Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 03/09/09 05:09 PM · On: Resentment
Please write more and soon. I felt so sorry for Dean, when he was crying because he felt like maybe John was being selfish by just assuming that Dean wasn't taking care of Sam(Even though Dean takes care of Sam anyway). I know John wasn't being selfish because everyone deals with the death of a loved one in different ways. But I love all 3 winchesters anyway and since we're on the subject of love. I love bobby too. But, Like the famous words of This World Fair "Don't make me wait now, honey."
Author's Response: Lol, I know, I'm going slow ain't I? I will try to wrap this up quickly as possible. You're so right though, everyone deals with loss differently and that is John's way. Dean always takes care of Sammy, even when Sam doesn't want to be looked after and wants to rebel, aww brothers eh? I love Bobby 3 rofl btw I freakin' LOVE that song! <3
Reviewer: Rae666 (Signed) · Date: 02/09/09 03:38 PM · On: Resentment
YEY! He found them!!! He found them!! :D I loved her plan to through her shoes up, very very clever of her and it worked :D woo! The Dean and John scene was heartbreaking, Dean getting it all out there and John being John. Poor guys, and with Bobby stuck in the middle. Awww! Major guilt and angst for the lot of them. But he found them!!! YEY! I can't wait for the next angstful chapter :D
Author's Response: YEY!! Finally Dean found them, I'm so glad you liked Camyll's idea to throw her shoes :D Poor Bobby being in the middle of those two, it wasn't until I finished writing and read it back that I was like, awwww Dean! But yes, now he's found them lets hope nothing goes wrong eh, problem with freestyle is that it all just happens as I write it. lol <3
Reviewer: Rae666 (Signed) · Date: 02/09/09 01:12 PM · On: Confessions
AWESOME!!!! How did I miss thsi before? :D Tis awesome! I love that Camyll knows a little secret about Dean and the fact that he likes reading - it's so cute and I can so picture it. Poor Sammy and Camyll though! Still stuck down there. I love how Sam tells her to go ahead and search but she doesn't wanna leave him alone. *sigh* Big hugs all around. Brilliant chapter ^_^
Author's Response: Duuude! I always have the biggest smile when I read your reviews! :D Thanks for liking Camyll's little confession about knowing Dean's secret, I'm glad you can picture Dean reading!!! Aww I know *hugs all* I love Sam and Camyll relationship, they're fun to write. Thanks again hon, muchly appreciated! <3
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 02/09/09 09:39 AM · On: Resentment
Oooh Dean stood up to his Dad! And John listened for once. Its a difficult way John is taking, and I reckon he tries so hard but just cannot always follow the life that would be best for the boys and a life he would like to live. Camyll is good, the sneaker thing is good, I'll remember that if I ever get stuck down a hole...lol Good chapter, Jacq xx
Author's Response: You're so right Jacq, he does try hard for the boys but it's way too difficult to give them two lives, the normal one and the life of hunting! Eventually he would have to choose their safety even though he wishes they could have normal. *glee* I'm glad you're still liking Camyll, lol, she's quite good at improv. Thanks for sticking with me :D <3
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 02/09/09 04:19 AM · On: Resentment
Another great chapter, lots of angst in this one, can't wait for the next part.
Author's Response: ::D Thanks a lot hon, I'm glad you're still liking this little tale that I am making up on the spot. hehe *gulp* Your reviews are always muchly appreciated! <3
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 19/08/09 02:12 PM · On: Confessions
A fab chapter, looks like Camyll had a vision, very interesting, poor Sam getting all jealous in case he loses his friend, looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Yay *beaming* I'm glad you liked this chapter, it is looking like Camyll had some sort of vision isn't it? LOL Don't worry, all will be explained, maybe not by the end of this story but definitely in 'Resurged.' Sam is so adorable in this, if I do say so myself, his jealous makes me want to squish him. Thanks for reading, I'm glad you look forward to more, should be updated soon.
