Reviewer: reece6521 (Signed) · Date: 28/11/07 05:39 PM · On: Figured You Out
Definitely still enjoying. I don't mind a gap between chapters as we don't have internet at work anymore, so I'm taking a while to review all the stories I'm following. Loving the twists and turns in this one, I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're still enjoying :) I get really really bad if I can't get on the internet... it's kind of scary actually, he he. Again - thanks!
Reviewer: jane (Signed) · Date: 24/11/07 07:13 AM · On: Abomination
Shesh that was a horrific start to the fic. What is it that's kept the flames off Dean? Talk about hook me on and reel me into the story. Great stuff! Bring on the next chapter, I say. Jane :)
Author's Response: Heya! Thanks so much for reading. Hope you enjoy the rest of what's posted :)
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 23/11/07 12:52 AM · On: Figured You Out
Of course I'm still enjoying it Rae.... enough to be very patient! Update whenever you can, I'll be around to read and review!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you're still enjoying and I'll try and update sooner because it's only fair that your patience is rewarded. :D Thanks again!
Reviewer: supernaturalpass (Signed) · Date: 22/11/07 10:17 PM · On: Figured You Out
Not telling the whole truth is lying! Silly demon, doesn't he know that? Can't wait for another chapter, I gotta know what Sam's gonna say! Update soon...and don't worry, I wont let anyone shoot you. :-)
Author's Response: Oh... it is? I must stop not telling the whole truth... :D Thanks so much for reading and thanks for not letting anybody shoot me! :D I feel safe now I know I have a bodyguard!
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 22/11/07 07:50 PM · On: Figured You Out
Riveting chapter Rae. The demon is hurting Dean, Sam doesn't want to shoot in case he hit Dean. The demon wants both of them. What a cliffhanger, can't wait to know what'll happen next.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading. :) I'm glad I was finally able to post the chapter, eep! :D But yeah, nasty cliffhanger..
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 22/11/07 04:42 PM · On: Figured You Out
ohhh, we so knew that becky had been Dean's guardian angel....but this is a whole new ballgame..rae. Please don't make us wait another month for the next update....please
Author's Response: I'll try not to make you wait so long. I hate making you wait... I really do! Thank you so much for reading - I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!!!
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 22/11/07 03:36 PM · On: Figured You Out
That was CHILLING Rae! Very intense. Dean's reaction to the reminder that he traded his guardian angel was so well done - shock, disbelief...Her taunting words of what could have been rubbing it in. But we know that as horrible as that trade is, Dean would have no regrets if it saved Sammy. But as usual, everything Dean does has a high price for himself. And your peek at the real Angel as you allowed us to steal a look through the possession "oh God, Dean...No..no...I'm sorry" as she tried to catch his unfocussed eyes" My heart in tatters for both Dean and the Angel. Your ending was absolutely kicka$$! What an eerie but fabulous suggestion. "...if I can turn him, then you'll follow' - How to get Sam leading the army because of his loyalty and love for Dean, how to get Dean protecting Sam in that role because of his loyalty and love for Sam *Awesome* And THAT line - "Sam, you're my favourite" mega creepy in the show, mega creepy in your fic. It's hotting up again, no pun intended!!! Top job!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll really pleased you enjoyed it. And you're right, Dean would definately have no regrets if it save Sam. He'd do it again in a heartbeat if he had to. As for the Angel, I feel bad for throwing her into the mix and infecting her with the demon... okay, maybe I don't feel really bad.. but I should. Don't you just love the Winchesters and how they have each others backs? The loyalty is wonderful and sometimes I just wonder how far it would go. He he - "you're my favourite". I love that line, I had to use it :D Again - thank you so much!
Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 22/11/07 03:25 PM · On: Figured You Out
Brilliant chapter! It was totally worth the wait. The suspense was great and the ending was very menacing... I become hooked on this story again every time you post a new chapter. Awesome work! No worries, I will always be sticking with you Rae :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Your reviews mean so much. :D I'm really glad you'll be sticking with me, he he - puts my mind at ease but I'll try not to let it make me lazy.
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 22/11/07 02:45 PM · On: Figured You Out
I have no idea how I missed the last few updates! But I'm really glad I found this! Wow, what a great story, and it just keeps getting better and better. Damn demon! Don't worry about the updates, I know the longer I work on something, the better it comes...take your time! You're amazing! ~Kayla
Author's Response: Thanks! I miss updates all the time... I miss A LOT of updates... and I really should catch up. Thanks so much for reading. I really appreciate it and I'm really glad that you're enjoying. Thanks loads!
