Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 13/08/09 05:05 AM · On: Chapter 1

“He called you a garbage disposal again, didn’t he?”

This line made me snort out loud. Sometimes it's the simplest things that really grab a reader, and this one caught me by surprise. I could just hear Sam's voice in my head when I read that little bit of dialogue.

Lovely little piece - just the ticket for a quick read while cooking tea (dinner). And for a drabble, it's a wonderfully meaty length. Really liked the intrigue of Dean giving up his precious food groups and Sam finally finding out why.

And of course, the ending was great - “You’re going to win this bet,” Sam said with deadly determination. “And then I’m gonna kill you.”

Thank you for sharing this.

Jules

Author's Response: Thank you very much! It's wonderful to hear when you've managed to capture a character's voice. Glad you've enjoyed it!

Reviewer: brookiwnchstr666 (Signed) · Date: 09/08/09 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 1

hahahahahahaheheheheheheehehe that is hilarious lol. and a new carburetor is totally worth it.

Author's Response: :oD Thank you!

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 09/08/09 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 1

Very funny, Loved it. The things Dean will do for his baby.  Wouldn't mind seeing the pair of them in  short-shorts.

Author's Response: Thank you! And yeah, those short-shorts sample we had in the show was simply not enough... WE NEED MORE! *g*