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 18/08/09 02:12 PM · On: Confessions
Camyll is having a tough time trying to keep Sam awake, and her saying she didnt like Dean is a lie, Sam will not be happy as we know what is going to come of their freindship, so Camyll having a premonition? Mmm interesting lol Good chapter, I just want to give poor Sam a hug to keep him warm. Jacq xx
Author's Response: Hey, hon. Camyll was definitely having a tough time keeping Sam awake but I think she got his attention this time. ROFL Cam doesn't actually know she's lying at his point, her main focus has always been her friendship with Sam, but as you said and you're right, Sam won't be happy. Hmm, I don't know happened to Camyll there, guess we should find out soon, eh? lol thanks for reading and leaving stars, I'm glad you're still enjoying it! <3
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 18/08/09 01:31 PM · On: Confessions
What is going on with Camyll seeing Sam being washed away. Creepy. I feel so sorry for Sam. He felt like he had nothing in common with Dean, until he found out that Dean liked reading. And he feels like Camyll is being pulled away from being his friend and being sucked in by Deans charm. I hope that they can get out in time. And what do you mean by that *evil laugh*? Hmm. Suspicious.
Author's Response: Aww another review, thank you!!! Ooo, I can't possibly share the reasons for what happened to Camyll so soon, remember this all part of my series. I feel sorry for Sam too, he and Camyll are like best friends so he doesn't want to share her and rightly so? Muahahahaha *cough* oh, you mean that laugh?
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 18/08/09 01:13 PM · On: Confessions
Good chapter. You are so evil, leaving us all waiting for more. Then again I always knew you were evil. Hope the new chap comes quick.
Author's Response: Muahahahaha I is evil! I can't help it, certain members have corrupted me but I can't name said members or I run the risk of being put back on the rack for torturing. ROFL Thanks for reading <3
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 18/08/09 12:59 PM · On: Fear
Lets hope Dean doesn't get in to trouble. Lets hope Sam doesn't get in to to much trouble. I feel so sorry for Bobby and maybe John should just calm down, sometimes he jumps to conclusion. UPDATE SOON. PLEASE. LOVE YA!! BYE. *waves*
Author's Response: I think we both know Dean's going to get into trouble, and we definitely know things are going to get worse for Sam before it gets better. Aww I know, though the show hasn't shown it, must have been pretty rough for Bobby after losing his wife, especially because he caused her death. John will calm down eventually, I hope. Love ya x *waves*
Reviewer: Rae666 (Signed) · Date: 17/08/09 12:56 PM · On: Fear
Awwww! So damn cute!!! I love the relationship you have forged between Bobby and Camyll. It's so believable for Bobby to be like that, so damn Bobby :D And his little backstory there was heartwrenching... *sigh* We never didn't get to experience HIS downward spiral on the show after his wife... Awesome, awesome chapter but then I expect nothing less from you :D Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: So many stars! Aww Rae I love hearing from you, heehe so glad you liked the 'how' Bobby and Camyll developed a relationship, none of them are saying it aloud but they see each other as father and daughter. It's a relief to know you found Bobby's growing attachment to Camyll believable. I really did want to know a bit more of Bobby's backstory, especially how he dealt with losing his wife, so I'm glad this worked for you. *facemelt* Nothing less? Thank you! I'll try not to cock up the rest eh...LOL <3
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 16/08/09 09:53 AM · On: Fear
A brilliant Bobby chapter, you don't have to be blood related to be a dad and i think Bobby makes a great dad.
