Reviewer: Eternity12 (Signed) · Date: 25/03/09 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 16- Losing Innocence
wow... That was... so... amazing. you really feel for her in this story. she's a broken sick twisted mess but damn you feel for her, for every twist and break. Brilliant story so far! keep it up!
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 04/03/09 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 16- Losing Innocence
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! what an excellent chapter. i am speechless, the tears are just falling. Dean the constant hero; "wrapping her in a secure hug as she sobbed into his chest." can't wait for the next chapter. EXCELLENT!!!!!!! Renee
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 04/03/09 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 16- Losing Innocence
Wow. A difficult scene, but you wrote this really well. The distance created by seeing this from the present day perspective makes it less horrific, without losing any of the impact for the characters. Looking forward to the next update, and finding out how in hell Sam's gonna explain away a gunshot...
Reviewer: jool (Signed) · Date: 18/02/09 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 15
still want more..... it s like a slow burn getting back to the story and then being forced out of it!! i m quite speechless for now the only words i find are "i beg you to hurry and give us some more!!!!!!!"
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 15/02/09 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 15
these chapters just keep getting better and better. Dean and Brie in the restroom............yummy. Renee
Reviewer: jool (Signed) · Date: 28/01/09 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 14
!!!!!!!!! i laughed, got scared and cried an awful lot of tears.............. give me more please!! awesome job, terrific character that will stay alive in my memory for long! thanx for the ride!
Author's Response: Thanks so much Jool! I'm glad you love the character, i love her too. I hope you continue to read about her. She has so many more secrets to unveil and the results will throw everything into choas.
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 17/01/09 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 14
Welcome back!! i was wondering what happened and it you were going to finish this story. so Brie's a Mom and John knew. hope the next chapter won't be so long in the making. Renee
Author's Response: I am so sorry that it took me so long. I had to take a long hiatus, unfortunately, from my fanfic to work on some other projects and deal with some personal issues and have only recently been able to come back to it. Thank you so much for remaining faithful and interested!
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 27/04/08 02:39 AM · On: The Bleeding Truth
Wow i have to be honest i was getting bored reading this story at first but i am glad i continued. chapters 6 through 13 were excellent! I am liking how you are having Brie and Dean reliving her memories. Dean trying to figure her out and unknowinly putting himself in danger. Brie has a daughter didn't see that coming. can't wait to read what is next; glad i stuck it out. Renee
Author's Response: I'm glad you stuck it out too! Building up Brie's character only to break her down in the series of chapters in which she relives her memories was an interesting experience, especially now that we are really starting to get into what makes her tick. Stay tuned because there are a few more suprises. Even one including Papa Winchester...
Reviewer: Senorita Lopez (Signed) · Date: 20/02/08 02:48 PM · On: The Bleeding Truth
OMG!!! I lovd this one. Sure there was a lot of violence but well played gurl...Now you've got me excited for the next chapter. As always can't wait.
Author's Response: Thanks Senorita Lopez! There was aa lot of violence in this one, but it was necessary. This is the turning point for Brie- This is the moment when she stops being a hunter and starts looking out for number one and only number one. It explains a lot about her character on a more subtle level. Look for the chapter! A lot less gory, but revealing none the less.
Reviewer: Senorita Lopez (Signed) · Date: 16/01/08 06:41 PM · On: Broken Hearts and Duct Tape
OMG! That was so sad. I wonder how Dean's going take this one. Brie must think this room is too close for comfort. As always very catchy. Can't wait for the next.
Author's Response: Brie is going to think that this one is too close for comfort Senorita Lopez! Thanks for the great comment!
Reviewer: REMY (Signed) · Date: 15/01/08 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 1- The Beginning
Angela! I finally got and account and now I can bother you online! MWHAHAHA *cough cough* AHAHAH Seriously though, thus far I am in love with the story, you have done the character Brie so well and I enjoy the twists and turns. I feel bad for her sometimes, but I think I wouldn't like her as much as I do if not for everything she's gone through; it makes her tough , go Brie! I look forward to seeing more from you. - from BFF REMY
Author's Response: I'm glad you joined Remy! She is a very fun character because its hard to truely hate her, and truely like her. The only side she's on is her own, and it's like a tug-a-war between her choosing to be pure good, or pure evil. As the nickname given to her by Michael, Brie is just grey. Thanks for the comment!
Reviewer: Senorita Lopez (Signed) · Date: 15/01/08 11:00 PM · On: Chapter 1- The Beginning
I love this story!! One of my fav stories!! Take my advice and READ!!
