Reviewer: bhoney (Signed) · Date: 07/10/09 03:38 PM · On: Independence

Oooh, this is intriguing. And well-written. Drabbles are really hard to do, and you did well on this one. I wish you'd continue it, tell us how Dean got there, how he gets rescued. Nice job!


Author's Response:

Firstly let me say thank you for looking up my solitary offering so long after it was published.

Secondly, a huge thank you for the high praise and the encouragement to continue. Personally I found a short drabble a piece of cake compared with the challenge of the multi chapter story I'm currently battling to perfect. And there is another Hunters Girls meet in London this weekend so you never I may be inspired to try again.

Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 14/07/09 09:50 PM · On: Independence

I love you forever! Your first outing into the scary world of fanfiction writing and you give me naked Dean! *lays an embarrassing amount of cyber-bouquets at your feet*

I really don't like drabbles, but I'll reluctantly drag my sorry arse into one if it's from someone I know and admire - and when I saw your name I just had to have a peek. Curiosity and the cat, and all that...

And what do I get? Naked Dean...*sighs dreamily*... Lovely description of naked Dean - I mean great work in setting the scene, considering that you only had 100 words to play with. Kudos as well for staying in the same tense that you started with.

And you did really well - painted the scene in a few short descriptions so that our imaginations were fired up, and leaving us with one question for each word in the drabble, such as how did he get there, where is Sam, what was he hunting, did the thing he was hunting string him up like an undressed sheep, where is he, where are his clothes, was he captured by fangirls.....

Great work, Midge. Have you considered dipping your big toe back into this big, scary pond with a longer story? I'll be there if you do.

Jules

Author's Response:

Oh wow Jules. A review that's way longer than my drabble, I don't know what to say.

I feel very humble and embarrassed accepting your cyber bouquets and lavish praise.  It means a great deal that I made you happy but I have to admit naked Dean is easy to imagine and therefore easy to write!

Reviewer: meh (Signed) · Date: 14/07/09 06:44 AM · On: Independence

This is very nicely done. You have woven some positively mouthwatering implications with just a few well chosen words. Keep on writing! 

Maria

Author's Response:

Hey Maria. Thank you so much for taking the time to review, it means a lot.

I hope you are feeling better every day after your surgery.

Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 14/07/09 04:45 AM · On: Independence

Just as much a winner as everyone elses.  Very good.  And a un-clothed Dean...! Lol  So glad you posted it ,you have portrayed a story in few words.

Jacq

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the encouragement and your kind words. I don't know what more to say.