Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 16/07/11 02:20 AM · On: Sacrifice
I have no words. Just... it's very emotional and powerful. Dean worrying about Camyll and her telling him not to do or say what he was about to. Then knowing Sam was going to untie his rope in an effort to help Camyll and everyone knowing it was what he was going to do. It was fantastically suspenseful! Sam was his heart and he was his little brother's armor... Fabulous! You hit the nail on the head!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/09/10 01:39 PM · On: Resentment
Howdy. That's all--- just howdy? What an understatement. I love it! Once again you've described the dreams, goals and fears of the Winchesters as if you were in their head (and you pulled me in with you). I'm glad Dean found Sam and Camyll. Now we can find out what's wrong with Sam aside from the metal shooter.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/09/10 01:15 PM · On: Confessions
...felt as though someone had walked through it and left her cold. Eerie! It gave me the shivers. I think Sam might have a bit of a crush on Camyll. It sounds like he's more than worried about her getting hurt by Dean's womanizing.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/09/10 01:05 PM · On: Fear
I love the background on how Camyll and Bobby became so close. Now we see that she means as much to him as the Winchester boys.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/09/10 12:57 PM · On: Guilt
Good chapter! i especially liked the Chinese burn and that even thought they've had to grow up way to fast in the hunter's world, in some aspects they're still able to be kids.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/09/10 09:24 AM · On: Anger
Great chapter. I love all the little details you express through the thoughts of the characters! You give us every side of the situation and explore all the emotions involved. I don't remember you being no-one's daddy, Singer." OUCH! Way to twist the knife. ...running so fear wouldn't be able to catch up to him and wrap itself around his neck. Fabulous! ...as soon as they were safe and warm again he was going to let it rip. Ha! Boy, do I know how that feels!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/09/10 09:14 AM · On: Consequence
The thoughts and guilt Dean has for wanting a normal life were expressed so clearly. I especially like that he realized he was condemning Sam for fighting for the same things Dean himself wants. John had never laid a hand on them, he'd never have to because his glare was enough to make anyone shake at the knees. When Dean didn't melt under his father's super heat vision, John nodded and walked passed, allowing Dean to breathe. Yeah! I can imagine those laser beam eyes cutting to the truth.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/09/10 09:01 AM · On: Defiance
Cool! Oh the hard life of a teenager. I remember thinking myself ill-used by my parents when I was that age. Oh, to go back to such a simple time when the weight of a family wasn't on my shoulders. Dean broadened his shoulders as though he could stand any straighter than he already was. Great line! Funny that Sam's reading Ann Rice. You'd think he'd have enough of the supernatural in real life. Dean was staring Sam down so hard that the younger brother finally felt it and looked up at him, in his eyes was that hereditary stubbornness but a moment longer sharing eye contact with Dean and he was melting. Fabulous! I can just picture Dean's glare and Sam's timidity.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/09/10 08:28 AM · On: Prologue - Breathe me
First of all, fabulous banner! I love that you started right in the middle of the crisis. That got my adrenaline pumping immediately. I'm also happy to see Camyll back in the story.
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 20/04/10 07:58 PM · On: Sacrifice
Just realized there isn't another chappy yet! this is not good...not good at all!!! now I must check on this AU issue of mine to be sure that I can count on Sammy makin it outta there and then pray for Camyll!
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 20/04/10 07:56 PM · On: Sacrifice
Poor Dean! John pushing him aside like that! And Sammy the hero! hehehe these Winchesters I tell ya! The one thing that's a relief about all this is that this is a weechester story and tho it's got an OC it's not an AU...is it??? I mean so we know that Sammy'll be okay...and Camyll right??? DUDE you've got me rushing to the next chappy now!
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 20/04/10 07:43 PM · On: Resentment
AWESOME CHAPTER!!! LOVED the confrontation between Dean and John! Go Dean! and yay John for manning up and admitting Dean was right!!! And yay Bobby for trying to lighten the mood with Dean after! And lastly Woohoo to camyll for thinking to throw her shoe like that!
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 20/04/10 07:30 PM · On: Confessions
This was another great chapter! Loved how Camyll knew just what to tell Sam to steel him and get him moving again. I love the thought of Dean reading in hiding...I truly believe it too. My Dean is SO much smarter than he lets on! Now Camyll has me more intrigued as well with this vision of her and Sam being swept away...very very interesting indeed!
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 20/04/10 06:01 PM · On: Fear
Aww Bobby! I loved this chapter! I love how Bobby came to Camyll's rescue as much as she came to his! This was a great chapter! I love Bobby and I love how you are developping a backstory for him with your OC!
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 05/04/10 05:55 PM · On: Guilt
AWESOME CHAPPY!!! Loved Sam's back and forth with the guilt and blaming his dad! and how he opens up to Camyll and realizes maybe John isn't so bad in comparasion to her dad. Love Camyll's worry too about there being something else wrong if his wound was superficial. and I LOVED the Chinese burn hehehe Go Camyll! Love that she was like I gotta read more lol Great chapter! will be back for more looking forward to Bobby's POV!
