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Reviewer: vengeance71 (Signed) · Date: 28/11/09 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 8 Lucas...verse 8

I like the story and hope you update soon.

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 07/10/09 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 8 Lucas...verse 8

Outstanding chapter, as you know I do love all your stories but this is going to be an all time favorite! The moment Dean had to give up his soul - and I'm so grateful he didn't give it freely, this really meant a lot - was just heartbreaking, in the true sense of the word soul shattering and you sure made it unforgettable. But I do believe it had to happen, if Dean had not be forced to give in, his salvation couldn't start - Castiel's thought so very true "Now it was up to Lucas and the one called Sam to put in their own rules, to try and change destiny...!

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 28/09/09 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 7 Lucas...verse 7

Stunning chapter and if there ever was a line I won't forget it's Sam's "I'll...I'll be back Dean, I won't let go...never...ever." I do believe this will come true in the end, fantastic scenes here!!!

Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 28/09/09 06:33 AM · On: Chapter 7 Lucas...verse 7

Oooh loved this one. Hope sometimes is all we have and poor Dean has to let his go.
Interested to see where this is going! Mary x

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 05/09/09 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 6 Lucas...verse 6

I cried. What Dean has to endure is beyond words and his and Sam's pain and fear agonizing to witness but then there was this incredible beautiful scene when Sam saw the little butterfly, Dean's soul he ripped out to withstand Lucifer and somehow to find a way back to Sam! I LOVE this story!! Missing your poems very much btw (yes, this is a hint!). Hugs, Sabine

Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 04/09/09 03:32 AM · On: Chapter 6 Lucas...verse 6

I really liked this chapter, Lucy collecting his plaything and then Dean's little butterfly, sitting safe with his soul in the corner while Dean himself is tortured.
Will the devil find the butterfly or will Sam find a way to save his brother? I want to know!
Sorry if I don't get to review every chapter but I will read and review as I can. This is an usual but really interesting story, glad I found it.
Mary x

Author's Response: The honner is all mine. I work hard on these things and i wanted this one to be a bit different to...i hope you keep liking it. big hugs and kisses copycat666

Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 04/09/09 03:28 AM · On: Chapter 5 Lucas... verse5

He's found him but he can't reach him, the prize in the glass cage. And Lucifer is on he's way...can't help feeling that he is coming for our boy!
Like the exchange with Sam and Lucas in this as well, Sam wanting to help Dean and not being able to and Lucas' - I'm just a guide.
Mary x

Author's Response: the idea behind lucas will take a weird twist , i hope you will stay in the front row for that one....winks. Thanks again hun....like you reviewd every chappy.....like....omg

Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 04/09/09 03:24 AM · On: Chapter 4 Lucas verse 4

Hey
Like the part with the stepping through the gate. And the seperate rooms were a great idea, how would you like to spend your eternity....
OOH...Dean's a devil's pet, Sam' is almost there. Still enjoying this. Love the whole tone to your writing it has a nice pace to it...feels like I'm walking along with Sam.
Mary x
Mary x

Author's Response: that's what i wanted it to turn out so i'm smiling my teeth of now.

Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 04/09/09 03:19 AM · On: Chapter 3 Lucas verse 3

Ooh, liked the little bit with the hellhound.
Poor Sam, so much to look at and through and now he's found Lucifer's place. Will Dean be there?
On to the next one
Mary x

Author's Response: I found it hard to get a new insight on hell but i could never leave the dogs out hahahahahahaha thanks again.

Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 04/09/09 03:16 AM · On: Chapter 2 Lucas verse two...

Short but sweet, Sam wandering Hell as a almost ghost? Again love this idea, not sure about the come back when you're ready, without Dean would he ever be?
Onwards....
Mary x

Author's Response: takes a bow and smiles.

Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 04/09/09 03:15 AM · On: Chapter 1 Lucas...verse one.

Hey just stumbled across this and thought I'd give it a read. This is good, I like the idea and the way you've written it!
Lucas has a real feel to him and I love that he's leaning Sam into hell.
Mary x

Author's Response: so glad you stumbled hahahaha and thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 23/08/09 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 5 Lucas... verse5

My God, this time I really don't have words for how amazing this is!!! An agonizing and desperate moment when Sam finally found Dean but still there is so much love, such wonderful lines - "...he waited for the moment the glass would just disappear and his heart would be found again."/"Even love has its limits Sam". "Not mine...NEVER MINE!" It really broke my heart when Lucifer was coming to make his choice but then again Dean found the strenght to stand up - and I do believe the only reason he can do it is Sam, "This time it was little Sammy that stayed silent as he watched his guardian angel turn into a soldier...once more." Outstanding!

Author's Response: thank you very much sweety as always your words lift me up. kiss and big hugs forever xxxx

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 06/08/09 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 4 Lucas verse 4

Honestly don't know how you are doing this, the images and emotions here are just stunning! The courtyard of Lucifer's castle in all its beauty, filled with flowers turns out to be just the cruel perversion of it - "Lucifer's irony...the bright light at the end of the tunnel..." that is a haunting thought, brilliantly written! Hope Sam will find Dean, but as Lucas said "not many can reach this far son...your love must be strong". It is! Fantastic chapter,, thank you hun!

Author's Response: no thank you...takes a bow

Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 05/08/09 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 4 Lucas verse 4

Interesting story. I'm wondering what room Sam will find Dean in. I look forward to reading your choice.

Author's Response: thanks so much for reviewing it always hyelps me to keep going and yeah i wonder what room it will be too hahahahahahahahahaha keep watching out for more and thanks again hugs and kisses copycat666

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 26/07/09 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 3 Lucas verse 3

Absolutely gripping and intense, those images of hell, the tortured souls, Sam's desperate search for Dean, that's really nightmarish, very dark but excellently written! Loved this line here so much - "You think there's love in hell?"/"More then in heaven but it hides for all the right reasons." A lot of truth in this! Sam will find his big brother, even if he has to search for him at Lucifer's place itself! Again, grand!!!

Author's Response: thanks sweety i think your grand!!!!!! hahahahaha love ya!

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 12/07/09 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 2 Lucas verse two...

This chapter answered all my hopes, it's brilliant. Powerful and dark images, unforgettable impressions, this is truly "hell's playground"!
"He had no plans, no strange solutions, all he did know was that somewhere in this everlasting nightmare, in this space of death and decay his brother was trapped till the ends of time." Hope our Sam will find Dean - I understand he needs to see it with his very eyes - and will be able to come back, it's going to be a fantastic journey!!

Author's Response: Thanks sweety and you wont be disapointed cos i have lot's more to come hahahahaha thanks again hun

Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 11/07/09 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 2 Lucas verse two...

It was short, but I liked it. Keep going ... please. :p

Author's Response: i know and the most of you will hate me for it but by putting in short chappies i wanna give a bit of a feeling that time realy moves slow down there hahahahahaha thanks alot for the stars and the nice review that always puts a smile on my face

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 10/07/09 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 1 Lucas...verse one.

Don't even know where to begin to tell you how much I love this concept, stunning! Lucas is a fascinating character and I honestly believe it is what Sam would have done if offered that chance, cause without Dean he truly was lost ("Are you lost?"..."Very..."). I also is an overwhelming proof of love, as always written so well, wow, can't wait for the next chap!

Author's Response: hey beautifull , i knew you would be the first one and i'm glad you liked this. i'm gonna try and make this very special just like you....winks love you, copycat 666

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