Dean's banter was spot on!!!

You are right on the money with the boys attitudes and actions.

Thanks for a great story!!!

BRAVO!!!!

Author's Response:

*g* Something tells me you're not a big fan of FBI agents...

Thank you so much for your words! They're like candy, each one sweeter than the previous :o)

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 07/10/09 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 3

Just caught up with this story and wanted to let you know I enjoyed it very much.

Author's Response:

Well, you have awesome timing! Right on schedule to catch the ending ;o)

Glad you liked it and thank you!

Reviewer: Lbdba (Signed) · Date: 06/10/09 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 3

Really really loved that!

 Thanks!

Corina

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 06/10/09 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 3

Loved it.  I really do miss Hendrickson, so it's great to read your story for just a little taste of that sarcastic FBI guy. Good job.


Author's Response:

Oh, I loved that guy's sense of humor. He was very Dean-like in that aspect. Glad I managed to bring a little bit of that back.

Thank you!

Reviewer: eeyore (Signed) · Date: 02/10/09 12:08 AM · On: Chapter 2

I was so excited when I read this was going to go an extra chapter.  I think you channeled Henricksen perfectly - his confusion at discovering that Dean's 'delusions' were actually real and his subsequent epihany of what Dean really does.  As I said previously, there's just not enough stories with Henricksen in them.  Bad Ruby for telling Sam his brother's dead.  Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 01/10/09 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 2

OMG Is Hendrickson really on board, does he believe Dean now and is he going to stop referring to him as an evil killer.  Is Ruby going to help Sam look for his brother?  Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks

Reviewer: Barbara_GER (Signed) · Date: 13/09/09 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 1

Freakin' awesome! That's one hell of a good idea for a story you had there, I can't wait to read on.

The way you're portraying the characters is realy genuine, especially Hendrickson, I can virtually hear and see him while reading.

Thanks for sharing!

Greetings, Barbara


Author's Response:

That's one of the best things a writer can hear. Truly!

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 13/09/09 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 1

A very interesting start, i'm hooked. when i watched Henricksen in the episodes i wanted to jump in the tv and scream at him for the way he went on with the boys when he knew nothing, he made me that mad lol,but after Jus in Bello i thought he was alot like Dean doing his job, helping people, i thought he would have made a good hunter. i'm looking forward to more of this story.

Author's Response:

Henricksen, from how I see it, depends on cliches. Murderers and serial killers and general outlaws tend to behave in a certain same manner over and over again. Dean breaks all patterns for him, at least until Henricksen realizes that he's not dealing with a murderer at all ;o)

Thank you for the RR!

Reviewer: eeyore (Signed) · Date: 12/09/09 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 1

This is very interesting - Dean and Victor Henderson stuck together in a contained area, I wonder how this is going to end.  I love how you wrote Henderson and how he thinks he has Dean all figured out. 

There aren't enough stories out there that include Henderson, please update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you! This is the first time I'm writing Henricksen and I'm just loving it. The man has a sense of sarcasm very sharp and very similar to Dean's, so its a sort of mirrors' clash :o)