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 02/04/10 08:51 PM · On: Anger
Great chapter! I always love a look into John's head...He's a complicated man. I love how he's both angry and proud of dean for looking him in the eye and lying for Sam. I loved the self-doubt that he has as he heads out to search...thinking that if he'd listened to Bobby and not let things escalate between him and Sam. Best of all and SO something a parent would think is...Just let me get them back safe and sound and once they are I will kill them hehehe I know I have thought this with Audrey once or twice already! Great chapter! Now I must go write myself! I shall return for more this is a great story!
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 23/03/10 09:28 PM · On: Consequence
When Dean didn’t melt under his father’s super heat vision, John nodded and walked passed, allowing Dean to breathe. Looks like John's super power is faulty hehehe OH NO!!! How is Dean gonna find them if Camyll's phone is water logged???? This is not good...Sammy is bleeding and they are in danger! Dean use your Jedi powers!!! Great job Fairy! will read more soon!
Author's Response: LOL- Nope doesn't quiet work when it comes to Dean keeping Sammy out of trouble ;) Poor Sammy, some hero Camyll is hahaha but you shall have to see what happens next to the poor teens. Thank you hon, for the review. I love to hear from you XxX
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 21/03/10 01:45 PM · On: Defiance
OH NO!!! Sammy! err Sam! Poor guy...okay so running blindly through the woods not his best plan ever...Camyll'll find him though...right? Shall continue later as I MUST get some writing of my own done! will be back to read as a reward for writing at least 1000 words of my own! Loved this line btw: “Maybe because I’m not a bad kid…” He closed his eyes momentarily, going over the words he’d let fall out of his mouth and made a mental note to think before he spoke.
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you for reviewing, and for the lovely stars. No, not a good plan at all running into the woods, but yes, get some writing done would ya. hehe <3
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 21/03/10 01:39 PM · On: Prologue - Breathe me
so apparently it didn't paste the line I liked lol so here it is! Dean couldn’t move from where he stood, he was frozen, if Sam didn’t start breathing soon he was pretty damn sure he’d stop. I just feel like it really illustrates their relationship so perfectly!
Author's Response: Awww bless, thank you love! I'm so glad your enjoying my story here and on ffnet, definitely keeps me smiling. And most importantly reminds me that I need to finish this story.
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 20/03/10 06:53 PM · On: Prologue - Breathe me
Quite the start! Edge of my seat about to fall off! LOVED this line:
Reviewer: Jadelicious (Signed) · Date: 25/10/09 08:31 AM · On: Sacrifice
I'm waiting in anticipation for the next chapter. I check to see if its completed everytime i log on. I love the story, please continue with it.
Author's Response: Hey Jade, thanks for letting me know you've been reading and enjoying my story. RL has unfortunately got in the way of me updating regularly, but I promise it will be finished. Thank you!!! Schelz <3
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 21/09/09 09:11 AM · On: Sacrifice
No! Sam! What have you done!? *Clears throat*. Sorry for that little outburst, you know me. I hope that Sam and Camyll get out of this because Dean would be heartbroken, as would John.
Author's Response: ROFL Soz Chuck! :P I'm thinking Sam and Camyll will get out of it but a few hiccups are always a MUST. Hahaha Thanks for reviewing babyface! <3
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 19/09/09 07:09 AM · On: Sacrifice
Great chapter and they were so close to rescue, but Sam would never leave her to be swept away alone... looking forward to the next chapter Jacq
Author's Response: :D I'm glad you like you this chapter hon, sorry for its late arrival :S - they were soo close lol, but you're right, Sam would never let Camyll go alone. :D I hope you like the chapter to come as it's the chapter that will tie with the very first chapter. <3
Reviewer: Rae666 (Signed) · Date: 18/09/09 02:54 PM · On: Sacrifice
AWWWW! Love! I love the Dean and Sam exchange, both saying how they were wrong and the other was right. Nothing like a bit of life threatening drama to make people see sense, lol. Also love how Sam wasn't willing to leave Camyll but she's so strong! She an awesome character ^_^ He'd hold on to that thought. Totally loved this line and how it echoed the title :D So much trust Sam puts in Dean to save him. Awesome. Awesome chapter as always :D
Author's Response: You floor me with your reviews, I LOVE that you loved Dean and Sam's little exchange, I wondered if it was too short but I'm glad I left it as is. I know, right? A little life threatening and people spill it! LOL I coudn't be more chuffed that you like Camyll, I'm glad you think she's awesome and strong! - Sam's quite attached to her hehe, plus it's like you said, Sam trusts Dean with his life and that's what motivated him to be brave enough to let go. Yay! I'm glad you liked that line, thanks for giving me a boost as always, muchly appreciated hon! <3
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 18/09/09 05:41 AM · On: Sacrifice
Another brilliant chapter, looking forward to the next part.
Author's Response: *Squee* Thank you! I hope you like the next update :D
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