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Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 19/07/09 08:11 AM · On: The Rhythm Of Breathing

I loved the end! You got the rhythm just right!

Author's Response:
Hey!
Thank you for reading!
The ending!? 'm kind of proud of it myself, if I can say so. It's always soo hard for me to end a story...idk if anyone else has a problem like that...:) so thank you so very much for liking it!
hugs,
S.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 18/07/09 08:31 PM · On: The Rhythm Of Breathing

"he almost heard the clash of his eyebrows" Hilarious and effective!
"The soft hum, the gentle lullaby, the in and out sound, the whisper of air as it passed through Dean’s nose was all he heard. All he wanted to hear." You have a very poetic way of expression. You emphasize the beauty of their brotherhood by accentuating the sublime unending trust they have for one another.
Another marvelous piece!

Author's Response:
:)
guh, that line was a mistake on my part! I wanted to write something else and got distracted! *blushes*
you know!? there are a lot of things that Dean can do to help his brother, but stopping a storm isn't one of them and Dean just needed to calm Sam down so that they could get some sleep and you know how boys are, they aren't gonna talk about what's bugging them so Dean tried the 'non-talking' method and just breathed and Sam picked up on it and went with Dean....and yup it's all about trust!
Thank you so very much for reading, my love!
hugs,
S.

Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 18/07/09 07:00 PM · On: The Rhythm Of Breathing

Great story! At the end, I found myself breathing in and out as I read about the boys breathing in and out.

Author's Response:
hey!!!
awww thank you so much!
I hope your rhythm was as slow as Dean's and Sam's was!
Thank you so much for reading and leaving a review!
hugs,
S.

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