Reviews For And The Walls Come Tumbling Down
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 22/09/09 03:35 PM · On: Day Three
I still want to smack John and Sam upside their respective heads. Love how Dean took care of Bobby! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 22/09/09 12:22 AM · On: Day Five
what a fantastic story this is. Poor Dean trapped under all that rubble. so glad he's not too seriously hurt, wonder if he's going to stay that way? can't wait for Sammy to join the party, will there be fireworks between him and John? Awesome job.
Reviewer: usaexpat (Signed) · Date: 21/09/09 06:55 PM · On: Day Five
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 21/09/09 05:05 PM · On: Day Five
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 21/09/09 03:38 PM · On: Day Five
Oh no. I've been playing catch-up, thoroughly enjoying myself at Dean's expense only to be stopped in my tracks by a cliff-hanger. Poor Dean trapped under who knows how many layers of concrete, he may be well equiped but he is injured - I don't know how long it takes for something like gangrene or other infection to set into a broken leg but I know it's bound to get worse not better without treatment. I wonder how John will react to Sam turning up? I'll sure they will resume their usual arguments as soon as Dean is safe. Looking forward to more despite the fact that I won't be able to check in for at least a week.
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 21/09/09 02:53 PM · On: Day Five
Dean is not badly injured and he has some food and water for few days, that's great news. Being pessimistic when talking about the Winchesters, he could be found only one, two and even three weeks after the collapsing. Hope, Sam, John and Bobby'll find him in time. I'm looking forward to more and some back story from Pauline. Awesome work so far Mary.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 21/09/09 09:17 AM · On: Day Five
You be nice to Dean lol, great update, it's all coming together nicely.
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 17/09/09 11:11 AM · On: Day Four/Five
Fantastic chapter, I hope that Dean isn't too badly hurt, but a hole building fell on him. How is Sam going to feel knowing he may never talk to his brother again. Looking forward to the next chapter, more soon....
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 17/09/09 06:11 AM · On: Day Four/Five
Poor Dean in trouble again, i can't wait for the next chapter, John, Bobby,Sam and Dean, well when they find him.
Reviewer: usaexpat (Signed) · Date: 17/09/09 04:09 AM · On: Day Four/Five
yikes... I didn't see the mall collapsing onto top of Dean...so glad that Sam is coming to help...great update
Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 17/09/09 12:51 AM · On: Day Four/Five
Dean buried! You can't leave it there! And Sam and John to the rescue. Awesome! absolutely fantastic story , I'm hooked, can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: eeyore (Signed) · Date: 16/09/09 09:25 PM · On: Day Four/Five
Noooo, you can't leave it here!! What about Dean!? I don't really approve of John's thought process but at least he was doing what he thought best for Dean.
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 16/09/09 07:36 PM · On: Day Four/Five
The suspense is building up. Yeah!John and Sam're coming, who is "it", Dean is he alright, can't wait for the next update to know.
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 16/09/09 07:36 PM · On: Day Four/Five
ok- i hate that you hid that in the title... hate that you tricked me by burying Dean in the mall and hate that I now have to wait for my Deanwhumpage till you post again... BUT- I love that I'm gonna get me some PapaWinGuilt and SammyGuilt- serves them right... heheee... seriously- I'm totally intrigued by Paulines words of warning... I dont honestly have an inkling of who "they" are... or why they sealed her up in the wall alive or how they are powerful enough to bring down the walls... hope you update quickly...
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 15/09/09 05:14 AM · On: Day Four, Part Two
Great chapter, loved John getting told off by Bobby , thought you were messing with us when the bear was called Sam lol. looking forward to the real Sam.
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 14/09/09 10:02 PM · On: Day Four, Part Two
Pauline didn't know what happened to her and who did this to her, that's not helping Dean. I've a bad feeling with DEan trying to found Pauline's body. I hate John when he's acting like this. I'm looking forward to your next update Mary.
Reviewer: eeyore (Signed) · Date: 14/09/09 09:51 PM · On: Day Four, Part Two
I really thought Pauline was going to hurt Dean at the beginning of the chapter, nice to know I was wrong. John is definitely a complete and total jerk for the way he's ignoring Dean, though it was nice of him to finally call him. Update soon please.
Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 14/09/09 07:54 PM · On: Day Four, Part Two
thank God for Bobby, seriously John is such an ass! can't wait to find out about the "it" Pauline keeps talking about. Great job
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 14/09/09 02:50 PM · On: Day Four, Part Two
I try not to hate John WInchester - but I'm really wanting to smack him right now... but- I also gotta tell you- you keep teasing me with the promise of more Dean and/or Bobby whumpage... come on woman- toss me a bone- hahahaha.... seriously- this is coming along nicely- and I'm totally intrigued of how John and Sam will play into this story. I get the vibe that they wont be from afar.
Reviewer: usaexpat (Signed) · Date: 14/09/09 11:51 AM · On: Day Four, Part Two
Once again I use my review to say that I love bobby and kuddios to him for telling off John...Loved how Dean managed to get a phone number off of a woman who had just been reunited with her lost child! great update
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 06/09/09 06:12 PM · On: Day Four
After Bobby, it's Dean's turn to meet Pauline's ghost. Why see tried to strangle him and talking about something that'll kill all of them if they don't go away, intriguing. Can't wait to know if Dean'll win the fight against Pauline.
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 06/09/09 03:43 PM · On: Day Four
Reviewer: eeyore (Signed) · Date: 05/09/09 10:56 PM · On: Day Four
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 05/09/09 01:25 PM · On: Day Four
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 05/09/09 01:07 PM · On: Day Three
Playing catch up here, and what fun I'm having. I just love all this Dean and Bobby banter. Your comment about Jim thinking he was at a tennis match had me laughing. Know just how he feels.
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