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Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 01/06/07 06:33 PM · On: Temptation

Excellent chapter, I can really feel the suspense building, and the boys' thoughts and dialogue really ring true. Great work!

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked it :D I'm loving reading your reviews by the way - so thanks for the smiles I get at each one.

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 01/06/07 06:29 PM · On: Getting out of town

I'm glad Dean survived of course, but it's obviously not going to be smooth sailing from here on in!

Author's Response: I'm trying to actually thinkif any chapters up ahead actually do run smoothly and I can't really think of any so yeah - things are going to get a alot worse before they start getting better.

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 01/06/07 06:23 PM · On: Gift

You wrote the "Bonus Nox" scene so well! I could actually visualise it, very creepy. Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you! Though I have been told that my use of feminine and masculine words in Latin was wrong, eek. But that's what you get when you use an online translator - damn. So thanks - glad you liked that scene.

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 01/06/07 06:16 PM · On: Unheard Words

What a great ending to the chapter. Come on Bobby! And I have to agree, Dean is deadly....in more ways than one.

Author's Response: he he - Yep, he definately is deadly. Looking so good should not be allowed!

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 01/06/07 06:11 PM · On: White Out

Good bunnies! Didn't think the Death Mark would leave Dean alone for long!

Author's Response: I love bunnies but I do think if any animal could be vil and take over the world it would definately be them! I mean the multiply like.... well like rabbits!

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 01/06/07 06:08 PM · On: The Exorcist

"Well you could just fall unconscious and save Sam the trouble of hitting a woman" LOL. I liked that line so much I was willing to type it out, since for some reason it won't let me cut and paste!

And I'm worried about the last victim of the death markers .....



Author's Response:

Evil computers! They're supposed to make life easy... but do they? Okay, sometimes maybe but the rest of the time is spent fixing them - Now I'm gonna have to apologise to my PC before it decides to break down on me, he he.

The last victim... yeah, I'm up to chapter 32 of writing it and I'm still worried about him.

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 01/06/07 06:03 PM · On: Answers

Sorry again Rae, went missing for a while there, but I'm back on track now.

Hilarious that Deans' miffed his mark doesn't have a classy Latin name! And "recruitment"? Doesn't sound good.



Author's Response: Hey! Glad you're back on here now though. Lol - And it looks like you've been very busy reading and reviewing so thank you!

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 27/05/07 09:49 PM · On: Broken Man

Terrific chapter. Dean hearing this voice in his head, no wonder he's losing it. Hope that Sam'll find a way to save him. What'll happen next, can't wait to find out.

Author's Response: Hey again! Thanks! Poor Dean >:) But keep hoping bout Sammy getting through to him. 

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 27/05/07 01:13 PM · On: Broken Man

don't you dare kill him, it's a site rule, do that and you'll be kicked out by the Deangirls around here !!! Seriously, good chapter, these demons really seem to play with the poor guys, i pick you, you're mine... How pretentious !!!



Author's Response: I would kick my own arse if I killed him... ahh poor Dean, I'm being way too mean to him. Demons can be really childish, lol.

Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 27/05/07 07:04 AM · On: Broken Man

Brilliant, suspenseful & totally edge of your seat stuff. Hope your muse is still on overdrive, cause I really want more. 

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks! :) My muse kinda took the day off today, forming ideas than actually writing but don't worry, I'm gonna put it to work tomorrow.

Reviewer: whitewave (Signed) · Date: 26/05/07 11:32 PM · On: Broken Man

Damn, it is hard to see Dean in so much pain.  I could feel his spirit being torn apart as you wrote. Forcing him to kill Sam would kill him.

Author's Response: Do you think he'll ever forgive me for putting him through this? Ahhh, guess we'll find out when it's all over. :)

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 26/05/07 10:30 PM · On: Broken Man

Awesome chappie! Love that the YED is going up against Nex. Creepy, but great twist. I just know that when Sam finally gets Dean to look in his eyes, it will all be ok.....

Author's Response: Heya! Thanks. I thought I'd bring Old Yellow Eyes back into it, after all, thought I maybe needed to explain what he had to do with it. :)

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 26/05/07 10:27 PM · On: Broken Man

okay, rae....definitely happy with the fast update /  interesting but a tad short , don't you think......i guess i'm just being greedy....lonnnngggg weekend with lots of time to kill and wanted to really sink my teeth in here!!!  well, the idea of ol' YED and Nex going at it does at least sound intriguing...bring it on!!!

