Reviewer: Rae666 (Signed) · Date: 22/07/09 12:22 PM · On: Anger
DUUUUUDE! Man! So seriously Intense! Awesome chapter! I just wanna hug Dean, all alone and scared for Sam but brave enough to call John because he knows he can't find them on his own. Risking his own skin for Sam, 'cause he knows his Dad is so gonna kill him, lol. And the conversation between John and Bobby - I loved that. Along with the flicker of pride John had for Dean protecting Sammy, even though it meant lying a little. But such an awesome chapter! I can't wait to find out what you got planned next.
"Oyako-donburi" -- So totally wanna try that now. :D
Author's Response: KJFNFJSDNFKJN DUDE!!! You always leave me speechless, it's annoying to even me that I'm so shocked when I get this type of reaction to my stories. So sorry in advance, k? ^_^ I'm just completely chuffed that you liked this chapter, awww I know, Dean's really having a tough time right now. John is...well he's John, so yeah Dean is in trouble, but then so is Sharpie and Sam. :P Yay! You loved the Bobby and John convo, along with a glimpse of pride from John. Girl, srsly you don't know how chuffed I am that you like this chapter, especially cause you can't wait. I'm writing and re-reading it now! F.Y.I *Oyako donburi* is a japanese dish, thought I'd throw it in there for Bobster! Thanks for the encouragement, and amazing reviews and stars! <333
Reviewer: saddlebag (Signed) · Date: 22/07/09 10:19 AM · On: Anger
There are just so many things I liked about this chapter, it's so heart breaking that John IS proud of Dean but doesn't show it, cause Dean needs to see it. I also liked the little moment between John and Bobby. Ahh I can't quote what I like or I'll end up putting half the chapter in but John's end thoughts are definitely spot on. Looking forward to your update.
Author's Response: Aww, thanks so much for the stars, review and shoutbox shout out, means a lot to me. :P I'm really glad you liked this chapter, it is heart breaking for Dean to never know it even though John feels it. Hehe I would have loved to see John and Bobby actually interact on the show, glad you liked their moment. Aww thanks for saying so, I loved John's character so I'm glad you think I'm doing him justice. <3
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 22/07/09 10:03 AM · On: Anger
I just hope They all get there in time. John's right. If he hadn't argued with Sam then none of this would've hapened.
Author's Response: LOL Aww John's just trying to teach Sam about discipline, he might be going about it the wrong way, do you think? :P Let's hope by the end of this he'll realize! Thanks, hon. <3
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 22/07/09 09:48 AM · On: Consequence
What is going to happen to Sam now he's got that sheet of metal stuck in his side. You could hear the panic in Dean's voice. I feel so sorry for Sam and the way he's still trying to see if Camyll's ok even though he's really hurt. I jst hope Dean gets there in tme to do something.
Author's Response: I actually don't know what's going to happen to Sam LOL this is completely spontaneous storytelling. ^_^ Sam is always so aware of everyone else, even when he's hurt - aww Thank you! <3
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 22/07/09 09:35 AM · On: Defiance
What happened? Why do harsh words always have to be said before Sam and Dean admit they need eachother. It is so sad that they fight like that all the time. I think Sam fighting with John makes it worse between Sam and Dean 'coz Dean wants to please John while Sam wants to rebel him. Dean tries to fix it by talking to Sam. Then Sam thinks no one understands him and he ends up getting himself hurt. Like I said before. I feel sorry for Dean 'coz he's int he middle of evrything.
Author's Response: Haha you're so right, horrible cross words are always exchanged before they can admit anything regarding their feelings. It is sad when they fight but I promise you they'll make it up, don't they always? Definitely true, it was clear in the pilot that the boys different opinions of how John raised them is what strained their relationship. So, Sam fighting with John would make Dean frustrated with him, good points. Thanks for reviewing, hon. Schelz <333
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 22/07/09 09:20 AM · On: Prologue - Breathe me
Aww.That is so sad. I hope that Sam is ok. I feel so sad for Dean, having to sit there and wait in silence until Sam breathes...If he does. From the start of the story where Dean says it's his fault, I feel sorry for him 'coz he things everything is his fault and he feels like he should be looking after Sam every minute of the day. He thinks his eyes should be locked on Sam all the time, and I just feel really bad for him 'coz he has to look after Sam aswell as himself.
