Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 06/09/09 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 1
Well, I'm glad you wrote this. "Amazing Gravity-Defying Locus of Focus!" sounded pretty insanely awesome! I'd love to read another drabble to find out what the brothers see inside the building. Nice work!
Author's Response: Hi Scanilla Thanks so much for reviewing, sorry I'm so late in replying. Hmm, I hadn't thought about turning this into a 2- or multi-part drabble, but if the right word comes along, I might. Sue
Reviewer: bhoney (Signed) · Date: 04/09/09 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oooh, very nice use of the words, I had to go back through to pick up on some of them. Very smooth. You even used one more than you had to, nice! Loved the name of the mystery spot. LOL
Author's Response: Hi Beth, Thanks (way late) for reveiwing, I thought I was caught up, and then discovered that I'm not. I needed to come up with another name for the mystery spot, something specific enough to leave no doubt what kind of business it was...and this is what I came up with. Glad it worked for you. Sue
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 31/08/09 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 1
I love the "Amazing gravity-defying locus of focus!" Sends all sorts of images to the imagination Good challenge drabble Jacq
Author's Response: Hi Jacq, Thanks for the review and the stars. I needed a name that had the same paranormal/freaky vibe as the Mystery Spot without calling it Mystery Spot and this popped into my head. Sounds like something the circus announcer would say, doesn't it? Sue
Reviewer: bjxmas (Signed) · Date: 29/08/09 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great job using some of the tougher titles. I love the "Amazing Gravity-Defying Locus of Focus"! And you managed to get in a regular hunt surrounded by the concern and care for Dean. That's always a good combination. Wonderful drabble! - B.J.
Author's Response: HI B.J., Thanks for reading and reviewing, I needed a different name than Mystery Spot for the mystery spot and thought this conveyed the right vibe;-) Glad you agree. Sue
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 28/08/09 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 1
Very good!
Author's Response: Hi Shannondoah, Thanks for the review! Sue
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 28/08/09 01:04 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wait- the Winchesters followed up on a tip from the GHOSTFACERS?!? Wouldn't that be GREAT? If the Ghostfacers honestly would not go into the case themselves and die trying, it would be so much fun to actually have them recommend something! Loved it!
Author's Response: Hi Primrose, Thanks for the review, glad you liked me using the Ghostfacers as legitimate tipsters. Sue
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 28/08/09 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 1
Nicely done, i did like this.
Author's Response: Hi Lindsay, Thanks for reading and reviewing, glad you liked this drabble! Sue
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 28/08/09 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 1
Very nice... like that you worked in Ghostfacers...
Author's Response: Hi Tree, Thanks for the review, I needed a source for the hunt and after staring at the list of titiles, the Ghostfacers naturally occurred to me;-) Sue
Reviewer: clclemmons (Signed) · Date: 27/08/09 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 1
Sounds like a fun little hunt. Thanks for sharing. Crystal
Author's Response: You're welcome and thanks for reading and reviewing. Hmmm, I should probably expand this hunt into a real story, it has possibilities... Sue
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