Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 05/09/09 05:28 AM · On: Day Four
A very good chapter, i'm thinking that this ghost isn't the one killing people, looking forward to finding out more about the ghost and a little on Sam and John.
Author's Response: Hi there The ghost isn't the killer? Hmm. Hold that thought. *smiles* Sam and John appear briefly in the next chapter and then I'll get them more involved in the story. Thanks, Mary x
Reviewer: usaexpat (Signed) · Date: 05/09/09 04:47 AM · On: Day Four
Loved Dean's protectiveness of Bobby...poor Dean so needy for his family, if only they felt the same way...good update
Author's Response: HI Thank you. I like Dean and Bobby together, they really are like father and son. Dean is missing his family and they will try to contact him. Thanks, Mary x
Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 04/09/09 07:48 PM · On: Day Four
sorry I've been lurking (you know reading when your'e supposed to be working!) but I just wanted to let you know how much I've been enjoying this. You've got the interaction between Dean and Bobby down perfectly. Fantastic story can't wait for next chapter thankyou
Author's Response: HI there No problem, I do that too sometimes! (I read at work too and we can't sign on, I always get a call at a good part..lol) Thanks for stopping and letting me know though that you like this, I love feedback...review junkie that's me! lol. Glad you like the boys in this. I love Bobby and Dean together, they bounce off one another nicely. Hope you like the rest, Mary x
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 29/08/09 02:00 PM · On: Day Three
I enjoyed this chapter, i loved the banter between Dean and Bobby when Dean was checking him for concussion, Dean in uniform, very nice.
Author's Response: Hey Lindsay Thanks, I had fun with it! And yeah, Dean in a uniform.....mmmm. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 27/08/09 12:49 PM · On: Day Three
The banter between Dean and Bobby cracks me up, lol. Dean was so disappointed when the phone rang and he thought it was Sam, heartbreaking. Even if Bobby called John threatening him I'm not sure he'll call Dean.So the spirit who attacked Bobby is a woman, who's she and why she's doing this. Yum!Dean in uniform, can't wait for the next part.
Author's Response: Hey there Thanks, I'm having fun with the banter! Poor Dean indeed, he so wanted it to be Sam. And John might call, you never know! All will be revealed in the next chapter, I think, re the woman in this story. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: usaexpat (Signed) · Date: 27/08/09 06:28 AM · On: Day Two
I love Bobby...poor Dean he did give up everything for those two and they just left him...so glad he has bobby..
Author's Response: Hey Thanks. I love Bobby and he is always there when Dean needs him. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 26/08/09 05:43 PM · On: Day Two
Mary, great work with Bobby's characterization he's so like Bobbyin the series, lol. Awww...Poor Dean, checking his phone to see if Sam or John tried to reach him. I'm looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Hey Oceane Thanks! Glad you think that I've caught Bobby in this, and yeah poor Dean is hurting in this at the moment. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 26/08/09 11:25 AM · On: Day Two
I love the banter between Bobby and Dean.. I dont think anyone could put so much inflection in "BOY" or "OLD MAN" as those two do.
This looks to be shaping up for a good case fic... I cant wait... oh-- and such a nice touch- Dean looking for the missed calls... and Bobby seeing it...
Author's Response: Hey Tree Gotta love Bobby and Dean together, two comedians in the one room, never good! There is a twist coming soon....hey it's me. Yeah, I like that Bobby can see that Dean is hurting. mary x
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 26/08/09 09:41 AM · On: Day Two
An excellent chapter, i'm really loving this story.
Author's Response: Hey Lindsay Thanks, it's fun to write so far too. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 26/08/09 09:03 AM · On: Day Two
This is really great so far! I'm really interested to see where you're going with this. I'm a sucker for Dean/Bobby interaction!
Author's Response: Hi there Thanks! I love Bobby and Dean, always think that they are great together. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 26/08/09 08:38 AM · On: Day Two
I'm really enjoying this story. Love how Dean and Bobby banter back and forth. I'm with Bobby, I want to throttle the other 2 Winchesters for how they are neglecting Dean. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hi there Thanks, glad you are. This one is fun to write at the moment. Yeah his family are jerks in this but they are about to get a wake up call! Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 21/08/09 05:15 PM · On: Day One
I feel badly for Dean here. He has been abandoned by his family and is not handling it well. Bobby is family, though, and hopefully he can Dean out of his funk. Looking forward to the rest!
Author's Response: HI there Yeah, he's kind of down but you are right Bobby is family and he'll get Dean out of his funk. CHeers Mary x
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 21/08/09 06:32 AM · On: Day One
Great start, i love Bobby's lines in this chapter lol.
Author's Response: HI there Thanks Lindsay. He's a hard man to capture right, I love him though. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 20/08/09 09:22 PM · On: Day One
What a great idea to have Dean and Bobby on a hunt together. Great start Mary, can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: HI Oceane Thanks. It might go a bit pear shaped as the hunt goes on but I think they would be good together on a hunt. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: tomash (Signed) · Date: 20/08/09 07:16 PM · On: Day One
Happy to see another one of your stories, they're always great. Great start to this one - love Dean and Bobby together. K.
Author's Response: HI tomash Thank you, glad that you are still reading and enjoy my stories. I love Bobby and Dean together too! Cheers Maryx
Reviewer: Lbdba (Signed) · Date: 20/08/09 07:09 PM · On: Day One
Liking this!
Author's Response: Hi there Thanks for letting me know, I appreciate it! Mary x
Reviewer: eeyore (Signed) · Date: 20/08/09 06:13 PM · On: Day One
I'm really glad Bobby's there for Dean. Loved the banter between the two of them.
Author's Response: Hi there Yeah Bobby knows the signs when Dean is struggling, glad you like the banter (I love that word). Some more to come! Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: nurple_girl (Signed) · Date: 20/08/09 12:22 PM · On: Day One
This is a great start! Damn John and Sam. Love Bobby. I love the interaction ... Bobby is awesome. I hope you update soon.
Author's Response: Hi there Thank you. Glad you liked the start. There is a gradual build up to this story, not my usual throw you in at the deep end - that'll come later! I love Bobby, perhaps more than the boys sometimes! lol Cheers Mary x
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