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Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 27/07/09 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 1

Very good, i liked the possessed mans pov, i had never even thought about him, poor man.

Author's Response:

Thank you trying to find an original point of veiw was quite hard, many did the Mary one but all were differant and good.

Jacq

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 21/07/09 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 1

This is the first one I've read so far that told things from Sam's point of view, and what a unique way you were able to make that work!  I also really loved the idea that the man Azazel possessed would be still alive and actually REMEMBER, poor thing.  Great job!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, I always find it easier to write Sam and when Sam was possessed by Meg, he survived and remembered, so it is possible.  your comments are appreciated.

Jacq

Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 21/07/09 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hi,

You wrote three intimately detailed points of view, with a strong you-are-there vibe. Mary's POV is pretty popular in these stories and you did a good job with her. Seeing the YED through the still-messed up eyes of the helpless man he possessed was chilling. Then you found a way for Sam to remember and re-experience the entire event first-hand, through Ruby's blood.

And the last line was just wrenching.

Sue



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, guess there were a lot of Mary povs, but still each one is differant.

Jacq

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