Reviewer: Phoenix_Song778 (Signed) · Date: 22/11/07 02:25 PM · On: Figured You Out
A possessed angel huh? Pretty neat twist! Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks! :D I'm really glad you like it!
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 22/11/07 01:55 PM · On: Figured You Out
Love it.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: darkangel (Signed) · Date: 22/11/07 12:48 PM · On: Figured You Out
I am loving this story
can't wait to see what happends next
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It really means so much reading that!
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 09/11/07 06:58 PM · On: Follow You Home
Go Sam! I'm loving the no-nonsense protective!sam here, Dean totally out of hunter mode with his guilt. We are seeing more of this decisive, maybe harsher Sam in S3 so I'm into him here in your fic too. My fav scene was Sam's fierce defence of his brother when faced with Dean's despair and guilt: “I hurt her Sam…” Dean admitted, “I could see it in her eyes…” “What are you supposed to have done, huh? How did you hurt her? You couldn’t hurt anyone Dean… you’re not the bad guy.” You have me swinging from loving an angel to hating the demon. I hope our boys can salvage her without hurt to themselves. Awesome chapter. Great, I'm all caught up, ready to go!!
Author's Response: Oh no! You can't catch up! Nooo! 'Cause even though most of the next chapter is done... I don't know when it'll be up! :O Oh No! Again, I have to say thanks for taking the time to read and write reviews - they make me smile and want to write more ASAP. Protective Sam is really great, he's like a mother bear or wolf! I love having him there to look out for Dean so I can break the poor guy... He he, hating the demon is good... more from the boys, Becky and the YED soon hopefully. Eeek! Now I have to do actual writing!
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 09/11/07 06:22 PM · On: Forgotten
She's an angel?? Dean traded an angel when he was only 5?? Holy Sh1t! Another deal to save Sammy?? Dean is a link between angels and fire?? My head is spinning - I have a bucket of questions!! Your flashback was divine. John's handling of his little boy and his grief for Mary triggered by tucking Dean in was beautifully written. Thanks *wistful smile* Dean blurting "I'm bringing a girl back to the motel" no wonder he got the response he did from Sam!
Author's Response: Yips, Dean had a guardian angel :O But he gave her up... kinda makes me wonder how his life would have been if he hadn't. I'm pleased you liked the flashback. I really enjoy writing them, especially when John is still in father mode because the guy deserves some good press, he he. Thank you again!
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 09/11/07 05:57 PM · On: Firth of Fifth
Holy freakin' Moly, the plot thickens!!! and she was so sad...Dean afraid of the answer "tight throat barely allowing the words to be squeezed out" that I just know it's not gunna be good... Sam staring at the closed door "I'm not asking you to" felt very sad... *sigh* Even sadder was Dean's "my mom's dead. She couldn't lie to me or hurt me" *sob*
Author's Response: He he... I love sad Dean... Why am I so cruel? Hmm... As for Sam's last line, I feel bad about the position both bro's are in... poor Sammy and poor Dean. Thank you absolute loads!!!!
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 09/11/07 05:27 PM · On: Flat on the Floor
WOW, this was an awesome chapter! This whole fic has been intriguing, compelling, but the STYLE of ch one is wicked. The way you interspersed those unbelievably appropriate lyrics, both boys’ intense thoughts and THEN the surprise of the YED’s observations – outstanding! All interwoven to create a complete picture in my head. Loved the cute one liners, the digs about “does my bum look big?” and “that’s not how compliments work” for a bit of Winchester fun. This description was vivid in portraying evil, malicious intent – “Tension was slowly building between the two, hiding behind false smiles; they were keeping things from each other. They were scared. He smiled at the thought. If they were scared that meant they were vulnerable too. He cocked his head to the side as he watched the youngest open the door for the eldest, his yellow eyes glistening in the distance but unseen by the two hunters.” – not to mention just downright kicka$$ writing. Add in YED’s analysis of the dark places in Dean’s mind, his conclusion that two Winchesters are better than one, and THAT lyric as a last word and you’ve got a stunning piece of work!
Author's Response: Thanks! I thought I'd try something different... I always like doing that, and this time I decided, hmmm. lyrics! So I'm glad you liked them and you thought it worked. I love Nickelback and that's definately one of my favourite songs. I love adding the YED's point of view... he's so evil its fun!!! >:D I miss him... kinda...
