Reviewer: bonnie (Signed) · Date: 01/10/07 12:43 AM · On: Frustrated Unnoticed
Very Very SLEEEEEEKKKKKK and well performed.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: bonnie (Signed) · Date: 30/09/07 11:52 PM · On: From the Inside
Dammmmmmm u!!!!!!!!!!! Beotch, this is tramaticlly good. I LOVVVVVVVVVVVVE it, keep going. Look out next season this whould be good for it.
Author's Response: Thank you! Speaking of next season... I can't wait to watch it!
Reviewer: bonnie (Signed) · Date: 30/09/07 11:43 PM · On: Fear of the Dark
So far so good keep it coming. Np pne story is perfect, but the way it is imaged you are to perfect to go wrong for i can see it happening.
Author's Response: Thanks loads - and I agree, stories can have their faults and moments that each reader cringes at so I hope you enjoy this one and don't have too many cringing moments.
Reviewer: bonnie (Signed) · Date: 30/09/07 10:54 PM · On: Fight the Good Fight
Wow this story is makeing Freddy Cruger look like a Martha Chucky Jason Stewert. Good for a promo for 3rd season.
Author's Response: Again - thank you for reading. Lol - nice analogy. :)
Reviewer: bonnie (Signed) · Date: 30/09/07 10:36 PM · On: Abomination
A gooe third season clip, Just need a supersized gulp and popcorn w/ extra butter and I am hooked.
Author's Response: Heya - Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 28/09/07 07:10 PM · On: Forgotten
Aha! Very interesting....see you soon!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: POOKEE (Signed) · Date: 24/09/07 08:37 AM · On: Forgotten
Rae, Bravo! This chapter brings full circle Dean's undying will to protect Sammy. Even trading his guardian angel. Very touching. Carry on wayward author! Pook
Author's Response: Heya! Thanks loads. I love protective Dean and I just feel so much for him because he'd do anything for his family... bless him. So thank you so much! :)
Reviewer: IHeartSam (Signed) · Date: 24/09/07 06:13 AM · On: Forgotten
wow im absolutely loving this story! its great-all those visions from sam at first turning out to be a trap from the demon and then dean with his nonburning! oooo and the exciting twist of the angle/demon becky thing! great idea-totally unexpected! xx
Author's Response: Thank you loads for reading! I'm really glad you're enjoying and you like the twist!!!
Reviewer: IHeartSam (Signed) · Date: 24/09/07 04:39 AM · On: From the Inside
aww but we all love the angst! great chappy
Author's Response: Lol - yeah, the angst is so tasty - thanks! :)
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 22/09/07 10:43 PM · On: Forgotten
Becky is an angel and Dean trade her for Sam to stay safe, what a revelation. It's getting more and more intriguing, what'll happen next, can't wait to know.
Author's Response: Thanks loads for reading :) I'm hoping I'll have some time to get some more writing done soon :)
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 22/09/07 08:37 PM · On: Forgotten
Ah ha! So he traded his guradian angels to be fireproof and protect Sam? Cool!
Author's Response: :D I decided to go for the cute and innocent big brother thing, lol - so yeah, giving up his guardian angels. 0:)
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 22/09/07 08:30 PM · On: Firth of Fifth
Another out of the blue surprise! Amazing! I'm stunned!
Author's Response: Lol - but who she is is revealed next chapter so I'm not totally cruel on this one, then again it is a kinda doubletake type moment. :D
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 22/09/07 08:15 PM · On: Flat on the Floor
Pyromaniac is definitely more Dean's speed. Every chapter adds a few more pieces of the puzzle, but it seems that with every piece you add I find the puzzle just gets larger. There are more questions than answers. Hope to figure it all out.
Author's Response: Dean's started so many fires that he really could be seen as a pyromaniac, lol - and in the episode bugs... the can of bug spray as a mini flametorch - priceless. And I'm also really bad for that, bringing more question out instead of the really need to know answers - :) but glad you're still reading!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 22/09/07 08:07 PM · On: Far Away
"Did 'freak' run in the family?" Hilarious! Sam's sarcasm over Dean's condition is funny. Great banter between the boys.