Author's Response: Hey, Chuck! I know, very scary having to play the waiting game but after being through something as traumatic as the fire where Mary died, feeling responsible for the one younger than you is automatic. As you get older you feel even more protective and responsible for the younger sibling, so when they get hurt to assume blame is also automatic. I'm defo protective of you and Ray! :P can't helpt it. Thanks so much for reviewing, I've rambled long enough, so anyway, thanks. Schelz <333
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 22/07/09 08:10 AM · On: Anger
Ohh youv'e got me all het up again with this one. Dean's heart hammering in his chest at having to call John...John just bottling his anger until all are found...and I reckon Dean will be the one to get the flak...oooh mm Oyako-donburi? sounds err tasty...lol Jacq xx
Author's Response: Hey, Jacq! Hehe I'm glad this chapter worked for you, I'd be a little more than hesitant if I had to call John and tell him his youngest was missing. LOL! I think there will be a lot of blame being thrown around, and Dean will probably get most of it, poor thing. Oyako-donburi is a japanese dish, just thought I'd throw it in there :P
Reviewer: saddlebag (Signed) · Date: 19/07/09 05:42 PM · On: Consequence
I love this update, you've managed to bring a time where both boys were young and still make them true. You very skillfully brought Dean's feelings to the surface and I love his longing for all the things Sam wants and more. I also like Camyll, she fits in without taking away from the characters we know and love. Saddle x
Author's Response: Hey there, Saddle I'm soo chuffed to know that to you I've brought Dean's feelings to the surface skillfully. *claps like a two year old* I'm smiling like a joker over here, so glad you like Camyll, it's not very often females are accepted into the universe of superantural. *ducks* Yay, she fits but doesn't overshadow!!!! *sigh relief* Thank you! <3
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 19/07/09 05:27 PM · On: Consequence
Now two of them in trouble, down a hole, and a wet one too, oh dear, this does not look too good...but the cliffie is...next chapter soon, oh good Jacq xx
Author's Response: *shakes head* So much trouble, and it is not looking good at all ;) I'm glad you've come back for more and liked the cliffie. Yup another chapter soon, I've written it and now I'm just reading it and re reading it. Thanks for the stars hun. <3
Reviewer: Rae666 (Signed) · Date: 19/07/09 04:28 PM · On: Consequence
Awesome chapter! :D The way you describe young Dean's thoughts, his wants for escape and his jealousy of John's pride for Sam - it's so perfect! So true! :D And then Camyll considering how parents don't listen, he he - so true, they never do. They rarely remember what it's like to be a kid, especially ones like John. But damn, no pun intended, looks like Sam and Sharpie are in a tight spot. Yikes, can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: THANK YOU!!! Rae I'm so glad you're still enjoying this, I can't thank you enough for convincing me to post. I'm doing it again, smiling in the dark with the laptop screen glowing in my face *Freak* :D DSFKJSSGFKN I'm hyperventilating over here, I think you write Dean perfectly so it's a huge compliment for you to say I wrote young Dean so perfect and true. *hugs* I know, parents never freakin' listen so she's right about that and it's true, especially folks like John. :P ROFL I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter, yup, Sam and Sharpie are definitely in a tight spot. I can't wait to see what happens next either. ^_^ Thanks for the stars hun. <3
Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 19/07/09 04:18 PM · On: Consequence
Aaagh!!! A cliff hanger!!!! :p This was a very exciting chapter.
Author's Response: Still here? I'm glad, I know, sorry the cliffies just keep coming. ;) I'm glad you found this chapter exciting! Thanks for reviewing. <3
Reviewer: Jenn (Signed) · Date: 19/07/09 01:57 PM · On: Consequence
LKFJOAIWJREF GOOD GRACIOUS GIRL, WHY DIDN'T YOU TELL ME YOU WERE WHUMPING SAM?! You know how I feel about a nice, juicy Winchester whump story :P I'm totally hooked! I love when you're spontaneous! <3
Author's Response: SDFJNSFDF JENN?! Nice to see you here, reading my stuff, lol, I'm sorry I didn't tell you, everything was so unplanned. I know, I know, you and your whump! *Beams* I'm glad you're hooked, now all I've gotta do is keep you there. LOL Thanks hun, I guess I should be spontaneous more often? <3
Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 18/07/09 07:18 PM · On: Defiance
A cliff hanger! Aaagh!
Author's Response: LOL I won't keep you waiting long :P
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 16/07/09 07:43 AM · On: Defiance
Another great update, looks like Sam's in a world of trouble now, loving this story,looking forward to the next part.
