Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 26/10/09 11:47 AM · On: Samuel Winchester (II)
Yay! A hopeful ending. It would have been wrong to tie everything up neatly with a bow. The've lost the Impala. That closes a chapter on their lives but they still have a future and a purpose. I believe they'll be alright. “You really think Robert E. Singer would let a little thing like the Apocalypse get the better of him?” That was a marvelous line! A hint of the old Winchester resolve shines through. And we're also reminded how important Bobby is to them, and how full of piss and vinegar the old hunter is. Yep! We know he's out there somewhere. My only question is: what became of Anna and Castiel? Thanks for sharing this amazing story with us! Walking in each characters shoes for a spell really brings it all to life.
Author's Response: I don't really wanna tell you what happened to Anna and Castiel. As I didn't want to leave this story nice and "wrapped' as you say. The reasons for me not wanting to do so may or may not have something to do with me possibly or possibly not planning a sequel. Now, I don't mean to be mysterious, but I simply can't tell you what I may or may not have planned or what I will or will not do.... You understand? Thanks for reading :) I will try to do the sequel, that I may or may not write, justice.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 26/10/09 11:27 AM · On: Dean Winchester (III)
Wow! If Castiel could get Sam all along what was he waiting for? Yes, I know. The right time. Fabulous chapter! I love to see the powerful cower and the truly righteous reign. It seems Rosie has a more significant role than I first believed. The end when Dean hears Sam's voice is fabulous!
Author's Response: SO unbelieveably, ridiculously, monstrously and exaltingly happy that you like :)
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 26/10/09 11:07 AM · On: Anna
Yes! Meg must suffer! I also loved Anna wiping out her misguided brothers and sisters. I hope you're saving something especially nasty for Zachariah. Rosie spoke! Yay! Now we're rushing back to Dean... yes?... please?
Author's Response: As you wish...
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 08/10/09 09:48 PM · On: Castiel (II)
Sorry it took so long to get back to you. I forgot what the title was and had to put the word out on the Shout Box. Great! Dean's banter with Castiel is wonderful! It makes me sad, too. I miss Sam. But I'll take hope. It looks like he's coming up soon.
Author's Response: Ooooh I hope I get some more of these reviews to smile about in this, my non-posting era. :(
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 22/08/09 08:28 PM · On: Samuel Winchester (II)
Great job as always. Renee
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 22/08/09 03:17 PM · On: Samuel Winchester (II)
Awww, that was a lovely ending, to what has being a fantastic story. Thanks for the great read i have loved every part of it.
Author's Response: SO wonderful to hear! :D Especially since this will be my last post for some time :( I'm really thankful you took the time to review each chapter. Thanks for the AWESOME stars!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 22/08/09 02:53 PM · On: Dean Winchester (III)
Brilliant chapter, it was heartbreaking to see Dean give up and not care any more,hopefuly Sam's back now.
Author's Response: *Hops up and down in my seat* Read the last bit read the last bit!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 20/08/09 08:13 AM · On: Anna
Another wonderful chapter, i liked this one with Anna.
Author's Response: Thank you. It was dificult to balance out the way Castiel sees her in the previous one and how she really is. It's great to hear you liked :) I just had to kill Meg :P
Reviewer: WynterSun (Signed) · Date: 17/08/09 01:18 AM · On: Castiel (II)
Lovely lovely chapter. Have a headache so no words are coming to mind about how amazing this was. Sorry I can't offer anything more insightful.
Author's Response: :( Aww sorry to hear. Thanks for the revvie, though :) And for the stars!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 15/08/09 02:46 PM · On: Castiel (II)
Another two brilliant chapters, i loved how Dean took care of Rosie and the action in the Cas chapter was top notch.
Author's Response: *bows* My head is spinning I'm so exited :D Thank you SO much!
Reviewer: WynterSun (Signed) · Date: 13/08/09 02:35 PM · On: Dean Winchester (II)
Awwwwwwwwww. Evil cliffy. I love twists, this is so delicious. Mwahahaha.
Author's Response: Wiii!! Thanks for the stars! I love those!!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 13/08/09 01:30 PM · On: Dean Winchester (II)
Brilliant! Oh my hell! So much was revealed and so much twisted and changed right before my eyes. No Lucifer?! Please post again soon.
Author's Response: Hey! Sorry for not posting as quick as the others, but I've been out of town. Another chappie coming up tomorrow or the day after that :) Thanks for reading and reviewing :D
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 12/08/09 11:09 AM · On: Jasmine
Oh how sweet! I love Rose! You've captured the childlike innocence and the cute mannerisms of a four-year old girl so well. I expecially like the front teeth missing and the way she hides her smile so no one can see. In-betweens is a fun phrase for them. So cool that you tied the family from the episode into your story---luuuuv when writers do that!! I can't wait for more so PLEASE,PLEASE, PLEASE post soon!!!