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 09/11/07 04:34 PM · On: Far Away
This ch as a delve into the boys relationship was excellent: how they read and interpret each other, how it kills them to hurt or worry the other. Yep, know each other well all right – “Trick questions needed trick answers, or just avoiding ones” Just loved it!For me your stand out line of this ch - “Didn’t matter how fan they ran, how well they hid, the supernatural just kept coming after them. Sure, probably didn’t help that they killed every paranormal bastard that they could aim their guns at or chant a ritual at but still, surely someone out there could cut them a break?” - Sam at his reflective best, you at your writing best. Oh and the finger tapping as the trademark of that thinking – very Sam. Your analogy of fire and water was excellent, an analogy in itself to Dean’s conflict and confusion. And here we are again – ““Should be dead… should have died a long time ago.” – Dean’s tortured mind relating the situation of the moment back to the big picture guilt. Brilliant *applause* Sam’s ponderings the end look like you’re up to something – “It hurts him though…Or maybe it’s a good thing” …hmmm, heading for the ‘next’ button with anticicpation…
Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm really glad you've been enjoying so far, and your reviews really mean absolute loads to me. As for the lines you picked out - thanks! I like thoughtful, it makes a change from some of the random cahooey that's flying around my mind. Dean and guilt... major factor that plays in this story, load the guy up with as many bags as possible and then tell him to walk for three hundred miles... And so... thank you for taking the time to read and review!!
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 09/11/07 08:01 AM · On: Fall Into Sleep
So Dean’s sick, cooped up and not getting his own way! No wonder you wrote a moody, grumpy Dean. Loved this line from Sam’ - “Just let me know when you stop being all pi$$y so we can come up with our next move, besides this PMS of yours is bugging the hell out of me.” Everyone now and then Sam trumps Dean with snark one-upmanship and this line of yours was a classic!Awesome description to depict Dean’s dream - “…before the pain took full control of his senses, turning him deaf and dumb and blind…” his pain and fear is tangible. Great job!And gotta tell you, Dean playing with fire (literally!) in the middle of the night in morbid fascination was downright creepy, major eerie!!And to conclude with our beautiful Sammy ensuring that they were at peace as brothers, apologising and explaining, and Dean responding to comfort and accept, was divine.
Author's Response: I also love how you pull out certain lines that you liked :) It encourages me to put similar things in later. He he, glad you liked them - Sam can totally trump Dean sometimes... not all the time, but sometimes. And Dean playing with fire - I had that wrote down from an early point so it was just a matter of time before I'd managed to include it, yey! Thanks!
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 09/11/07 07:39 AM · On: Faint
Hey Rae, sorry I've haven't been back for awhile, catch-up up with my reviewing now: short and sweet chapter. Loved the memory of the soup triggering a memory about fire - well written likn. Loved protective!sammy. Dean's nightmare was horrific, so sad that even though Dean realised it wasn't human, wasn't his mother, he still reached out *sob* speaks volumes for how much he misses her still. Lovely chapter, I see this chapter as a link within your fic.
Author's Response: Heya Cookie! I love reading your reviews by the way, they're so brilliant :) So thank you for them. I love playing on the weaknesses as well as strengths... so Dean missing his mother... well it breaks my heart whenever I see his reaction to here being mentioned on the show. So thank you!!!
Reviewer: _Psych_ (Signed) · Date: 07/11/07 10:28 PM · On: Follow You Home
IT's really interesting so far, please continue!
Author's Response: Thanks loads for reading! I'm hoping to get some more posted soon :)
Reviewer: reece6521 (Signed) · Date: 01/11/07 06:43 PM · On: Follow You Home
What a bitch! Somebody smack her for me, please. This is not going to be good. Updates are needed, soon.
Author's Response: Hey! Poor Becky, he he, hopefully more will be revealed next chapter and yeah, I know it's been awhile but I'm hoping to get some things posted soon. :) Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 26/10/07 11:31 PM · On: Fly By Night
"Careful with the merchandise" hee hee.
Author's Response: He he - glad you liked that bit! Thanks!
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 26/10/07 11:25 PM · On: Fly Away
I knew it was too good to be true...
Author's Response: Lol - the Winchesters never have much luck :D
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 26/10/07 11:17 PM · On: Firelight
fan-freakin-tastic work!
Author's Response: lol - thanks :)
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 26/10/07 11:12 PM · On: Filthy and Gorgeous
She sure is one evil sicko!! The Dean-not-burning has my attention... Glad you're back on your game!
Author's Response: Definately an evil sicko >:) And thanks! :D
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