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Reviewer: GreyCat (Signed) · Date: 04/04/10 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 15

Yey! Another chapter!
'Sam "That's not what I meant, please try and leave him in one piece as I said I don't wanna play cleanup" Dean "Sammy why you gotta take the fun outta everything" he said with a pout.' Sweet! Dean's right it was fun!
Glad to see they're living they're lives! Hope it stays that way or do you have something else planed? Well? Won't you tell me?
Dany

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 03/04/10 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 15

For chapters 14 & 15, absolutely great really enjoyed them, And Dean has come such a along way in his recovery, But I'm wondering what John is cooking up. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: GreyCat (Signed) · Date: 25/03/10 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 14

"Then you no longer have any sons", you go and tell him Dean! Loved how he called Sam his son, again.
I agree that it didn't go as planned or as good as it could but John got what he deserved, being pinned on the wall by Dean was my cherry on the top! Hope that he'll go for good (unless you're still up for something??).
Anyway, loved the chapter! Fell free to update again at any time ;-)
Dany

Reviewer: GreyCat (Signed) · Date: 22/03/10 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 13

New chapter! Yay!
Here we go! I'm glad Dean is getting better and that he agreed to "meet" John. Hope that meeting goes well that Dean keeps in charge all the time, with a little help from the others of course, and that finally John takes responsibility for his actions (and gets punished for that).
I'll be waiting eagerly for the next chapter!
Dany

Author's Response: Thanks so much for sticking with the story, hope to have the next chapter up soon

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 21/03/10 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 13

Wow, I just read all the chapters so far posted and must say I love your story, poor Dean. I love it that he has 'gifts' too, always wanted dean to have some powers. And don't mind in the least that he's kinda hurt. As long as it's not to severe. Please post more soon.

Author's Response: Thank you i am so glad you enjoyed the story i hope to have the next chapter up soon

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 21/03/10 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 13

Hmmm...I wonder if John is going to be able to resist not being the top dog and wind up hurting Dean some more. I'm really looking forward to reading the next chapter and the meeting between all parties.

Author's Response: Thanks for sticking with the story glad your enjoing it hope to have more soon

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 21/03/10 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 12

Whoweee! That was another tense chapter. I'm glad that Missouri is able to help Dean with his new powers. I think it's a good idea that Dean be part of the confrontation with John. He needs to do this, to show John he's not his puppet anymore. It will make him stronger. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Reviewer: GreyCat (Signed) · Date: 18/03/10 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 12

I love Missouri! She always knows the right words to say to Dean, and how to say it!
I'm glad Dean's getting better and I think it's about time he understands that he doesn't need to apologize 'cause nothing of this it's his fault, it's John's (just call me when the time for kicking his sorry ass arrive).
Still enjoying it and waiting for the next chapter!
Dany

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 15/03/10 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 11

How sad! John is acting cruelly because he is a jerk. How could he treat Dean that way. I guess the magic and the power truly corrupted him. I'm glad that Dean was able to confide in Sam and Jess. He's finally getting a restful sleep. I'm worried that John is up to something and that it is about to explode all around them. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: GreyCat (Signed) · Date: 10/03/10 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 11

High on magic! That's a new one!can I help kicking John's but?
It was such a little chapter, it ended just when I was starting to enjoy it. But I'm definitely enjoying!
Dany

Author's Response: Any help would be greatly recieved

Reviewer: GreyCat (Signed) · Date: 01/02/10 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 10

why am I not surprised with John acting?
So good that Dean likes to piss the doctors :-) ! Great chapter, I'll be eagerly waiting for the next one.
Dany

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 31/01/10 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 10

Hmmmm....so John may have not been possessed? Wonder what John's goal is? Seems like Dean is out of a wheelchair and walking, so I guess he isn't paralyzed from the waste down~shoewee! Too bad Missouri couldn't get a handle on what John was feeling and thinking. I absolutely do not trust John, not one bit. Hopefully, Sammy can keep Dean safe. Looking forward to what you have in store for us next!