Author's Response: Lindsay, it's awesome to see you back here, I'm glad you like it so far, I hope to keep that up. Yush, Sammy is in a lot of trouble isn't he? LOL - I'm writing the next part now *nervous twitch*
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 15/07/09 10:10 AM · On: Defiance
I love that Sam and Dean made eye contact and Sam backed down, anyone would melt looking into Deans eyes...ahhh And now Sam has stomped off into a hole lot of trouble, foolish child! I am loving this... Jacq xx
Author's Response: yay! Hey Jacq, glad you're still with me and loving this story so far. I'm glad you liked that little moment between the boys. Hahaha yes, Sam has got himself in a hole lot of trouble, but try to understand the boy's need for independance and freedom. *wink* Thanks for reviewing <333
Reviewer: saddlebag (Signed) · Date: 15/07/09 07:47 AM · On: Defiance
Without a doubt the most difficult to write is wee/teen'chester and often the most painful to read, because while we want fresh insight, we need something to connect us to who they are now. I commend anyone who attempts this and I especially commend you for nailing it. The fight between Sam and John I felt was a perfect insight into their lives. I also loved Sam's passion to be an author, being that young I think it was realistic of you to choose another dream instead of law. I like Camyll, she clearly has a very different relationship with Dean than she does with Sam. I look forward to you opening it up. Poor Sammy, he's hurt. Help him out would you? Saddle x
Author's Response: You've actually put my mind at ease somewhat, so thank you very much. It' means so much to know I'm actually doing well in writing a teen'chester because I have to agree, it's a risky place to start. lol *face melt* I was so worried about the fight between Sam and John, I really wanted it to be believable so I'm over the moon that you found it gave you insight, I'm also glad that you agree with Sam's other passion. I know I wanted to be a cartoonist before I realized at 11 I wanted to be a writer. Thank you for liking Camyll, yeah she does have a very different bond with each brother. lol, I'm going to try and help Sam, but not just yet, eh? haha thank you so much for reading. <333
Reviewer: Rae666 (Signed) · Date: 14/07/09 07:23 PM · On: Defiance
An update!! An update!! Woo!! Damn, I just wanna highlight and copy so much. Like 'Beast of Bray road', that sounds interesting and so original :D But then you went and threw in 'it stuck out to him because it was Christmas Eve. Without his boys' which made me pout and go awwwww. Totally love the exchange between Dean and Camyll. ^_^ She sounds like fun. Some amazing character development in this!! I love it!! And Sammy you silly silly boy, what you think you're doing... I hope he gets found quickly. Awesome chapter!
Author's Response: So many stars? Thanks hun. Dude you've made me smile from ear to ear with this review, and it's so funny 'Best of Bray road' is in John's journal, wish I could take the credit for its originality. lol All of a sudden the muse is awake, but I can't go there, I've too much on. "Shut up, Clo!" - sorry Rae, where were we? I'm beaming, so glad you like the exchange between Dean and Camyll. Yay! She is fun when she wants to be ^_^ Amazing character development? - SLJFDFS;FSJ I love you! I know, poor Sammy. I'd love to say he'll be found quickly but I don't think that's gonna happen yet. Thank you so much for reading and leaving awesome comments. <333
Reviewer: saddlebag (Signed) · Date: 13/07/09 05:49 PM · On: Prologue - Breathe me
ooo I like this very tense opening, leaving us in the middle of all the trouble with absolutely no idea how we got to this point and how we'll come away from it. A great start, I like the little written piece before the prologue and look forward to seeing where this goes. Saddle x
Author's Response: Aww nice to see you again, saddle. Thank you for leaving so many stars and for your wonderful comments, I'm glad you liked the opening, my only hope is that I can keep it going strong. I'm glad you liked the little written piece, I'm not usually so hot and I'm not even sure it came out poetic but it worked so yay! <3
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 13/07/09 05:23 PM · On: Prologue - Breathe me
Gee Schelz, talk about getting me all het up, I think I'll be holding my breath until Sam breaths! lol And you have Camyll again, thats great. You have got the tension and now have us hooked to know how they all got there in the first place...i'll be looking out for the next part, *hugs* Jacq xxx
Author's Response: Jacq you're too kind, I'm glad this has got you holding your breath and I'm over the moon that you're glad Camyll is in it. Now you're hooked I definitely can't fall on my face now can I? LOL I hope I don't disappoint :) Thanks for the stars hun, much appreciated. <3
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 13/07/09 03:55 PM · On: Prologue - Breathe me
Great start, you've got me hooked, i'm looking forward to finding out why they were in the water and who Camyll is.
Author's Response: yay! I'm glad I've got you hooked, now all I've gotta do is keep it going. lol I have a story 'Every time it raynes.' which goes into the history of Camyll, but I'll be sure to add some info in this too, so don't feel obliged to go read it. Thanks a lot for the review hun, much appreciated. <3
Reviewer: Rae666 (Signed) · Date: 13/07/09 02:47 PM · On: Prologue - Breathe me
Velcome to the realms of write and post. I hope you enjoy your stay *insert evil cackle round about here* :D *hugs* You're so sweet chick and you really are an awesome writer. When you sent me the prologue, I was so excited to read it and now I can't wait to find out what you've got in store for us. I absolutely love the words at the top and the whole thing is heartbreaking and on the edge of seat as your waiting for the damn kid to just breathe!! lol Well, I'll wait patiently for more ^_^ Or maybe even a little impatiently.
Author's Response: Am I talking to Vlad or Rae here? LMAO! - *hugs* Thanks so much Rae for the awesome review, always gives me a boost. I'm so glad you liked my words at the top, hopefully it will become a little clearer who's POV that was. I think impatience is what makes me work quick, then I won't forget to keep it rolling. lol The trail of stars along with this awesome review has made my day. <3
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