I miss this story. I went back and re-read it from the beginning!  I love seeing Dean stand up to John and Sam. Painful, but nice to see him having some control and not just letting himself be used and abused. I know this story has just about run it's course, it could end here, but I hope you could add just a little more to give it closer. I enjoy your writing.  Thanks so much for sharing your gift. 

I don't blame Dean for telling Sam to go back to school. It's really where he'd rather be if push came to shove (and it did so to speak). I found it sad that they had to burn Pauline's bones, that she didn't go to where ever on her own. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response:

Hi

Dean knows Sam is going to go back so it's easier if it is on his terms this time, when he is ready for him to leave. Sorry to see Pauline go myself, I kinda like her! Mary xx

Owwww!!!! My heart just hurt for Dean through this. You could just hear the edge in his tone as he spoke with Sam and John- all the pain and anger and hurt just below the surface that even a blind man could see and feel but those two are still soooo unaffected by. They just dont get him- even after nearly losing him... its almost tragic.

I loved the chapter- didnt mind waiting for it at all! Hell- we've all been this boat before- dont worry!

Thanks for not giving up on it!

Tree

Author's Response:

Hi

Long time no speak! lol Pesky PCs

I love angsty Dean so I'm glad you got the sentiments. JOhn and Sam are blind, they need a good kick sometimes I think!

Dean Winchester is my role model, never give in. Now if I can just get my muse to write the other stories that are waiting for some love and attention.... :)

Mary xx

John and Sam'll never change, snarking at each other while Dean's in a coma state. Two weeks later and he finally woke up, what a relief. It's time for Dean to take Pauline at her final rest, awww... it's going to be a heartbreaking moment.

Pauline got her revenge but Dean has been injured in the process, hope he's not badly hurted. Terrific update, it was worthy, can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

Hey Ocean

Sorry about the delay in the reply, just wanted to say thank you for sticking with this! Mary x

Fantastic, Poor Dean he's just a magnet for trouble. Now he's shot as well??  Where did Pauline go?  I'm sure she'll be back to check up on Dean.  Looking forward to another post,  is John and Sam still going to hang around even after Dean told them to get gone?  Thanks.

Author's Response:

Hi Maureen

He really is isn't he?

Just wanted to say thanks for sticking with this, means a lot especially since you've been with me a long time and not just on this one!  mary xx

Yay! So happy that you've updated again! And what a Great update it was! :)

Author's Response:

Hey there

Thank you, glad you like it. Next chapter is now up, hope you like that too!

Mary xx

Yeah an updated!  I had forgotten about this story..glad to see you hadn't!  LOL.

Like how Dean was picking Bobby over Sam and John...and I think it was a nice touch what he did with Pauline...good update

Author's Response:

Hey

Don't worry I won't forget it. It will get finished as will the others I have floundering on the site. It's my mission for this year! lol

Thanks, Mary xx

Great update, I love it when Dean is in charge, not letting John dictate to him, hope he stays like that after the job is finished and doesn't go back to like it was before.  More soon Thanks...

Author's Response:

Hey

Thanks. Dean gets to stay in charge for a little while and there's a little more hurt to come!

Mary x

can't wait to see their faces when they're confronted with Dean and Pauline. Great job, looking forward to more.

I really like this twist, that they are actually going to use a spirit to dole out some well deserved justice. I hope Dean is up to it though. Looking forward to the next chapter.

woo hooo pauline to the rescue well she did get him into even more trouble but she did save him.  so glad to see an update to the story!  good job

Yah! welcome back. Just love Pauline. If only all ghosts were like her the boys would have nothing better to do than sunbake topless on the hood of the impala! Sorry got distracted there for a moment!

great chapter can't wait for next.