Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 08/07/07 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 8
I know you did the anagram just to drive us CRAZY huh??...I'm usually good at anagrams...we'll see...hmmm? I like where this hunt is going...could get very interesting...Boy, that was an awfully chatty Ouija board...usually they seem so slow and cryptic...Anthony does not sound like a nice spirit at all....Good luck to our hero on this one...His worst nightmare is losing Sam...so he's already living that one
Author's Response: Awww Jude thank you very much 2 reviews the same day!!yay!!!! you light my day!!! The anagram is sooooooooooooooo easy hahah ( well think that a non english speakear like me did it) And yep i used the nightmares issue because for Dean this seems to be a extremely bad nightmare so he understand how the girls can die of fear......i think he´s acting a bit robotic , like he is dead inside, don´t you think?
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 08/07/07 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 7
Maria....where the heck was my brain when this chappy went up...I am losing it..... I can't believe Dean staying put so long without having his feet nailed to the floor.....okay now that everybody seems to know that Sam is a mass murderer how will Dean escape scrutiny by the cops( since in the US they question everybody known to the bad guys) ....and fred and martha seem a little too angelic.......hmmm....and John, well, he's being John
Author's Response: Maybe Martha and Fred are nailing Dean´s feets everyday without his knowlegde.....yep i have my suspicious with that 2 fellows too....... Thank you very much for the review darling!!!
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 08/07/07 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 8
My initial gues for the clue was "Massachussetts" because he was last seen in Michigan and Panwira is the "Far East Trading company". But I stink at anagrams and the letters didn't fit. Oh well, I'll wait with everyone else to find out:) Did like Sam using the telepathy thing though. That was cool.
Author's Response: thanks sweety for the review and about the anagram....not even close , sorry!!! and thelepathy rocks don´t you think?
Reviewer: gaelicspirit (Signed) · Date: 20/06/07 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 7
Maria -- Sorry... I've been living under a rock and haven't been able to check in recently. I just read chapters 6 and 7 -- you're doing really well bringing your plot together and doling out the tension. So... Dean's been with Martha and Fred for two months?! That seems like a long time... wow. Was John going to find Sammy and then come for Dean? I have my suspicions about Martha and Fred... I don't know that they're the innocent mom and pop that they seem... but maybe that's my suspicious nature. ;) It's interesting to see Dean express emotion to that degree -- so unlike him, but after all he's been through, very human. So... what happens next?
Author's Response: Don´t worry hunni, real life sucks. I have my doubts about Fred and Marthy too, they are too nice to be true..... And about John....well he has a few surprises for us...
Reviewer: Andromeda171 (Signed) · Date: 19/06/07 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 7
Awesome as usual don't know why you have such a low opinion of that chapter I loved it! I wish Dean would find ppl to love & care about him other than Sam, coz he needs to feel important, plz keep writing
Author's Response: AWWW thanks hunni. People tend to hate to see or read about big heroes crying, all that macho crap. Dean is as human as us, and why can´t he cry?
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 19/06/07 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 7
You are so good at this Maria! Martha and Fred seem so real...probably because I know some people who are just like them! I love this story! I hope that Dean gets Sam soon! ~Kayla
Author's Response: Kayla sweety!!! i always looking for your review...you cheer me up!!!. Fred and Mathy maybe are more than 2 old people......think that i never write something because it sound good.....thats a big clue...
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 19/06/07 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 7
John can be suck an a** sometimes.
Author's Response: yeah! but maybe he has a huge plan......you never know what this guy can do for his kids.
Reviewer: Andromeda171 (Signed) · Date: 11/06/07 03:20 AM · On: Chapter 6
My God! Poor Dean, does he even remember that Sammy hit him & nearly killed him? You are killing me & I'm dyin to read Chapter 8, amazing as usual Maria
Author's Response: thanks hunni......and yes he remember clear and loud. I don´t want to kill you , sorry, but that means you like it? ****doing a happy dance******
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 10/06/07 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 6
Dean apologizing for cussing in front of Martha was priceless:) Can't wait till Dean catches up with Sam.