Author's Response: He he - thanks! Glad you liked it!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 22/09/07 07:55 PM · On: Fall Into Sleep
Wow! Dean is going to have a hard time dealing with having abilities like the demon's special kids. This really has me wondering.
Author's Response: The way you put it makes me feel guilty, lol - but not guilty enough to stop being cruel to him :D
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 22/09/07 07:46 PM · On: Faint
So this isn't the first time Dean ahs played with fire and not gotten burned. Very interesting!
Author's Response: When I finally decided why Dean didn't burn, it opened up a whole world of possibilites, lol - including this one!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 22/09/07 07:43 PM · On: Fly By Night
That demon is so tricky. He wanted them to escape? The vision might still come to pass as Sam has imagined?
Author's Response: Yeah... evil manipulative demon that old yellow eyes is. As for the vision... the part with the girl was twisted.... distorted by the demon to lure them there... but as the girl was Amii, the part where he killed the girl came true :D As for Dean... I have plans for Dean >:D
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 22/09/07 07:38 PM · On: Fly Away
I should have known they wouldn't get free before a demon came to visit. I love the joking between the brothers.
Author's Response: Fate just has it in for the Winchesters. Glad you like the joking, I love writing dialogue!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 22/09/07 07:33 PM · On: Firelight
More of Amii--gotta love that devil! I'm full of anticipation---why doesn't dean burn? (that sounds bizarre!)
Author's Response: I dunno... maybe Amii was just misguided, lol. I'm looking at the chapter number and I'm thinking... was I really so cruel to keep the answer unknown for so long... eek.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 22/09/07 07:24 PM · On: Filthy and Gorgeous
The little minx is back to play again? I kind of like her---as far as demonic vixens go she's all right.
Author's Response: I don't mind her so much actually, lol - she's got this really weird vibe...
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 22/09/07 07:15 PM · On: Funkytown
Good---things are starting to heat up! Can't wait to see how they get out of the mess you've outlined.
Author's Response: When I fwrote this - I don't think I had any idea how they were going to get out of it... lol!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 22/09/07 07:08 PM · On: Female of the Species
What's sweet F.A.? Wonderful surprise! I wsn't expecting the girl to be the demon.
Author's Response: Sweet F.A. - Pretty much means 'nothing at all', F standing for erm... a word that rhymes with duck and A standing for All. :D I think I probably heard it in a movie or something many years ago...
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 22/09/07 07:01 PM · On: Father and Son
Bringing up the memory of all the sunrises Sam had shared with special people throughout the course of his life was a nice touch. How clever! Using the tiny wedge of inadequacy that the demon exposed in Dean in the cabin to his advantage, yet agin.
Author's Response: I like sunrises and sunsets... and the chapter kinda made it's own way from Sam just wanting to escape the motel room for a little bit to a trip down memory lane - so I'm pleased you like it! And I thought hey, while I'm at it, let's make it so Dean knows about Sam and his Dad's time of no fighting! >:D 'Cause I'm mean that way.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 22/09/07 06:53 PM · On: Feel Bad Vibe
"A Winchester's cry of pain ws a definite source of pleasure"----great line! I like your explaination of how Dean knows when Sam is staring at him.
Author's Response: Thanks :D And the explanation, lol - I wrote the scene with Sam staring and Dean telling him off and sat thinking to myself 'so what, you're making him psychic now?' - had to have an explatnation so I'm glad you liked it!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 22/09/07 06:38 PM · On: Falling Down
I like in the beginning paragraph your explanation of Dean's pride toward Sam and how he expresses it. I also like the countdown format. It helps build the suspense. Like the demon, I'm also curious as to why Dean isn't burning.
Author's Response: Thank you! I really can't get enough of the brotherly love between Sam and Dean, it's just so damn sweet...! So I'm guilty for including it whenever possible :D And the countdown, thanks!!! :D
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