Supernaturalville
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 14/05/10 09:50 PM · On: Day Twelve

That was a great update. The conversation was so awkward between the three Winchester. Pauline watching DEan sleeping, sweet and a little creepy at the same time. Elliot and Calvert and their evil plan, Dean is so going to be in big trouble. Terrific work Mary, I can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and sorry for the delay in replying. Glad you liked this one. Mary x

Pauline is a little creepy but she'll come good. Promise.

Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 13/05/10 07:39 PM · On: Day Twelve

They're just evil. I hope Pauline gets to have her revenge on them and save our Dean at the same time. I absolutely love this story I'm so glad you're updating it.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and sorry for the delay in replying. Glad you liked this one. Mary x

I am evil and I will get this one moving again soon!

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 09/05/10 08:48 AM · On: Day Eleven

That was a great chapter, Dean waking up and telling John and Sam what he thought about them, they deserved his wrath. I'm glad that Bobby did the same, John and Sam needed to realized what they did to Dean. I enjoyed the investigation about the collapsing of that building, captivating. I'm looking forward to more. 

Author's Response:

Thanks.

Dean let them have it but it might be short lived. More on the building and a little of Pauline to come.

Mary xx

Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 08/05/10 12:59 AM · On: Day Eleven

I'm so glad Dean has Bobby, the one person whose never left him. It'll do John and Sam good to finally have to deal with a Dean with no walls up. Great update

Author's Response:

Yeah Bobby is Dean's rock in this one. Dean can build walls that if they'd used them for the mall, there would be no story, lol.

Mary x

Reviewer: ange (Signed) · Date: 07/05/10 02:18 PM · On: Day One

Great update thank you. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Cant wait to see things develop now John and Sam know how Dean feels. Bobby rules!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

They might tread a little more lightly around him now they know.

Mary xx

Reviewer: usaexpat (Signed) · Date: 07/05/10 12:35 PM · On: Day Eleven

way to go Dean...so glad that he told off his brother and his Dad...course I hope he sticks to his guns and doesn't cave but he probably will!  great update

Author's Response:

He told them off but this is Dean and when he remembers....he'll not be happy with himself...and yeah, he might cave! Good call.

Mary xx

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 07/05/10 09:24 AM · On: Day Eleven

Great update, so glad that Dean is going to OK and I like it that he's totally pissed off with his family,  looking forward to the next post, Keep them coming.

Author's Response:

Thanks Maureen

Dean is on the mend but the trouble might not be over yet!

Mary xx

Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 31/03/10 08:03 PM · On: Day Ten

Mary,

had me tearing up there for a minute.

Pauline helped after all; i was hoping you would have wrote her that way.

love the way you write Dean when he thinks about John.  "Poor bastard. Glad it's not me he's screaming at."  

another great chapter.

Renee



Author's Response:

Thanks

Sorry for the tears, kind of felt that way myself!

Mary xx

Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 30/03/10 12:27 AM · On: Day Ten

Yah! Dean's free. I've been chewing my nails waiting for this chapter so you definately owe me a manicure but I forgive you 'cause you saved Dean. Love this story.

Author's Response:

Sorry I made you chew your nails and the delays in getting the chapters up wouldn't have helped!

Glad you are enjoying, Mary xx

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 29/03/10 08:04 PM · On: Day Ten

WooHoo!They found Dean!!!Pauline finally told John and Sam where's Dean and she even helped Dean to breathe. I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response:

Yup, the boy is free!

Pauline to the rescue and there is more to this than just getting Dean out. Mary xx

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 29/03/10 01:14 PM · On: Day Ten

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

One word....says it all! lol

Thanks< Mary xx

Reviewer: usaexpat (Signed) · Date: 29/03/10 12:21 PM · On: Day Ten

Yeah they found him!!! So pleased that Pauline decided to help Dean out...after all what woman could resist Dean! lol....great update

Author's Response:

Yeah indeed! lol

Pauline isn't finished yet! :)

Mary xx

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 29/03/10 09:18 AM · On: Day Ten

Wow, about time, don't think Dean had long to go,  glad that he's finally saved.   Now John can go off again, and Sam can go back to college, once they see Dean's going to be fine.  Because that's what they do.  More soon Please. Thanks..

Author's Response: Final got him out! You are so right about what JOhn and Sam will do but there is another matter to resolve first! Mary xx

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 16/03/10 09:08 AM · On: Day Nine

Great chapter, loved angry John, it's best to do as he says when he's that mad lol,now has Pauline gone for help, can't wait to find out.

