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Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 22/09/09 03:35 PM · On: Day Three

I still want to smack John and Sam upside their respective heads. Love how Dean took care of Bobby! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response:

HI there

Violent little thing ain'tcha? lol. Bobby always takes care of Dean, because someone has too!

Thanks, Mary x

Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 22/09/09 12:22 AM · On: Day Five

what a fantastic story this is. Poor Dean trapped under all that rubble. so glad he's not too seriously hurt, wonder if he's going to stay that way? can't wait for Sammy to join the party, will there be fireworks between him and John? Awesome job.

Author's Response:

Hi there

Yeah poor boy is buried and worse still John AND Sam are waiting for him to get found or find him..together! Fireworks might be on the cards but then Dean is missing so maybe they'll be good.

Thanks Mary x

Reviewer: usaexpat (Signed) · Date: 21/09/09 06:55 PM · On: Day Five

really you are going to be nice to Dean this time and only "hurt" him a little?  :-)

great update



Author's Response:

HI

I said I could be nice to Dean this time...I didn't say that I would be!

*smiles* Thanks Mary x

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 21/09/09 05:05 PM · On: Day Five

*sighs happily* loved this chapter.... got John on the scene- flashing a badge and taking charge.... got Bobby being guilty (poor guy) and got Sam hauling ass there... even better- got Dean all trapped and wounded... buried alive and calculating his odds of survival with no idea that his family is outside trying to get to him. Wonder if he'll even think they care or miss him...

Cant wait for the next update....



Author's Response:

Hi

I love how hurt Dean makes you soo happy! All gang are all here so all they have to do is get Dean out and figure out why the building fell, sounds simple....

Mary x

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 21/09/09 03:38 PM · On: Day Five

Oh no. I've been playing catch-up, thoroughly enjoying myself at Dean's expense only to be stopped in my tracks by a cliff-hanger.  Poor Dean trapped under who knows how many layers of concrete, he may be well equiped but he is injured - I don't know how long it takes for something like gangrene or other infection to set into a broken leg but I know it's bound to get worse not better without treatment. I wonder how John will react to Sam turning up? I'll sure they will resume their usual arguments as soon as Dean is safe.  Looking forward to more despite the fact that I won't be able to check in for at least a week.


Author's Response:

Hi

Sorry about that! Poor Dean indeed, buried and injured, haven't fully decided what I'm going to put him through injury wise yet but I know that there are other ways to torture our boy! John and Sam are next together with a little back story too.

Thanks, Mary x

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 21/09/09 02:53 PM · On: Day Five

Dean is not badly injured and he has some food and water for few days, that's great news. Being pessimistic when talking about the Winchesters, he could be found only one, two and even three weeks after the collapsing. Hope, Sam, John and Bobby'll find him in time. I'm looking forward to more and some back story from Pauline. Awesome work so far Mary. 

Author's Response:

HI

Yeah Dean is stocked for a couple of days at least, now would I leave him buried for long? Might then again...teehee.

Pauline will be up next, Mary x

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 21/09/09 09:17 AM · On: Day Five

You be nice to Dean lol, great update, it's all coming together nicely.

Author's Response:

Hey Lindsay

I can be, on occasions! lol

Thanks, Mary x

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 17/09/09 11:11 AM · On: Day Four/Five

Fantastic chapter, I hope that Dean isn't too badly hurt, but a hole building fell on him.  How is Sam going to feel knowing he may never talk to his brother again.  Looking forward to the next chapter, more soon....

Author's Response:

HI Maureen

Thanks! Yeah, I brought the lot down on him! Sam and John's feelings will play in this big time and well as Dean's own thoughts while he is stuck. Bobby might have his work cut out!

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 17/09/09 06:11 AM · On: Day Four/Five

Poor Dean in trouble again, i can't wait for the next chapter, John, Bobby,Sam and Dean, well when they find him.

