Supernaturalville
Reviewer: eeyore (Signed) · Date: 22/10/09 09:45 PM · On: Day Five/Six

I'm glad Bobby had that talk with Sam, he needed to have some sense knocked into him.  I think it's kind of cute how Pauline is helping Dean.  Btw, when is he getting out?  Is Sam going to find him now or does he have to stay a few more days.  nice chapter as always.



Author's Response:

Hey there

Bobby lost it a little cos he's upset too but Sam did need to hear it! Pauline might not be cute for long...maybe! *smiles evily and whistles*

 Did I say he was getting out?? Only kidding....would I do that? Don't answer that! Few more days - at least.

Thanks, Mary x

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 22/10/09 05:20 AM · On: Day Five/Six

Brilliant update, we know Sam loves Dean but i'm glad Bobby gave him  a telling off.

Author's Response:

Hey

Yeah all the Winchester love each other if they could just show it sometimes!

Thanks, Mary x

Reviewer: tomash (Signed) · Date: 22/10/09 05:04 AM · On: Day Five/Six

Awesome Mary, really been hanging for this update, love this story.  Go Bobby, telling it like it is.  Hope you can update soon.  Thanks K.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Sorry it took forever to update this, the next one should be quicker. Bobby always says whats on his mind, it's why we love him!

More soon, I hope! Mary xx

Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 22/10/09 12:54 AM · On: Day Five/Six

brilliant update. I love Bobby telling Sam a few home truths. Both Sam and John take Dean for granted it's nice to see he has someone on his side.

Author's Response:

Hey,

Thanks! I love Bobby having at the Winchesters as well. It's fun to write. And he's always on Dean's side really, even when he's kicking his backside! Mary xx

Reviewer: CatzEye (Signed) · Date: 21/10/09 11:14 PM · On: Day Five

Oh my! - You do a wonderful hurt & hoping Dean - I really look forward to reading more of this story - Such a wonderful job, so far! :)

Author's Response:

Hey there

Thank you, I do try - love me some hurt Dean!  Glad you are enjoying, more soon, Mary x

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 21/10/09 05:53 PM · On: Day Five/Six

Fantastic chapter, really glad to read it, Bobby telling Sam off was just the best, Dean has lasted 6 days, how much longer can he hold out? Are they getting anywhere near him?  Please post again soon, Thanks

Author's Response:

Hey

Thanks Maureen, I was glad to finally get it posted! Bobby has his moments! He's going to have to hold out a little longer. *smiles*

Are they getting anywhere near? Not yet.

I'll post as soon as I can. Mary x

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 21/10/09 03:51 PM · On: Day Five/Six

Loved the update!  It did make me teary eyed when Sam  realized  how badly he'd treated Dean. I just ache for Dean here, too. All he wanted was a bit of Sam's time and he couldn't even get 5 minutes of it. I hope Sam realizes  how selfish he's been (seems like he has). Dean still in bad shape and Pauline's request was quite alarming!  I can't wait to read the next part.

Author's Response:

Hey there

Thanks, glad you liked! Yeah Sam's got a lot of guilt in this one. And Dean's got a lot of hurt, in more ways than one.

Pauline isn't quite all there so she may be worth the watching! :)

Thanks, Mary x

Reviewer: eeyore (Signed) · Date: 01/10/09 11:56 PM · On: Day Five, Part Two

A helpful ghost, I liked how Pauline helped Dean out (poor boy hurting so much).  I liked the emotion you put into John and Sam in this chapter.



Author's Response:

Hey

Yeah Pauline will be with him for a bit. Thanks for the lovely comments re Sam and John, I like an emotional John!

Mary xx

Reviewer: turch (Signed) · Date: 30/09/09 08:38 PM · On: Day Five, Part Two

This is just amazing. I'm looking forward to more! :)


Author's Response:

Hey there

Thank you so much! Glad you are enjoying! Mary xx

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 30/09/09 02:14 PM · On: Day Five, Part Two

Thanks for the update. Love that Pauline came to help Dean after she heard his scream, and love John's phone call to Dean. Brings tears to my eyes.

Hope the next update will be soon.

 



Author's Response:

Hey Anne

Pauline will be there for Dean on and off now. I liked the call too, poor John, poor Dean!

Mary x

 

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 30/09/09 04:54 AM · On: Day Five, Part Two

Okay, I got caught up on this story today...and, oh my goodness, Dean trapped is very serious!  They need to find him now!  You definitely know how to keep things on edge.  Great job!

Author's Response:

Hey

Yup, I stuck our boy in the rubble! teehee.

Have a good hol! Not jealous in the slightest. *sits with green face*

Mary xx

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 29/09/09 07:29 AM · On: Day Five, Part Two

A fantastic chapter, i'm loving all of them being together, at least Dean's got company even if she is a ghost.

Author's Response:

HI there

Thanks as always! The gang is all here and Dean still ends up with the girl! lol

Mary xx

Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 28/09/09 07:55 PM · On: Day Five, Part Two

Mary,

John not wanting to stop to eat or drink anything.  so like a Dad.