Author's Response:

Hey

I love angry John too! Pauline has gone, but is that a good sign? Up next, Mary xx

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 16/03/10 06:07 AM · On: Day Nine

John, Sam don't stop digging, it's not too late. Awww... Poor DEan begging Pauline to not let him die, heartwrenching. The tension is building up, what's going to happen next, can't wait to know. 

Author's Response:

They get there don't worry.

More soon-ish, Mary xx

Reviewer: usaexpat (Signed) · Date: 16/03/10 04:13 AM · On: Day Nine

oh boy Sam and John better to hurry, Dean isn't going to last much longer.  I have to say I was surprised at John's restraint  in dealing with that horrible man..I am surprised he just didn't bit his head off to at the begining!  lol 

Author's Response:

Hey

The guys are on their way and they are almost there. I think Sam was the restraint on John just blowing it!

Mary xx

Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 15/03/10 08:12 PM · On: Day Nine

that was heartbreaking.it's only the thought that you couldm't possibly kill Dean (could you?) thats giving me comfort. He's always so alone, first with Sam and John leaving him and now trapped in a collapsed parking garage with only a ghost ,who wants him to die, for company. Seriously sucks to be him.

Author's Response:

Thank you. Me kill Dean? Would I? Ok so I would but maybe not in this one! lol

Mary xx

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 15/03/10 07:02 PM · On: Day Nine

OMG that was really heartbreaking, poor dean, you are going to let them find him in time =, aren't you because that would be awful if he was left.  Can't wait for the next chapter to be posted.

Author's Response:

Thank you

You'll find out his fate in the next chapter, I will try to get it up asap, Mary xx

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 15/03/10 03:21 PM · On: Day Nine

Yikes! Pauline sorta feels bad for Dean but she still wants him dead so she won't be alone. I'm keeping my fingers crossed that his family finds him soon. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Hey

Pauline wants to help him but she doesn't want to be alone, you are right.

He'll be reached soon, Mary x

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 15/03/10 02:46 PM · On: Day Nine

Awwww come on!! Just save him.... even the ghostie cant stand to see him like this anymore :)

Just love the determined John fighting to get in there - And where did Bobby go? did I miss something?

Cant wait for the next bit.... write... dig... faster faster faster!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Who said I was gonna save him????

Ok, so I will and soon.

Bobby is still there, I will update him and the back story soon! You didn't miss anything.

Update soon, promise, Mary xx

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 15/03/10 01:02 PM · On: Day Nine

Mary,

You know I love your stories but I hate waiting for updates, hence I've been absent for awhile, hoping to read this story as a completed work, but today I couldn't wait any longer.

Lots has happened since I last checked this story out but Dean is still stuck, fading fast. John and Sam are still hunting and digging. And Pauline is still...being Pauline. I really cannot figure out what she is up to. She obviously doesn't want to be alone, but then again she does seem to want to help Dean. Now she's kissed him and upped and left - what the hell is that about?

So I'd be very happy if updates came fast and furious, but even if that doesn't happen I promise I will read the rest of this story.



Author's Response:

Hey Anne

I am sorry that the updates are slow on this, having a little fight with the back story and the muse.

Dean will be reached soon, promise.

Updates should start to pick up soon I hope. Thanks for sticking with it! Mary xx

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 15/03/10 11:27 AM · On: Day Eight

Gulp, sounds like the walls are still come tumbling down upon on our Dean! Luckily, he's not hurt worse but his time is running out. It was great that he was able to get a call out to Bobby, so now they know he is alive and his location. I hope they can get to him without too much trouble from Pauline, but then again that's not their kind of luck!! Looking forward to reading the next chapter!!

Author's Response:

Hey

That they are but he will be reached soon, promise.

Mary xx

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 03/03/10 09:36 PM · On: Day Eight

They had to stop digging because of a gas leak what a bad news at least they got the best news after all these days they had a phone call from Dean. With no more water and the crash of that slab, time is running out for Dean. Terrific update Mary.

Author's Response:

Hey there

Dean's clock is starting to countdown so they better hurry.

Thanks, Mary x

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 02/03/10 08:53 AM · On: Day Eight

An exciting update, poor Dean, as if he hasn't got enough to deal with.

Author's Response:

Thanks Lindsay

Yup, I've been bad to him, again! Mary xx

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 01/03/10 11:27 PM · On: Day Eight

Oh, man!  That was...that was....they gotta get to Dean FAST!  (Loved it!)

Author's Response:

Hey Julie

I think the word you need is EVIL!

Help is on its way! Mary xx

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