Author's Response:

Hey

Yeah, that's soo unlike me isn't it? I really need to write something that pounds on Sam for a change! lol

All the boys together next...get what you mean -l Dean is there even if I did bury him!

THanks, Mary x

Reviewer: usaexpat (Signed) · Date: 17/09/09 04:09 AM · On: Day Four/Five

yikes... I didn't see the mall collapsing onto top of Dean...so glad that Sam is coming to help...great update

Author's Response:

Hey

I thought someone actually might have guessed that that was what I was going to do, I left a few very subtle hints in some of the chapters but I didn't want anyone to guess, so I'm pleased that I caught you all by surprise!

Sam and John are on their way.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 17/09/09 12:51 AM · On: Day Four/Five

Dean buried! You can't leave it there! And Sam and John to the rescue. Awesome! absolutely fantastic story , I'm hooked, can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Hey

I know, I am soo bad. You can call me names, it's ok, I deserve them. lol!

Glad you're liking this so much, it's fun to write!

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: eeyore (Signed) · Date: 16/09/09 09:25 PM · On: Day Four/Five

Noooo, you can't leave it here!! What about Dean!?  I don't really approve of John's thought process but at least he was doing what he thought best for Dean. 

Author's Response:

Hey

Evil I know! Dean is up next!

John's thought process is fractured sometimes but usually he is trying to keep the boys as safe as he can.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 16/09/09 07:36 PM · On: Day Four/Five

The suspense is building up. Yeah!John and Sam're coming, who is "it", Dean is he alright, can't wait for the next update to know. 

Author's Response:

Hey there

Thanks. John and Sam are on their way and that might not be pretty!

Is Dean alright? Would I hurt our boy? Wait - I killed him in the last thing I wrote so....no - no deathfic but he is kinda stuck!

CHeers Mary x

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 16/09/09 07:36 PM · On: Day Four/Five

ok- i hate that you hid that in the title... hate that you tricked me by burying Dean in the mall and hate that I now have to wait for my Deanwhumpage till you post again... BUT- I love that I'm gonna get me some PapaWinGuilt and SammyGuilt- serves them right... heheee... seriously- I'm totally intrigued by Paulines words of warning... I dont honestly have an inkling of who "they" are... or why they sealed her up in the wall alive or how they are powerful enough to bring down the walls... hope you update quickly...

Author's Response:

I am evil ain't I? I love that nobody guessed. I did think that tpeople would think the title referred to Dean's walls not the actual ones and I think it worked nicely! teehee.

I did leave little hints of what was to come in the first few chapters. Dean's unease, Pauline looking up when she spoke of 'it'.

Woman, I dropped a building on his head! How much more whump do you want?? lol More to come and probably not all physical. And yeah, Papa and Sammy guilt on the way!

Pauline's words of warning will become clearer when Sam and Bobby start to fully work the case, the hows and the whys will be slowly revealed.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 15/09/09 05:14 AM · On: Day Four, Part Two

Great chapter, loved John getting told off by Bobby , thought you were messing with us when the bear was called Sam lol. looking forward to the real Sam.

Author's Response:

Hi there

I love Bobby tearing John one. I could resist naming the bear Sam for a little laugh!

Real Sam up next! Poor boy!

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 14/09/09 10:02 PM · On: Day Four, Part Two

Pauline didn't know what happened to her and who did this to her, that's not helping Dean. I've a bad feeling with DEan trying to found Pauline's body. I hate John when he's acting like this. I'm looking forward to your next update Mary.

Author's Response:

Hi there

Pauline is confused. She knows something important she just can't tell Dean what it is. You're bad feeling maybe right but it may have nothing to do with Pauline's body! *evil smile* John is naughty in this but he will come good, promise!

CHeers Mary x

Reviewer: eeyore (Signed) · Date: 14/09/09 09:51 PM · On: Day Four, Part Two

I really thought Pauline was going to hurt Dean at the beginning of the chapter, nice to know I was wrong.  John is definitely a complete and total jerk for the way he's ignoring Dean, though it was nice of him to finally call him.  Update soon please.