Author's Response: Yay! I'm really chuffed you liked my Bobby chap, I agree that he'd be a great dad as he's shown that so many times. I hope you continue to enjoy this story, thanks for reviewing mate. <3
Reviewer: saddlebag (Signed) · Date: 15/08/09 09:59 AM · On: Fear
Well, this was an impressive update, I like the direction you've taken with Bobby and Camyll, I actually would love if this were his history and not AU because you dealth with his grief so well, and used Camyll to help him overcome it. I definitely loved that, Bobby as a father, even though surrogately is awesome. I can't wait for your update, doing really well. Saddle x
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much Saddle. I'm pleased to see you approve of Bobby's history with Camyll, and even more happy to hear that you'd have loved it if it were actually his history for the show. *glomp* I'm really glad you're still enjoying this and I hope I continue to entertain you. Thanks again, for the stars too. <3
Reviewer: kiara_ratterjmouse (Signed) · Date: 14/08/09 09:35 PM · On: Fear
i am loving this story so far i wish you could hurry and update it! I'm a sammy luvr so any pain and angst is good for me. kiara
Author's Response: Hey, thanks for popping in to let me know you're enjoying my story. Sorry for the late updates, I don't know where the week goes, LOL updates should be back to norm. hehe I'm glad you're enjoying the angsty Sam. <3
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 14/08/09 03:46 AM · On: Fear
I love Bobby because he has always been the one constant thing through the series so far, I love that Bobby would have no problem with taking care of Camyll. He is such a great father figure and I love the way you portrayed that. And at the end I was really quite scared, with John finally catching up with Dean. Oh boy! I liked this chapter very much it kept me gripped until the last words...nice one Jacq xx
Author's Response: *Beaming* Thanks a lot Jacq, I'm chuffed you liked the way I wrote Bobby, I love him and I love that you loved him taking Camyll in. It's a good feeling to know that you were gripped until the end of the chapter, I know it's not going to be pretty between John and Dean. Thanks for sticking with the story, the stars are a real boost. <3
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 02/08/09 03:53 PM · On: Guilt
Oh poor Sam, starting to feel guilty on top of every thing else, loved how Sam know all about his wound, always the book worm lol. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: yay! *Squee* I'm soo happy that you liked Sam knowing about his wound, totally a book worm. Poor Sammy! *hugs him* Thanks for reviewing, hon. Bobby chapter should be up very soon <3
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 01/08/09 11:50 AM · On: Guilt
This is good. But why are you doing this to Sam for? I just hope he gets better.
Author's Response: *Grapples chucky to the floor, before leaning into her ear* because I can do what I want, alright big head? Copiche? ROFL - srsly, thanks for the review cracked face dolly, I'm glad you think it's good. I'm sure Sam will get better soon enough. And uh, sorry about the...grapple thing, earlier...no wait, put that down. Chucky? No...I didn't mean it. You're not a cracked face dolly... *RUNS!*
Author's Response: Put that knife down!!!
Reviewer: saddlebag (Signed) · Date: 01/08/09 06:42 AM · On: Guilt
Fantasy!! You're killing me, poor Sam. I love that he's sought comfort in Camyll and confided in her, though she speaks confidently you've shown through Sam that she's vunerable aswell and just hiding it well, so she thinks. I really like her, I think I'll to go check out the other story with her in it. :P And trust Sam to know the proper terms, was always destined to be a college boy. lol I'm still really enjoying this story, while you reveal more of Sam's conflicting thoughts. Looking forward to the Bobby chapter. Saddle x
Author's Response: Saddle! I'm so thrilled to have found a loyal reader in you, you don't know how much it means to have so many of you react to Camyll so positively. *beams* Glad you liked Sam seeking comfort from Cam ultimately, revealing a more vulnerable side of her. I was actually quite worried about Sam's brainy moment when I posted it, but I feel so much better now that I've gotten reviews agreeing that it's typical Sam. Thank you!!! - Bobby chapter should be up today or tomorrow. Woo! <3
Reviewer: rozzy (Signed) · Date: 01/08/09 04:45 AM · On: Guilt
I'll try again - as my last review disappeared down a blackhole aka cyberspace! Any way just want to say just how much I am enjoying this story, especially how you're exploring the mindset of a frustrated young Sam at odds with the notion that he is a Hunter-to-be. Your OC Camyll is a welcome addition here too, offering up a sounding board for Sam to offload. As it is all wrapped up in a beautifully LimpSammy what more could I ask for - except for another chapter soon - please!
