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Reviews For Twelve Bottles, Eight Bullets

Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 22/04/07 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 1

That was just great!
Laura

Author's Response:
Wow- Bayre, Gaelic and Sojourner - first 3 reviews - I must have been a good girl this week. I'm flattered immensely that you all take the time to read my stuff when I know how busy you are with yours.
Thanks again!

Reviewer: gaelicspirit (Signed) · Date: 22/04/07 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 1

God, Tree. Warn a girl.
This was wonderful -- I love how controlled you write at the beginning. It was tight and wound just like Dean as he headed for the store and the 12-pack... And then as the beer took down the wall brick by brick your writing became looser, almost desperate.
I was captivated with the voices in his head as he blasted away the bottles. And my heart broke a little when Dean wondered if that one shot took away what innocence Sam had left.
Okay, so maybe sleep is highly overrated if this is what comes from insomnia.

Author's Response:
Thanks G! and yeah- you know the "innocence" comment was born out of our little convo last night. Glad you liked the voices in Dean's head. Personally, I like the voices in my head - most days that is! heehee!

Reviewer: sojourner84 (Signed) · Date: 22/04/07 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 1

"The bitterness was the self-reproach that was seeping up out of his gut. The bitterness was the absolute feeling of hopelessness that was festering inside him. The bitterness was the accusation that no matter how hard he tried, he was going to fail. Fail his father, fail Sam, just like they had failed her."
This was so beautifully written and done. My favorite post "Heart" piece.
-Sojourner

Author's Response:
Sojourner - WOW - what a compliment considering the number of Heart Tags that have been done. Thanks so much for reading it!
Wish I could say I knew where it came from- but not gonna look the proverbial gift horse in the mouth.
Thanks again!

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