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Reviews For ASYLUM
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 07/10/09 08:26 AM · On: GRAY

So, is the "crazy" person Dean or Sam? Quite ingriguing. Wonder how he got there? Where is his brother and what happen to him? Looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 29/09/09 05:24 PM · On: Guilt, Worries and Whiskey

Nice thoughts on Bobby's perspective. He's a far more complex man than he first appears.

So now I wait for more do I?

Okay waiting...

Bird x



Author's Response:

Chapter 6, "Flickers", is going through evalutation or whatever thats called. Should be up soon.

Ive made a poster for this story, but Im not quite sure how to put it in here. Any idea?

Thanks so much for all the fantastic reviews!

ROSE {Come2Me}

 

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 29/09/09 05:18 PM · On: Everything Changes

Okay nice confirmation of what I thought was happening. I predict a trip to the facility? Yeah?

Bird x

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 29/09/09 05:15 PM · On: I AM SAM

An interesting chapter...I'm intrigued as to who he actually is and whether his room mate is carporeal or not!

Not quite seeing the connection of the chapters yet. Deliberate?

Bird x

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 29/09/09 05:11 PM · On: BACK ON THE ROAD AGAIN

I've always liked Jo, thought she was an underused character. Not sure yet where you're going with this as the chapters are very concise so I'll read on.

Bird x

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 29/09/09 05:05 PM · On: GRAY

Ummm...unique format and it conveys disorientation well. It's hard to read though hun so I'm glad to see you say you're swapping format.

Reading on,,,

Bird x

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 14/09/09 06:05 AM · On: I AM SAM

I'm about to go nuts just reading the first 3 chapters, I have no idea what is going on, but I shall persevere and hope my muddled brain can sort it all out in the end, Keep writing.

Author's Response:

Im sorry for confusing you... I promise it'll all sort itself out, though. Thanks for the review. Chapter 4 will be up soon.

Rose (Come2Me)

Reviewer: Green_Eyed (Signed) · Date: 10/09/09 10:17 AM · On: BACK ON THE ROAD AGAIN

First of all, I like it. Maybe it's strangely a little, but the story is very presentatively. 

Author's Response:

Hello, Green! Thank you for the review. I hope the story'll start making more sense soon. It should once the major characters have all been introduced.

Keep hanging in there, it gets better.

Chapter 3 will be up shortly.

Rose {Come2Me} 

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