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Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 11/08/10 08:05 PM · On: Day 14

Great day! So Pauline possessed Dean and killed those thugs and got Dean out of there! Loved how John and Sam stood up to the police officer (he needs to be taken down!). I'm biting my nails until Sam has caught up with Dean.

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 11/08/10 10:29 AM · On: Day 14

Glad to see a new update,  The Winchesters must have been born under a bad sign, they just never seem to get a break.  And Cops and Agents all seem be be stupid.  Dean could barely move and yet he's supposed to have killed two men and knocked another out,  Now he's in an even worse mess than before, looking forward to the next chapter, Thanks.

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 09/06/10 07:24 PM · On: Day 13

What an evil cliffy, I'm at the edge of my seat waiting to know what's going to happen next. Mary, sorry to hear about your father in law, hope he'll get better.

 



Author's Response: I know and I'm sorry that has hung so long. I will update asap. Thanks for your good wishes. Mary x

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 07/06/10 10:32 AM · On: Day 13

 Uh-oh, think Dean might need Pauline to come to the rescue again - very soon.  Just like we need an update very soon too - please, pretty please.



Author's Response:

Hey Anne

Sorry for the delay in the update and the reply. Pauline will come to the rescue and I will update soon now. Mary x

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 04/06/10 02:16 PM · On: Day 13

Horrid, evil cliffie, girl! Lord have mercy, I can't believe that they are trying to murder Dean as well (at least so soon!). I hope Pauline can do something here. I'm going to be biting my nails until you post again!


Author's Response: I know, sorry. I will update soon now, promise! Maryx

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 04/06/10 02:07 PM · On: Day Twelve

Well, crap! Here I was thinking that things were looking up for Dean and wham! We get the thugs trying to pin and perhaps even trying to do away with Dean! I hope the ghost of Pauline gets her chance with her wrath! I could easily see Dean asking forgiveness even though he shouldn't because Sam and John are the ones who need forgiveness from Dean. At least they realize that! Looking forward to the next part.

Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you are still liking this one, Mary x

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 04/06/10 01:57 PM · On: Day Eleven

So, drugged Dean was telling Sam and John exactly how he felt. Good for him. I noticed that both John and Sam realize that Dean has the right to feel the way he does. I'm glad that Dean is out and in a hospital. I'm sure with the Winchesters and Bobby they will find the top snake and retribution will be had by all injured parties! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response:

I liked this chapter, giving Dean a little chance to air his views for once.

Thanks, mary x

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 04/06/10 01:46 PM · On: Day Ten

So, in the end Pauline actually helped Dean. I'm glad that she realized that by helping Dean she will help herself and get revenge too at what those creeps did. I really love how all of Dean's family is here for him (including Bobby). I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and sorry for the delay in replying. Glad you liked this one. Mary x

Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 03/06/10 09:58 AM · On: Day Five, Part Two

John's message was really touching, and what a cracking idea to have the ghost help Dean. Your plots are excellent, and I know your write a lot of storiesso you have more than a few up your sleeve- awesome imagination dude- hats off!!


Author's Response:

Thanks. He really cares about his sons he is just useless at showing it! My muse has her moments!

Mary x

Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 03/06/10 09:01 AM · On: Day Five

Liked the similarities and the differences in John and Sam's reactions to Bobby. You can tell who Sam takes after! Poor Bobby, but I have to admire how he handles the eldest Winchester!

Great work on writing Dean's survival instincts. Both during and after the collapse- it is very convincing, you can see his training coming through!



Author's Response: Thanks, glad you are still liking this. Mary x

Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 03/06/10 08:40 AM · On: Day Four/Five

I am speechless- ye of course the Title!Yes slow I know- this is my first Spn read in many months, so pleased I picked your story. What a great combination of threats, natural, supernatural and... John Winchester!


Author's Response: That was really sneaky of me, used Dean's walls as a ruse for the real ones!

Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 03/06/10 08:22 AM · On: Day Four, Part Two

I like the way you build your details in this. The small touches always make it a more rounded story, it's something I am still trying to master!! LOL.

The small scene with the little girl is adorable and you continue to knock the Dean-Bobby relationship out of the park! The balence is just right. I am so desparate to finish this story, but am afraid time will run out on me.... you may end up with one word reviews... it all means the same.... awesome work!!!



Author's Response: I love Bobby and Dean, they are good together and I love that you think I got them down in this. Thanks!

Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 03/06/10 07:59 AM · On: Day Four

And the plot thickens! Like the action sequence of the hunt. And I am going to have to skip ahead- I think my rude shortness might be the greatest compliment  can pay you!!! LOL.