Author's Response: Ahh yes. The mystery of "Jasmine" is revealed :D Thanks for the compliments on capturing the mannerisms of a kid... I think :S It came frighteningly easy. I loved the inbetweens and her shyness too :P I love when other authors do that too tie-ins with the show make the stories seem like something missing from the actual series :D The next chapter is done and I'll put it up tonight :) The story is kinda' short and pretty much writing itself so it won't be long until it's complete, I'm afraid :)
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 12/08/09 10:57 AM · On: Duncan Raynes
Was the stranger Bobby? Oh, it would be great if Bobby were still alive! With Dean and Bobby there's still hope for Sam, hope for the world. I love finding out about each character and you've chosen an interesting way to tell us their stories. I'm rushing off to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Well that's actually as muc a mystery to me as it is to you. My stories have minds of their own and was the stranger Bobby? Time will tell for both of us. Thanks for the points on the way I chose to tell the story. I wanted to try something new and hope to do it with more stories after this one. It's nice to see the brothers from strangers' point of views :) I hope to do it even better next time, though :) Looking forward to see your review for the next chapter :)
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 12/08/09 10:46 AM · On: Chuck Barstow
You did an excellent job describing the condition of the world and the people inhabiting it! I was thoroughly involved! I'm so excited now to know that Dean is alive! At first I thought the strange man that taught them to say Christo was Dean but now I know it wasn't. Will he ever be identified? Dean will bring so much knowledge to the small group of survivors. I know he'll be a great comfort to Jamine. Is she one of the 'special children'?
Author's Response: Thanks for the first comliment! OFF COURSE DEAN IS ALIVE! Shame... I never kill the boys. Hurt them, yes. But never anything too permanent: Death, being just that. And as to Jasmine being one of the special childre. Well now you've read the rest and I haven't answered all your reviews yet, but I think you already know by now :P
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 12/08/09 10:03 AM · On: Samuel Winchester (I)
How anguishing! Poor Sam. I love that he does just what we'd expect him to do---call to Dean for help.
Author's Response: It was cliche, I know. But after writing the 'Dean-chapter' I just felt completely wiped, but like his voice needed to be there :) Thanks for complimenting, though. Very sweet ;)
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 12/08/09 09:44 AM · On: Dean Winchester (I)
Fabulous! It was so expressive and potent. You had me smelling the sweet corn and the green grass and the ocean, feeling the wind and hearing the cries of seagulls. How very beautiful and tragic. I understood Dean's despair, his weariness, his desire to cease to be, stop hurting and feeling. This was a wicked sweet chapter!
Author's Response: *squees* Thank you!!! I'm SO glad to hear that :)
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 12/08/09 09:33 AM · On: Castiel (I)
I read the drabble and loved it. I'm glad that you've put more meat into it and made it a story. I'm hooked!
Author's Response: Wii thank you soo much! It's a really great drabble and I hope this story lives up to it *cross fingers*
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 12/08/09 08:20 AM · On: Jasmine
Very good, i hadn't guessed that the little girl is Rosie, Wyntersun mustn't be as dense as me lol.
Author's Response: Thanks. Surprised me too :D Maybe... it's not that we're stupid? Maybe she's just smarter than everybody else?
Reviewer: WynterSun (Signed) · Date: 12/08/09 02:16 AM · On: Jasmine
Awwwww. That was heart warming. And yussssss! I was right about the girl. Hahahaha. Never fear, I'm very good at keeping secrets. And I'm fully prepared for things to change on a dime, after all things are never as they appear. More stars for this excellent piece.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm giggling, are you giggling? That was nice to hear. Thanks for the stars!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 11/08/09 03:58 AM · On: Duncan Raynes
Fantastic update, i like how you write the chapters, so we can get to know all of the Characters, looking forward to the next part.
Author's Response: Thanks for the tjeck-in. Love to hear from you and Wynter. It's beginning to take shape and I feel a little obliged to tell you that this story is short. At least according my standards :D Thanks so much for reviewing:)
Reviewer: WynterSun (Signed) · Date: 11/08/09 02:11 AM · On: Duncan Raynes
Ah yes the story is starting to come together now. I'm enjoying this more and more. It's so intense, I have this fascination with post-apocalyptic stuff. The story is being played out so well, as always looking forward to more. ^^
Author's Response: Just a fair warning: Don't get too comfortable with how things look, because they'll turn on a dime. Glad to know you're still interested and thanks for the stars!!!
Reviewer: WynterSun (Signed) · Date: 10/08/09 01:39 PM · On: Chuck Barstow
Oooooo! I know who the little girl is. That was another awesome chapter. I love how you're giving each chapter it's own point of view it makes things fresh and interesting and is a unique way to tell a story.
Author's Response: Thank you SO much for noticing. And I'm stoked that you've guessed who the little girl is :D She'll play a role later on in the story. Also, I thought she'd make a lovely addition to the story!! Even more stoked that you didn't spill it all in your review!! :D Good to know you appreciate the value of secrecy. *winks* I felt I needed to try something new and the story by MissAnnThropic just got to me, so wonderful. I'm desperately trying to do hers justice :) Thanks for the stars!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 10/08/09 11:54 AM · On: Chuck Barstow
I'm thinking Duncan must have found Dean, this story just keeps getting better.
Author's Response: Thank you SO VERY MUCH :D I swear I still start to giggle whenever I see a new review :P Thanks for hanging on. And has Duncan found Dean? Well time will tell, m' dear.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 10/08/09 05:38 AM · On: Samuel Winchester (I)
This was another great chapter, Sam screaming for Dean was so heartbreaking.
Author's Response: Thanks for the props :) I'm glad the intent of the chapter shone through despite all the in-between rambling :)
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