Author's Response: I know, I'm sorry about the short chapters. Please forgive me :) Thanks for bearing with me though!

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 25/05/07 09:27 PM · On: Gift

Just finished three chapters, great story, I have big plans for catching up someday soon.  Thanks for the read - K

Author's Response: I know the feeling when trying to catch up with long stories... I still have caught up with half of them that I've tried. Thanks for reading though! Hope you keep enjoying.

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 24/05/07 08:07 AM · On: Runaway

   arghhh, you're evil, poor Dean ! More more more...

Author's Response: He he! Thanks! Fear me... er.. *cough* I mean 'Hi!' and thanks.

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 24/05/07 07:32 AM · On: Runaway

yay!!!Rae..........sure you aced the exam........does that mean we'll get a conclusion in the foreseeable future ..or are you determined to torture Dean and all of us very s-l-o-w-l-y  ...?  Poor Dean this keeps up much lnoger the dude's gonna need Prozac just to make it to breakfast in the mornings!!

Author's Response: Thanks! fingers crossed eh? And fingers crossed about this conclusion thing, lol. Like I've said so many times, this is the fic that refused to end but I'm hoping to come neatly to an end in... I dunno... but I promise I won't drag it out because if I do he'll need a hell of a lot more than prozac. :D

Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 23/05/07 11:32 PM · On: Runaway

Noooooooooo!!!! Dean there has to be another way!!!! Don't do it!!!

I'm glad your exams are over, hope you did well. Am REALLY looking forward to more of this. Thanks for the great read.

Author's Response: Hey! thanks! I've got the story running through my head so it's just a matter of getting it down. :)

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 23/05/07 10:14 PM · On: Runaway

Great chapter. Excellent action and tension....

Author's Response: Thank you loads!

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 23/05/07 09:27 PM · On: Runaway

What a suspenseful ending to the chapter. What'll happen next, can't wait to find out.

Author's Response: Thanks! Hoping for an update soonish!

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 22/05/07 12:25 PM · On: “I’m tired of secrets, Dean…”

Ohhhh, his kind huh, well I gotta take exception at the lady's tone ;) Dean's always welcome in my book LOL  K



Author's Response: I know I wouldn't turn something that fine away... even if he were evil incarnate how could you resist?

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 18/05/07 03:00 PM · On: Needing Out

Dean is hearing that voice and it's getting harder and harder for him to not listen it. Don't tell me the dagger was on the table and Dean go it. Riveting story, I so can't wait for more. Amazing work Rae.

Author's Response: I like crazy Dean... crazy Dean is kinda cute :D and I'm kinda weird but hey! It's all good! Thanks so much!

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 18/05/07 10:58 AM · On: Needing Out

   goood. Hey it's so good to be done with school when i hear many of you talking about your exams...

   So good luck with that and come back to us asap.



Author's Response: I got at least three years of Uni to come after this exam, damn! Luckily I don't start until September, meaning that from the end of May until later September I'll only have work keeping me away from my computer. yey! And thanks! I do need the good luck wishes :D

Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 18/05/07 03:10 AM · On: Needing Out

FANTASTIC UPDATE!!!! Poor Dean, what he's going thru is just terrible. AAAAHHHH the finale, I'm waiting to see it too. Looking forward to more. 

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm tempted to make things a whole lot worse for Dean in my stories by means of punishment! 

Finale made me squee and cry many times throughout and I'm gonna have to watch it again!

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 17/05/07 11:44 PM · On: Needing Out

I'm not sure what has my stomach more in a knot, kiddo.......your story or that finale tonight.......I swear Mr Kripke owns stock in Kleenex.........they have to give us more than one year !!!  ......alright where's that next chapter of yours,rae ??

Author's Response:

Mr Kripke is a genius and yeah, I wouldn't put it past him to own quite a few stocks! I can't even think about the finale or I'll choke up... :'( (I want to know about the damn amulet!)

Hoping for weekly updates :D

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 17/05/07 10:34 PM · On: Needing Out

Great chapter!!!! I LOVE Bobby - especially after the season finale! I can't believe what a great job you are doing at keeping the tension level up. Can't wait for the next chapter...  - BUT exams first for sure!!

Good Luck on your big exam!!!!!;)



Author's Response:

Thank you. Bobby is so brilliant! And I love how much he cares for the boys!

Why's it so hard to concentrate on studying? It's evil... my mind keeps coming back to Supernatural. And thanks!

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