Yeah Sam is there finally.

i like how you have Pauline staying with Dean.  comforting knowing our hero isn't alone.

Renee



Author's Response:

Hey

Yeah if is was my son they would have to drag me away too.

Sam has reach them and now he has to see his father.

Pauline has a role to play with Dean, hope you like it. Mary x

Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 28/09/09 07:37 PM · On: Day Five, Part Two

that last voice mail from John was heart wrenching. I'm so glad Dean at least has Pauline there with him. The way you describe her head injury and the effect it's had on her is so heartbreaking. I can't wait for Dean to make it out of there and catch up with the guys that did that to her. Brilliant job thankyou

Author's Response:

Hey

Yes John is worried about his son and this is the only way that he has to show it. Glad you like what I'm doing with Pauline, she has a fairly big part in this.

Mary xx

Reviewer: Lbdba (Signed) · Date: 28/09/09 07:18 PM · On: Day Five, Part Two

Excellent! Loved it!

Corina



Author's Response:

Hey Corina

Thank You! Mary xx

Reviewer: Lbdba (Signed) · Date: 28/09/09 07:17 PM · On: Day Five, Part Two

Excellent! Loved it!

Corina

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 28/09/09 06:45 PM · On: Day Five, Part Two

awwww..... that last voicemail from John was just sooooo sweet- wth can't the man do that when his son is right in front of him????

Another great chapter Mary- and the plot thickens- with the City planning guy... cant wait to find out what he did - although I think I'm pretty sure I know now...



Author's Response:

Hey

Yeah, John can have his moments, just not often enough for his son's liking.

The plot is kind of in your face from here on in but I will have a twist or two to come!

Thanks, Mary x

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 28/09/09 01:41 PM · On: Day Five, Part Two

What an heartwrenching chapter. Thank goodness, Pauline is there with Dean helping him the best she can. Mary, so a good story so far, I want more already.

Author's Response:

Hey

Thanks, Dean has a little company in the dark, which is as about as nice as I'm gonna be to him!

Mary x

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 28/09/09 11:03 AM · On: Day Five, Part Two

Very intense, Poor Dean I don't know how they are going to get down to him in time. But I hope they do can't wait for the next post.

Author's Response:

Hey Maureen

Thank you. Yeah Dean situation isn't the best even with his family and Bobby there to help.

Mary x

Reviewer: usaexpat (Signed) · Date: 28/09/09 07:54 AM · On: Day Five, Part Two

oh Sam and John are going to meet up...this out to be good!  great update

glad that Pauline helped Dean..He should ask her if she can try and get out of the building as sfar as she can and contact bobby...ifshe is still there when Dean wakes up



Author's Response:

Hey

Yeah, time to get John and Sam together, that'll be fun!

Dean has a little help, crazy ghost help but then beggers can't be choosers!

Thanks Mary x

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 26/09/09 12:51 PM · On: Day Five

dang, I tried to paste and copy but it wouldn't do it! Anyway...so Dean figures he's not badly injured (broken bones need to be set quickly, Dean!). At least he's aware and not dying. I hope they can get to him soon! I can't wait to read the next chapter, so please, please post soon!

Author's Response:

Hi

Dean knows that a broken leg is seriously but he's more thankful that he is still breathing!

Next chapter is up, hope you like, Mary xx

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 26/09/09 12:37 PM · On: Day Four/Five

Yikes! Did the mall just collapse on Dean? What is it? Sam is now involved and worried. I have to read the next chapter now!


Author's Response:

Hi

It did! Sam and John will both be on their ways soon!

Thanks Mary x

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 26/09/09 11:56 AM · On: Day Four, Part Two

Uh oh, that last bit doesn't sound good. Loved the scene with Dean and the little girl. Sometimes he is so good with children, sigh... I believe Bobby should be worried about leaving Dean alone, he should listen to his instincts and not Dean's! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Hey

It doesn't does it! If you only knew what I know! lol

And you're right Bobby should be worried!

Thanks, Mary xx

Reviewer: eeyore (Signed) · Date: 24/09/09 12:02 AM · On: Day Five

I love hurt Dean in small enclosed areas.  I'm glad that John finally decided to show up and that Sam's on his way.  The three of them will get Dean out.



Author's Response:

HI

I love hurt Dean, I just wish I was the one that got to kiss it better! Three heads to figure things out and to dig for our boy, all they have to do is behave!

Thanks, Mary x

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 22/09/09 03:44 PM · On: Day Four

Hmmmm....I wonder who or what "it" is? Seems like Pauline is warning people off, maybe that "it" did her in as well. Loved the banter between Bobby and Dean! I wanted to tell Dean that his so called family did not call, so don't worry about it! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!!

Author's Response:

HI there

You'll find out in the next chapter! Glad you are liking Bobby and Dean but I will be breaking up the party soon!

Thanks, Maryx

You must login (register) to review.





Affiliates

Supernatural is ©2006 The CW Television Network. Other content is copyright the original owners. Original content is ©2006 Supernaturaville.net