Author's Response:

Hi there

Nah, Pauline is not the bad guy in this. John is a jerk but that will change and soon!

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 14/09/09 07:54 PM · On: Day Four, Part Two

thank God for Bobby, seriously John is such an ass! can't wait to find out about the "it" Pauline keeps talking about. Great job


Author's Response:

Hi

Yeah Bobby is a good guy, I have a reason for John being such an ass, it will be obvious soon!

The it is revealed next and I don't think anyone has guessed what is coming! teehee

Mary x

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 14/09/09 02:50 PM · On: Day Four, Part Two

I try not to hate John WInchester - but I'm really wanting to smack him right now... but- I also gotta tell you- you keep teasing me with the promise of more Dean and/or Bobby whumpage... come on woman- toss me a bone- hahahaha.... seriously- this is coming along nicely- and I'm totally intrigued of how John and Sam will play into this story. I get the vibe that they wont be from afar.

Author's Response:

Hey Tree

That's alright 'cos I have a reason for making John such an ass!

Teasing is over in the next chapter, big time! Whumpage in the way for everyone!

John and Sam will be in the next chapter, I know 'cos it's written! And no, their roles won't be from afar not after CH7! Ooops I'm teasing again ain't I?? lol

Mary x

Reviewer: usaexpat (Signed) · Date: 14/09/09 11:51 AM · On: Day Four, Part Two

Once again I use my review to say that I love bobby and kuddios to him for telling off John...Loved how Dean managed to get a phone number off of a woman who had just been reunited with her lost child!  great update

Author's Response:

Hey there

I love Bobby too! He's the business! And yeah what is Dean like - ten minutes and he's got her number! Go Dean!

 Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 06/09/09 06:12 PM · On: Day Four

After Bobby, it's Dean's turn to meet Pauline's ghost. Why see tried to strangle him and talking about something that'll kill all of them if they don't go away, intriguing. Can't wait to know if Dean'll win the fight against Pauline.

Author's Response:

Hi

Yeah Dean gets a go around with Pauline's ghost.

Thanks Mary x

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 06/09/09 03:43 PM · On: Day Four

Well- you got me hooked on another story, Mary.... LOL... Here I was thinking that once they identified Pauline- it would be a simple salt and burn kinda thing... guess not....

Hope Bobby is watching Dean on the CCTV... or somebody goes gets him quick...



Author's Response:

Hi there

That's good, glad you like - Pauline's ghost is going to be the least of their problems...believe me!

Cavalery is on its way, but Dean won't be happy to see it! Mary x

Reviewer: eeyore (Signed) · Date: 05/09/09 10:56 PM · On: Day Four

Dean better get his legs back under him before the ghost shows back up.  I love the dialogue and camaraderie between Bobby and Dean.  I really hope John decides to pick up his cell and call Dean soon.

 



Author's Response:

Hi Eeyore

Dean will get back up and a little help coming his way. I'm glad you like Dean and Bobby together, they are fun to write.

John and Sam up next, cheers, Mary x

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 05/09/09 01:25 PM · On: Day Four

Dean in trouble, now the story really gets going, since I know how much you like hurting him Smudge.

Hoping for a quick update.



Author's Response:

HI

Dean' s is in a little trouble, and the story will pick up in the next chapter or two.

Me?    Hurt Dean?     *shakes head*     Never?      *smiles evilly*    ok, but is is soo much fun!

CHeers Mary x

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 05/09/09 01:07 PM · On: Day Three

Playing catch up here, and what fun I'm having. I just love all this Dean and Bobby banter. Your comment about Jim thinking he was at a tennis match had me laughing. Know just how he feels.


Author's Response:

Hi Anne!

Thanks for reviewing. Glad you like this one, Bobby and Dean are fun to write, their banter is much lighter than when you have Sam or John in the picture.

I felt that way (the tennis match) when I was writing so I thought that I'd throw in the line!

CHeers Mary x

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