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Reviews For The Killing Moon
Reviewer: eeyore (Signed) · Date: 25/10/09 12:51 AM · On: Extreme Ways

Sam's with Bobby, maybe they can get out somehow...  I don't envy Kathleen in this chapter - she's annoyed, angry, hurt, scared, and doesn't really know what she wants to do.  You really had me worried for a moment when you had Kathleen put the gun to Dean's head.  Watch out Bender, here comes Dean.  Awesome chapter as always.



Author's Response:

Thanks dude! Yup: Kathleen is pretty down and despondent in this chapter… only natural really, considering the odds.

And yup: here comes Dean! Repression and denial aren’t an option any more… :-O 

Reviewer: tenaciouspc (Signed) · Date: 21/10/09 02:03 PM · On: Scary Monsters and Super Creeps

 

Enjoying the story but I find myself wanting Dean not to be injured. For me it would be much more enjoyable if he was uninjured and facing his enemies and his inner demons.Its like ur giving him an excuse not to stand up and face up.



Author's Response: Oh he’ll be standing up and facing them, don’t worry… patience!

Reviewer: SpikesSire (Signed) · Date: 21/10/09 10:44 AM · On: Scary Monsters and Super Creeps

your story is one of my all time favorites. Didn't have time to read lately but now that I'm up to date again, wow did I miss some heavy stuff. Poor Dean, not only going through hell with the benders, now almost (hoping here!!) dying from the bear trap wound. And his so called last words for Sammy *sniff* made me cry and that was really embarrassing because I read this chapter at work *pouds* 

You're one of my all time fav writer, every chapter with a new twist and never getting boring. 

Luv,

Susi



Author's Response: That's real kind of you Susi! Thanks muchly... I've tried to invest this story with a real live plot [even though we all love plotless whump sometimes!], so I'm glad you are enjoying the twists and turns!

Reviewer: Atticus (Signed) · Date: 20/10/09 10:01 PM · On: Scary Monsters and Super Creeps

I just had to take the time to sit at my computer to write a decent review.  I have been trying on my phone, but I can't seem to make it work.  I have sent some really strange comments.  Anyhow, your story has been amazing.  Thank you for taking so much time to present your work to us.  I look forward to reading the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks dude, I really am glad you let me know! I’m just up to 4000 words for C16 and hope to get another 2000 or so on there before posting Sunday… hope you can stand the wait! ;-)

Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 20/10/09 02:46 PM · On: Whistle and I'll Come to You

Still amazing... trying to get SOME work done and still read.

Wow.. it makes everything just disappear.. I get totally involved and then the phone will ring and I "wake up" and realize I'm still at work.

Great stuff.



Author's Response: Yup: it’s nice to know you can just go on to the next chapter… but not so nice when it’s there taunting you and you have work to do! >:)

Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 20/10/09 12:57 PM · On: See How Deep the Bullet Lies

Loving this!!


Author's Response: Thanks so much! It makes the hard work so worthwhile to get some feedback! I really appreciate it… ;-)

Reviewer: Atticus (Signed) · Date: 19/10/09 11:25 PM · On: Forest Grump

thank you for sharing your ttalent

Author's Response: Thanks muchly dude! I'm glad you are enjoying the story! ;-)

Reviewer: dollarformyname (Signed) · Date: 19/10/09 03:12 PM · On: Scary Monsters and Super Creeps

Just caught up on the last couple of chapters. I'm a terrible person when it comes to reviewing 'cause I never know what to say, but I'm completely addicted to this story.

Oh, and also: *shakes fist* Evil cliffhangerer! 

:) Anxiously awaiting the next bit. 



Author's Response:

I am the Queen of Evol Cliffhangers!

Have written a grand total of 0 words for C16 so I guess I had better press on or you will be around to salt and burn me… :-O 

Reviewer: zibina (Signed) · Date: 19/10/09 03:21 AM · On: Scary Monsters and Super Creeps

This story is freaking fantastic,you write Dean whumpage like few people can do!


Author's Response: Thanks so much! Though I don't know if that is a good or a bad thing...! I always try to keep it medically plausible! >:) Glad you are enjoying, and thanks so much for letting me know!

Reviewer: Banshee (Signed) · Date: 19/10/09 01:24 AM · On: Scary Monsters and Super Creeps

God I am loving this, keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thanks dude! C16 should post next week... if I ever stop answering reviews I might be able to get started on it! My target for last night was 2000 words and I wrote precisely 0... :-O

Reviewer: Atticus (Signed) · Date: 18/10/09 11:33 PM · On: The Petrified Forest

just discovered this site and your work  love the quality of your stories and the fact that you have a grasp on the characters

Author's Response: Thanks kindly! I've put so much thought and planning into this, so comments like this make my day! Be sure to check out the first story in the verse if you haven't read it already: it's called The Woods are Lonely, Dark and Deep... ;-)

Reviewer: eeyore (Signed) · Date: 18/10/09 10:03 PM · On: Scary Monsters and Super Creeps

oh gosh, this chapter was great.  I wanted to kill Sam during that ridiculous conversation he had with Dean, how did he expect Dean to understand it?    I was almost crying during that talk with Kathleen, it was so sad and so sweet that he remembered everything about Sam.  He was obviously more of a father to Sam then John was (I'd forgotten he was alive until you mentioned it).  Where'd you drag Sam off to?  Is he going to see Bobby?

Author's Response: Thanks hun! Glad you liked the Dean speech... actually it makes me well up when I re-read it! Whither Sam? Hmmmm...