Author's Response: That it does! Just loving that you are reviewing. MAryx

Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 03/06/10 07:47 AM · On: Day Three

switching the tables and havingDean look out for Bobby was a nice touch. And I got to admit I love Dean in uniforms!!! LOL. Shameless! Oh the writing was great too.... :)

Author's Response: Glad you are still liking! Mary x

Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 03/06/10 07:32 AM · On: Day Two

Really think you've hit yur stride with the banter between Dean and Bobby. Bobby's voice just rings true in this- loved the confiscation of the flask and the gripping about parking;

“Is this like a new addition to the range of spaces, you know – disabled, parent and kids and anorexics?” 

“Like I said, funny, now get your fat ass in the lift.”

And Bobby's protectiveness is exactly what I'd have expected - I hope he DOES get one of the other two Winchesters on the Phone!



Author's Response: Glad you liked the banter, it was hard work but I was happy with it.

Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 03/06/10 07:17 AM · On: Day One

I've had to rein myself in and review because I just wanted to rush on to the next chapter! Love the set up, a Bobby and Dean gig- so much promise in this, and yourbuild up to the hunt is so well timed. Bobby's concern, the sink hole Dean seems to be in. Great Start!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and sorry for the delay in replying. Glad you liked this one. Mary x

Reviewer: usaexpat (Signed) · Date: 02/06/10 09:49 AM · On: Day 13

Yikes...I was getting worried about a possible prison stuff for Dean but now I gotta worry about him dying...lovely twist and turns...great update

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and sorry for the delay in replying. Glad you liked this one. Mary x

Always one for a twist that's me!

Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 01/06/10 10:45 PM · On: Day 13

Evil cliffie, thank goodness for the vengeful spirit in the room, right? Pauline will come to the rescue? Please. Hope your father- in- law is o.k. looking forward to next update.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and sorry for the delay in replying. Glad you liked this one. Mary x

I will update on this shortly! x

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 01/06/10 04:01 PM · On: Day Nine

I'm just aching here for Dean. He is literally at death's door and losing hope of rescue with thoughts of dying alone without his family around him. I hope Pauline can do something to help Dean. Hopefully, with more people helping out, they will find Dean. I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and sorry for the delay in replying. Glad you liked this one. Mary x

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 01/06/10 03:56 PM · On: Day Eight

Well, I was relieved when Dean was able to get his call out and that he tossed the gun away because of the temptation it held for him. But now, I'm really worried about the collapsing roof around him. Seems like the whole structure is about to come tumbling down around his head! I hope now that Bobby, John, and Sam know where Dean is, they can finally get more help to get him out of there! I'm really looking forward to reading the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and sorry for the delay in replying. Glad you liked this one. Mary x

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 01/06/10 03:49 PM · On: Day Seven

How terribly, terribly sad. Here I thought that perhaps Pauline was helping Dean by getting John and Sam to move where they were digging, turns out she is trying lure them away from Dean. Poor Dean, he is in a world of hurt (both physically and mentally). I hope they find something soon before they decide to move further away from Dean. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and sorry for the delay in replying. Glad you liked this one. Mary x

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 01/06/10 03:40 PM · On: Day 6

So, they have found Pauline's body. I like how Sam realized that her spirit could be dangerous to Dean. She still makes me very uneasy. Seems like Dean is having a harder time concentrating. Hopefully, John and Sam will find him soon. I'm off to hopefully read the next chapter (if the schoo's firewall hasn't blocked it!).

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and sorry for the delay in replying. Glad you liked this one. Mary x

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 01/06/10 02:01 PM · On: Day 13

OMG, I hope Pauline is still in the room and she can go get Sam or someone quickly. And I detest that Agent Carson. Great chapter and can't wait for the next one.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and sorry for the delay in replying. Glad you liked this one. Mary x

Thanks Maureen, there'll be more soon!

Reviewer: ange (Signed) · Date: 01/06/10 01:54 PM · On: Day 13

Oh, that's so not fair, you are right Horrid Cliffie!! But this is so good. Hope eveything will be OK with your father-in-law and just up date when you can. I'm sure we will all be patiently waiting. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and sorry for the delay in replying. Glad you liked this one. Mary x

Sorry for the cliffie! My FIL is getting better but now I'm ill! I will update soon, promise.

Reviewer: ange (Signed) · Date: 16/05/10 02:56 PM · On: Day One

I love this story. Great writing,you have me realy pent up after this chapter. Dont these horrid men know who they are dealing with. Cant wait for update.. Thanks again.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and sorry for the delay in replying. Glad you liked this one. Mary x

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