Reviewer: GreyCat (Signed) · Date: 26/01/10 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 9

So, John was possessed uh? If you say so...
Really, really hope Dean wakes up soon. I'm enjoying and can't wait for the next update!
Dany

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 23/01/10 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 9

I guess John has learned (I hope) a lesson in this. How to talk to and treat his boys. I'm still keeping my fingers crossed that Dean will be ok physically and mentally. Looking forward to the next chapter, so please hurry back.

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 23/01/10 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 8

Holy moly! I can't believe you've managed to redeem John. I never thought that he was possessed (why it never occurred to me, I'll never know). Dean's powers are something else! Hopefully, he will make it. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Reviewer: GreyCat (Signed) · Date: 21/11/09 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 7

"Your" John is a real piece of work! Can't wait to see his ass kicked by Dean and Sam!
Great chapter, will be waiting for the next one's (so you're enjoying the nephew! Good!)!
Dany

Author's Response: thanks will hopefully have the new chapter up soon and yes i am enjoing spoiling my nephew

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 20/11/09 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 7

Holy Moly! Has John gone completely loco? What exactly did they do to Dean? What kind of powers does he now possess. I really hate your version of John, he is so evil here. Poor, poor Dean. I just ache for him. I hope his plan works and John gets what's coming to him. Looking forward to the next chaper, so please hurry back!!

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 19/10/09 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 6

I loved that everyone was supportive of Dean and tried to get him to realize that he is a good person. I wonder if John is going to try to get his "soldier" back, and if he does, how? Looking forward to your next chapter.

Reviewer: GreyCat (Signed) · Date: 17/10/09 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 6

I'm definitely enjoying this story!
Congratulation on being an aunt! And don't worry it will get less scary, just give it a little time and a lot of baby sitting ;)

Author's Response: thank you will try and keep up with the writing

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 09/09/09 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 5

John certainly is one piece of work here in your story. I loved how when John threatened Sam, Dean came to life and defended Sam. Seems like Dean is on his way to recovery. Looking forward to the "family" meeting with everyone.

Reviewer: Aigredoux (Signed) · Date: 08/09/09 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hi I just can't bring myself to read this story.
Umm sorry to mention it, and I'm surprised nobody else has, but the word 'farther' refers a measure of distance where one distance is greater than the other- ie., Russia is farther north than India.
You've been using this word to describe John Winchester's relationship to his sons, when the appropriate word would be 'father'- that is you should miss out the 'r' in the middle.
No disrespect just it's kinda hard to make sense of when the word has an entirely different meaning :(
If this was fixed I'd love to read your fic :)

Author's Response: my appologies about that i didnt even notice i was typing it wrong i have gone back through and changed it now i hope you will keep reading and thank you for letting me know

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 03/09/09 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 4

Love the chapter. You have some exciting parts and some mystery going on. I'm dying to know what's up with the blue light coming from Dean and what happened to him to be able to resist the demons. I wonder what Jess will think of the supernatural? I guess she'll believe it after experiencing that scary scene with the demons. I'm hoping to see more soon!! Keep it up.

Author's Response: thanks will hopefully have the next chapter finished soon

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 31/08/09 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 3

Poor, poor Dean. I just ache for him hear. I still want to slap John upside the head. He does seem to be making progress. I'm looking forward to him healing completely mentally. Hurry back so we can see how he is coping. John had better not come back any time soon!

Reviewer: angeldiva (Signed) · Date: 29/08/09 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 2

Please continue...and update regularly..

Author's Response: thanks will try and update soon

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 28/08/09 11:34 PM · On: Chapter 2

Poor, poor Dean! I had a feeling that John may have been abusing Dean. I hope Sam and Jess can get him out of his funk. Will Jess survive in your AU, or will she wind up on the ceiling? Looking forward to the next chapter, so please don't take too long to update!

Author's Response: thanks will try and update soon

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