Author's Response: Awww, thanks for still reviewing, as I'm a slow reader I know how it feels when my review doesn't go through cause I've been chucked out. lol (paste it before sending) I'm very chuffed to have pulled in a new reader and have them enjoy it, you've made my day, I'm totally thrilled that you not only like what I'm doing with Sam emotionally but that you like my OC Camyll!!! It means a lot that she's welcome as I know most OC's within SPN are frowned upon. Woo! LimpSammy:P Thanks for the Awesome review, I'm working on the next chapter now, so it should be up today or tomorrow. <3
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 31/07/09 09:50 AM · On: Guilt
Hey Bebg So explain to an old timer like your Aba, what exactly is freestyling then? You gotta get 'em outta this hole hunny, they gonna catch their death of cold! ur Aba x
Author's Response: Hey Aba! *squishes* Hehehe freestyling is basically when you're making something up on the spot. So I write a chapter and post it and then start writing the other one on the spot without any planning out. I know, scary huh? I'm working on getting them out the hole, not to worry. *smirk* ur Bebg <3
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 31/07/09 06:17 AM · On: Guilt
Its good to see into more of Camyll's persona, and the dark and wet place they are trapped in just makes me shiver...ugh. But poor Sam, he has really dropped himself (and Camyll) in it this time...oh boy...teenagers huh! lol Still loving this story and you are sooo good at the conversation thing. Jacq xx
Author's Response: So many stars Jacq, thank you so much, I really appreciate it and I'm just over the moon that you're still reading. I'm glad you liked the tiny hole I poked in Camyll's facade to reveal another side to her. :D Hehe makes my day to know this chapter made you shiver because of where they are, Sam has literally dropped them in but I just feel so bad for him. *pets him* Teenagers indeed, but considering the fact that he's being forced to hunt, gives just cause for him to rebel. :P I'm glad you like my dialogue!!! Your review is much appreciated <3
Reviewer: Rae666 (Signed) · Date: 30/07/09 04:48 PM · On: Guilt
Scheeelz!!! Awesome chapter but you're killing me! Poor Sam!!! I just wanna hug him. Camyll really is awesome, I'm so totally loving her and her relationship with both boys. Hehe, and Sam the eternal geek boy. Very awesome. Loved the way you wrote him this chapter - all his thoughts, his guilt and the nightmares, his wanting to stop fighting but not knowing how. Seriously - you're rocking this freestyling!
Author's Response: Woo! So many stars, thanks so much Rae, I'm really glad you're still enjoying this story. Aww, I know, Sammy does need a hug, but I will try my best to help him out. lol duude! I'm so excited to know that you find Camyll awesome and love her relationships with the boys, she doesn't see Sam and Dean Winchester, she sees two boys she likes hanging out with. Of course, her realtionship with Dean is a little different as she gets on with Sam 90% of the time. rofl I know, right? Trust Sam to know these things, I'm just beaming because it means a lot that you loved the way I wrote him. yay! I rock freestyling. Thanks. Much appreciated <3
Reviewer: psquare (Signed) · Date: 30/07/09 04:11 PM · On: Guilt
Wow. I don't think I knew quite that much of anatomy when was 15... go, Sammy! (... Although, given a chance, would he have finished off with "aponeurosis, just a few centimeters medial to the linea alba"?)
Author's Response: ROFL Let's not go too far eh? He's not a doctor, he just happens to know the correct terms. I'd be lying if I said I knew all the terms at that age either but remember this is Sam we're talking about. Not only does he read too much for his own good, his dad is a hunter after all, I assume he would've taught them a lot of things, not just the basics of hunting. (Sam being Sam would go find the correct words instead of just stomach, legs, arms and head lol) Thanks for reviewing, much appreciated.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 27/07/09 06:00 AM · On: Anger
Two excellent chapters, John's on the warpath now alright, looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, hon. I'm glad you're still enjoying this story, I should have an update early this week :P <3
Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 23/07/09 07:40 PM · On: Anger
A great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the stars and review, much appreciated! <3
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