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Reviews For Turbulence
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 23/10/09 04:44 PM · On: It's gonna be a bumpy ride!

I can't believe you're making me read drabbles - that's not fair, Beth.

*sniffles*....

This one was a chuckle though - Phantom Traveller is one of my favourite episodes, and not just because of the long, slow camera pan up Dean's body in the beginning......*drools*....nope, it was the plot - definitely the plot.

So it was funny to revisit that rampant hysteria that is Dean on a plane. "We're all gonna die!" LOL.

Oh, and I got every episode except for Fresh Blood. I missed the 'fresh' on the first read-through. Old eyes - early morning - no cup of tea yet....*shrugs apologetically before going to get cuppa*...

Jules



Author's Response:

Aw, poor Jules, forced to read drabbles. *snickers* *hands Jules tissue* LOL Kidding--no pressure, feel free to skip them, I know they used to frustrate me to no end. I try to make mine feel as much like a complete little story as possible, but I know they're not everyone's cup of tea. Though if you've noticed, I tend to keep extending my drabbles longer and longer--it's getting hard to keep them contained! LOL

I'm glad you got a chuckle out of this one and that I managed to get an ep title by you without your notice, LOL. I tried to work them in there as inconspicuously as possible. ;)

Loved your description of Dean on a plane--"rampant hysteria." LOL Yep, that about sums it up. *snickers*

Thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: kathydel (Signed) · Date: 03/10/09 11:58 PM · On: It's gonna be a bumpy ride!

it was soooo funny i laughed for some reason keep it up man... hehe

Author's Response:

Hey there! Thanks so much for coming over to read and review my story. I really appreciate it! I'm thrilled you enjoyed this one, it's one of my first attempts at a humor fic, and I wasn't sure how it would go over. I'm really pleased that it worked for you!

If you liked this one, I have a longer humorous one-shot you might enjoy called "The Power of Suggestion." If you check it out, I'd love to hear what you think! :)

Reviewer: CatzEye (Signed) · Date: 26/09/09 08:16 PM · On: It's gonna be a bumpy ride!

Hah! Good job here -- Poor Dean, & after the season 5 premier, he's got to be outright terrified of flying, heh...

Very nicely done :)

Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 14/09/09 11:56 PM · On: It's gonna be a bumpy ride!

Oh, this was a treat. Very subtle use of the titles, glad you left a crib note at the end. Dean goes from "We're all gonna die!" to "Nothing to see here" like a sports car goes from 0 - 60 in six seconds. Good thing Sammy at least was in control.

Sue

Reviewer: Pandora Jazz (Signed) · Date: 07/09/09 03:38 AM · On: It's gonna be a bumpy ride!

Very good!

I caught three out of four of the episode titles.  I probably just blanked on "No Exit" as not  one I like to remember.

Nice AU scene for the plane ride during "Phantom Traveler" - thanks for the smile!

Enjoyed reading this, thanks for sharing it with us.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 06/09/09 01:22 PM · On: It's gonna be a bumpy ride!

Great job!  I don't think anyone else used the Pilot.

Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 05/09/09 03:19 PM · On: It's gonna be a bumpy ride!

Haha, this is fabulous! The humor was great and I LOVED that you used only dialogue.

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 05/09/09 09:17 AM · On: It's gonna be a bumpy ride!

LOL! That was hilarious!  Good one!

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 05/09/09 06:45 AM · On: It's gonna be a bumpy ride!

Cute.  Nice use of the titles.

Reviewer: clclemmons (Signed) · Date: 04/09/09 08:48 PM · On: It's gonna be a bumpy ride!

What a fun little drabble, made me laugh.  Thanks for sharing

Crystal

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 04/09/09 10:01 AM · On: It's gonna be a bumpy ride!

I caught No Exit, monster movie and pilot, but didn't connect "Pilot"! Well  done babble using those titles! Loved me a panicky Dean. :)

Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 04/09/09 05:55 AM · On: It's gonna be a bumpy ride!

Funeee, nearly missed 'The Pilot' title as it blended so well, ah Dean and aeroplanes - poor thing, lol.

Jacq

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 04/09/09 04:50 AM · On: It's gonna be a bumpy ride!

Very good,lol.

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