Supernaturalville
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 12/07/09 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 1

A beautifuly written story, i liked how you brought the fact that Dean was mute for a while as a child into your story,i never made the connection but when Sam found it, it was like a light coming on lol.



Author's Response: Thank you! I love it when I manage to sneak up a plot on the readers :D

Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 10/07/09 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow! That was great!  Loved the twists, and how you capitalized on the the easily-overlooked reference to being mute and eventually sent us back to Dean's traumatic childhood event.  It was like a light bulb going on in my head, just as it did in Sam's.  I'm sending the link to your story to my SN friends.  I really liked it!


Author's Response:

Wow! Thank you! It's lovely to know that I managed to surprise you :D

And thank you for the free publicity ;) That's always awesome!

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 10/07/09 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 1

I'm surprised.  I expected this one to be a little funny and silly considering the costumes- but you managed to really turn it into something with a lot of depth.  It was very thought provoking, and I liked it a lot.

Author's Response:

Well, in all honesty, it was supposed to be funny and silly. But then the plot sneaked up on me and there was nothing to be done but let it roll :D

Thank you!

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 10/07/09 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hey ophium.

I liked it.  Liked the cowboy imagery and the set up paragraphs gave it a dusty hot prarie atmosphere, and then you came in with nice Dean-snarkiness!

It was an original and cool plot, arcing back to Dean's silence post losing his Mum.

Oh and the image of Dean's sweetly bowed legs in tight jeans and chaps was a winner too!

Bird xxx



Author's Response:

Hehe...the sweet bowedlegs! That man was born to play a western, everyone but Kripke knows that! *g*

Thank you!

Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 08/07/09 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 1

Very well written.   I am going to assume that Dean does wake up and finish the story for Sam, but I think the way you ended it really worked for the story.

Author's Response:

Assume away :D

I wouldn't have the nerve to kill poor Dean, I just like messing him up a lot *g*

Glad you like it and thank you for reviewing!

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