Reviewer: bethx028 (Signed) · Date: 14/01/08 03:30 PM · On: Broken Hearts and Duct Tape
Ok that was so, so sad :( but really great! I loved this chapter, getting to see the real Brie (Kallie) and what she used to be like.. and it was really well written, definitely made this chapter even better :) Can't wait to read more, see ya next time! beth :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the comment! I'm glad you loved the chapter. Its fun for me to write about Brie because she so complicated. She goes through so many changes, all that contribute to who she is now and starts to explain why she is the way she is.Stay tuned! The next chapter is the biggest turning point for her, not to mention, a huge surprise in store. Actually, a bunch of surprises!
Reviewer: Destra (Signed) · Date: 07/01/08 03:20 PM · On: Happy Holidays! For Christmas, Santa crashed my computer...
Hope your computer gets well soon. I'm addicted to this story and keep checking back for updates. Definitely one for my favourites. Thanks for the great writing.
Author's Response: Thanks Destra! I'll have the next chapter up next week for sure. I'm really glad that you like it because I am having a blast creating it. Brie is such a layered character, it makes it fun to peel them off and see what makes her tick, and this next chapter is going to shed some light on her teen years. Thanks for the comment!
Reviewer: Eternity12 (Signed) · Date: 14/12/07 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 9
man I started out liking Brie because I thought maybe there was something good underneath, with just a lot of 'badass' to cover it. but the more you read the more yu see that Brie just isn't ruthless and a little psychotic, she's a monster in her own right. well done! I am worried as hell for Dean.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the comment Eternity12! I love comments like these that reflect on the character. Brie is a monster in her own right. She has become so twisted that she doesn't even need the demon in her head anymore to tell her to do bad things or make silent commentary, she does it herself. She is a very layered character. The first four rooms were just test rooms. And you should be worried for Dean, because things are about to get a whole lot worse...
Reviewer: bethx028 (Signed) · Date: 12/12/07 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 9
great chapter, update again soon :)
Author's Response: I'll try bethx028! Hopefully one or two chapters before X-Mas!
Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 27/11/07 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 1- The Beginning
Really hooked on the story. Totally engrossing! I gobbled up the chapters like candy!!!It's listed as "complete"? Hopefully new chapters soon!?
Author's Response: You're right saltnburnem! It is NOT complete. I had no idea that it was like that. I'll try and fix it. Thanks! And don't worry, there are plenty more chapters to come! Thanks for the comment!
Reviewer: lacAnn (Signed) · Date: 19/11/07 11:57 PM · On: Chapter 1- The Beginning
Great, this story so far is the closest to there actual character I almost feel like I am reading an episode..I am excited to see the out come with the girl, and I do like her.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your support!
Reviewer: bethx028 (Signed) · Date: 16/11/07 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 8- Down the Rabbit Hole, Inside the Mirror
oh boy...update soon please!! =) i really enjoy this story, keep up the good work.
Author's Response: I'll do my best! Thanks for the comment!
Reviewer: Eternity12 (Signed) · Date: 01/11/07 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 7
OMG..... I'm sorry that's all I can say ... OMG thats was... how could you... man that is an evil cliff hanger!!!!!!!! ... strangely I find myself loving it, can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! Stay tuned because you're about to get a lot of new info on Brie. I should have the next chapter up by mid-november or sooner. Thanks for reading and thanks for commenting! Feedback is always appreciated!
Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 31/10/07 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 7
evil evil ending. what the heck is gonna happen now?
Author's Response: I'm sorry! But I got to keep you guys wanting more. I promise I'll make it interesting! Stay tuned!
Reviewer: bethx028 (Signed) · Date: 31/10/07 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 7
hey, just started reading this story today and it's really great...love what you've done so far and brie is an awesome character...can't wait to see how things go, update soon =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I will! Happy Halloween!
Reviewer: Destra (Signed) · Date: 29/10/07 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 5
I loved every minute of this. You had me gripped from the first chapter. The boy’s different reactions to Brie are totally in character. Superb writing – thanks.
Author's Response: Thank you! Look for a new chapter and a new adventure coming soon!
Reviewer: Zofia27 (Signed) · Date: 26/10/07 11:25 PM · On: Chapter 5
Just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed reading your story. Please continue with your writing!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I will continues to write, so please continue to read.
Reviewer: Eternity12 (Signed) · Date: 21/10/07 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 1- The Beginning
I'm in love I can honest to god say that am in love with this story. it's... amazing. I check this site everyday just to see if this one has another chapter, don't stop now I am enthralled and would seriously have a melt down if i didn't know how it ends. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hope to post another chapter up by the end of October. Thank you for all your kind words of support.
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