Reviewer: Tucker2 (Signed) · Date: 18/10/09 06:17 PM · On: Scary Monsters and Super Creeps

I love the scene where Dean relates the milestones in Sam's childhood.  Very Dean and very powerful.  Please know that we appreciate all of your work!!  You're a wonderful, captivating writer.

Author's Response: Thanks so much dude! I really appreciate that. Seems to me Dean would know those things, having effectively parented Sam for all those years! I’m glad you concur! ;-)

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 18/10/09 03:38 PM · On: Scary Monsters and Super Creeps

Wow a brilliant chapter, very intense, a lot of action in this one, really looking forward to the next part of the story.

Author's Response: I’m glad you liked because I struggled with it a bit… I knew what i wanted in there and where I wanted it to go but for some reason I found it hard to string the different bits together. Makes the great reviews here and elsewhere even more appreciated! ;-)

Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 18/10/09 12:47 PM · On: Scary Monsters and Super Creeps

Kate,

this chapter rocked!!

you had me in tears when Dean was telling Kathleen what she had to tell Sam.  all of Dean's memories about Sam as a child.  

Bender and the Bendigo showing up and taking Sam; i was on the edge of my seat.

can't wait to read the next chapter.

hopefully Sam will end up with Bobby.

Renee



Author's Response: You know I get a bit teary when I re-read that bit. I wrote it from my heart as a parent… Dean was really a dad to Sam in many ways. Yup: Sam is toast! [Just teasin y’all!]…

Reviewer: anniesmom (Signed) · Date: 14/10/09 07:40 PM · On: Little House in the Big Woods

I just love this story and you update so fast that I have had to print off the chapters that I've missed so I have something to read when I go on break at work.  Thank you for the quick updates. 



Author's Response: I'm rapt this is giving you a break from work! Thanks for letting me know! ;-)

Reviewer: tenaciouspc (Signed) · Date: 14/10/09 07:17 PM · On: Little House in the Big Woods

Nice touch with gabe being the monster!!!

Author's Response: Thanks muchly! It was one of those 2am lightbulb moments... >:)

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 13/10/09 06:48 AM · On: Little House in the Big Woods

Well you fooled me with this thats for sure. no way did i guess it was Gabe. A fantastic chapter as always.

Author's Response: Mwa-ha-ha-ha... it's that tangled web I weave! And just imagine the Gabe Bendigo/angryspirit!Lee/Dean love triangle it's going to create... >:)

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 12/10/09 04:27 PM · On: Never Look Back, Walk Tall Act Fine

Maybe if Dean truly believes he puts Sam's life at risk by his drinking and doing drugs, he will stop. I just ache for Dean. He about flipped out when he heard there was something in the woods in Hibbling. I'm rally looking forward to reading the next chapter. I'm just hoping Dean will stop his self destructive acts!

Author's Response: Moira thanks for your lovely reviews! I had been pretty down about the fact so few people seem to bother to review even though the read count for the story is pretty good, so I really appreciate that you took the time to write one for each chapter you've read so far. With this story I'm really trying to give some insight in to the psychological issues that can arise after what happened to Dean in Woods... they don't just disappear overnight. This is my version of the S4 PTSD, in a way... and I am also trying to show the impact on Sam and Bobby too... I'm so glad you are enjoying it!

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 12/10/09 04:14 PM · On: Comfortably Numb

Holy moly! I was afraid Dean might be doing drugs as well. I'm so hoping that they can get Dean to stop drinking and self medicating. I wonder if there is a Wendigo in the woods attacking the hikers? I'm glad that those men at the bar didn't hurt Dean and were able to get Sam and Bobby to him on time. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!!

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 12/10/09 03:57 PM · On: See How Deep the Bullet Lies

Great day! I hope Sam can stop the kid. Dean must still be out of it if he let the boy get the drop on him. I hope Dean quits the drinking soon, maybe after this he will!! Looking forward to reading the next chapter. I really love this story!!!

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 12/10/09 03:42 PM · On: Life, Abroad in the Land and Defiant

Great day! That was one intense scene at the end of the chapter. I was biting my nails the whole dang time! I'm so worried about Dean's drinking and lack of appetite. How long can he continue this? I assume this is still in the first season? Wonder what John would make of all this? I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter. 

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 12/10/09 03:25 PM · On: Leaving Normal

Love Bobby in your story. He is awesome, like Sammy said! I think he may be right about the dreaming. Dean could be dangerous to others if he has another nightmare. I find it incredibly sad he has no idea that he killed Bobby's dogs. At least he was able to admit what happen to him, even if it was a stranger. Looking forward to reading more of your incredible sequel!!

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 12/10/09 03:03 PM · On: Mr Brightside

I'm finally have some time to delve into your incredible sequel. I love how you have written broken Dean here. Bobby is right about Dean. I wonder if he can ever get truly better. I'm looking forward to reading the whole story.

Reviewer: eeyore (Signed) · Date: 11/10/09 11:02 PM · On: Little House in the Big Woods

ouch, ouch, ouch, poor Dean - he's hurt again.  So a 'Gabe Bender' way back when became the Wendigo that has Bobby.  Do I have that right?  I was wondering why it was calling Dean 'kin' and wouldn't go after the Benders.  They have to stay for a week until Dean gets better!  <bites nails>What about poor Bobby - you wouldn't kill him would you?  Awesome chapter as always.

Sorry to hear you are planning to stop posting the story here - do you plan on posting the rest here once it is complete?  Read your response below - glad you accept anon reviews on your lj account!



Author's Response: Don't panic, hun, I will never kill Bobby... I love him too much. Yup: it's the original Gabe! Sets up an interesting dilemma for the final showdown but I'm not going to spoil you... :-D

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