Hi Pooka,

This is a good story, short and to the point. Using just a few words, you drilled down to the heart of the matter. I'm remembering Dean's comment in "Home": "eccept this time, we already know what happened (in the house)." It's fascinating revisiting the night of the Fire through all the different author's words.

Sue

Author's Response:

Sue,

Thanks so much! I like when stories don't drag on and on so I guess I incorporate that into my writing. :D I tried to connect all the author's words together. Hopefully it all paid off!

Thanks again!

Ashton :D

 

And forever after John would be the soldier, i like the way that you suggested that the war was still very recent for John, poor man...

And Mary's regrets for trying to shut out what Azazels deal meant, & with her end word cut of... 

And Anna, rebellion starts here! And the Angels had been watching over them, but not in the way Mary had hoped!

Nice one...

Jacq x 

 

Author's Response:

Thanks Jacq!

Yeah, I thought that John should still have the effects of war coursing in his veins still. Yeah :P I thought that her word being cut off would give people the full effect of what happened. Hehe the angels are never what we want them to be. 

Thanks again!

Ashton