Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 06/09/09 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wonderful! I like that we're not sure who is speaking.
Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 05/09/09 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 1
Good work! You built the atmosphere very well like you always do and used the episode titles seamlessly.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Your kind words on this drabble mean a lot to me.
Reviewer: bhoney (Signed) · Date: 04/09/09 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow, sad. Nice use of the challenge words. My first thought was that it was Dean thinking, but I guess it could be Sam, too. Who'd you have in mind? This was a really fun challenge to do. Thanks for letting me know about it!
Author's Response: You're welcome. Thank you for reading this one. I did a lighter one too titled Consolation. They were fun to write.
Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 27/08/09 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hi Ness, Whoa, very dark. I love the inclusive correction in the last phrase "I'm--we're--all going to drown" although the drabblist in me wonders if you used the -- to artfully make 3 words count as 1 (not that I'm exposing any trade secrets, heh, heh). First reading, I think this is 4th season Sam, but 2nd reading shows it could be 3rd season Dean, too. Awesome! Sue
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 26/08/09 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 1
Ness, long time no see,. Very dark and very good. Love it. Lorraine
Author's Response: Thanks, Lorraine. Good to see you again. Glad you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 26/08/09 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 1
ooh intense, and you have the only 'When the Levee breaks' nice one Jacq
Author's Response: Thank you very much. Glad you liked it.
Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 25/08/09 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 1
I liked. Cool.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 25/08/09 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 1
Oh yes, I don't think it matters which brother you're talking about, they both have to be feeling the same thing. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 25/08/09 03:22 AM · On: Chapter 1
Yeah, like this, very nicely dark and delicious dark thoughts. Mary x
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and leaving a review.
Reviewer: RoweenaC (Signed) · Date: 24/08/09 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 1
WOW, Nessa. Terrific! Love it. And really well done because I could imagine both boys having these Dark Thoughts! Very very very well done, hunny. And yeah, it's a great challenge. I am on my second one. Guess I'll be drabbling over the next days like there's no tomorrow --- Hugs, Ilka
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you. I'm thrilled that you liked it!!
Reviewer: clclemmons (Signed) · Date: 24/08/09 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 1
Ness, Wow! Very nicely done. Crystal
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 24/08/09 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 1
I continue to be amazed at how everyone is putting these titles into play. Great job for a first go at it! *sends virtual High-Five*
Author's Response: Thank you! It's good to know you liked it. :-) I appreciate the virtual high-five. hehe
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 24/08/09 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 1
That was very good, it must be quite hard to do these, well done.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Glad you liked this. :-)
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