Author's Response: Than you for your review and yeah i can´t wait either
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/07 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 6
Oh maria, you have such a fantastic story going on here! Please update asap! It's so addicting! ~Kayla
Author's Response: awww ****sobbing***thank you sweetheart you really make my day..or actually my night haha
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/07 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 5
Excuse my language but... I HOPE SAM KICKS HIS ASS! Great chapter! ~Kayla
Author's Response: Sammy kicking his own ass? poor guy...ummm...sammy ass ( sorry a gutter moment) thanks for all your reviews i think you are an awesome girl!!! and please keep writing!!! i want to know was going on with sammy and his brain
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/07 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 4
If someone doesn't slap this 'Pete' guy I am! How dare he stab Dean in the leg! And now Sam is posessed? Fabulous chapter! ~Kayla
Author's Response: awww thanks sweety!!! i want to slap Pete too, he´s mean......but wait ...maybe someone´ll slap him badly, very badly..... thanks for the fabulous*****flushing****i don´t deserve that
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 09/06/07 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 6
what don't i remember from the last few chapters....where is that gorgeous Impala.?...my mom and dad had both the Impala and the LeSabre... My personal favorite was definitely the Chevy...awesome car........C'mon now, maria.....save Sammy !!!...this murder spree goes on any longer and I'm gonna INSIST that Dean kills his little brother on sight !!!!
Author's Response: Jude you must be patient ( muahaha evil laugh).........i have a few surprises for you....and about the Impala, she didn´t make it, the poor girl die in the crash ( shhhhhh don´t worry maybe that wasn´t real at all) thank you very much for the review
Reviewer: Andromeda171 (Signed) · Date: 31/05/07 06:19 AM · On: Chapter 5
An amazing story, totally perfect & heart breaking, loved the way you related the dream world in different life stages of Dean to the cold & dark real world, dying to read the next chapter & keep the success
Author's Response: aww thank you very much!!!!!!!!!! wow what a warm and kind review, i don´t know what to say.....except thank you.
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 26/05/07 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 5
Maria ...love the songs you've chosen ...poor Sam...how will he ever live with himself after this one.... Sure hope Dean's mind will let him connect...Dam needs help FAST....where is Dean anyway ?? last we heard was 'Sam' whacking him with a pipe...................love that your Demons have background stories.....sooooooo happy to hear next chapter on the way.
Author's Response: I´m happy now!!!!! I´m glad you like it, it´s was so hard to wrote....i hate mean people and gore.....I thougtht it could be cool to join all the Winchester live experiences with a sort of Demon plan..... and Dean???ummmm ...i don´t know...just read the next chapter....
Reviewer: supernaturalpass (Signed) · Date: 25/05/07 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 5
Wonderful ^^ I can't wait to continue reading it.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for this warm review...i already sent the next chapter to my wonderful beta...just wait...
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 25/05/07 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 5
Oh, what happened to Dean????ewe, those deamons are pretty nasty.
Author's Response: they are crepy!!! thanks for taking the time to drop some lines...and aboutDean.....just read next chapter
Reviewer: fireball10 (Signed) · Date: 25/05/07 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 5
hurry with the next chapter
Author's Response: Ok!!! i have already sent it to Terry. don´t worry you´ll have The worst hunt for a while..............
Reviewer: gaelicspirit (Signed) · Date: 25/05/07 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 5
Hmmm... interesting take -- liked the depth with the demon back-story and apparent focus on Sam. And now Sam's trying to reach out... connect to someone. Would be interesting if it were Dean.
Author's Response: I wrote this in July, so the demon army story was a delirious of my mind....now it´s true.......... Thank you sweety for your review, you always light my day.
Reviewer: gaelicspirit (Signed) · Date: 22/05/07 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 4
Whoa - wait, Sam hit Dean? Is it really Sam? It seemed like Sam, what with the worry and relief and the thinking of the voice on the phone... Yeesh. I sure hope your tests are done, because I want to know where you're going with this! :) I particularly liked how you had Dean go to a "happy place" every time he passed out -- in a park with Mom as a 4 year old, in the Impala with Sammy, listening to music -- very sweet. Thanks for writing!
Author's Response: aww you are the sweetest girl!! thank you for your review. And..i don´t know Sammy hitting Dean? weird don´t you think? Dean´s happy places are a gift for my broken heroe, he really needed that...glad you like them.
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 20/05/07 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 4
Good to know. I thought I was just too doped up on flu medicine. Great story line! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: aww take care and don´t take too much flu medicine
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 19/05/07 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 4
Ok, I'm a little confused. Why was John so evil? What happened to Sammy at the end of the chapter is he possessed?
Author's Response: sorry i can´t answer that right now...but everything is part of the plot, even the tinny, smaller thing.....everything happens because of something...and i don´t know if John is evil or he´s protecting his kids.
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 19/05/07 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 4
maria, i know with you being in school there's not a lot of time to write......so i guess we'll have to just be patient for the next chapter to appear...with dyslexia it must be really, really hard so i appreciate your words even more.......good job
Author's Response: thanks......but dyslexia and not speaking english aren´t the reasons why i want all of you to read my fic......
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 19/05/07 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 4
Gotta give us more, that was great - Nice job - K
Author's Response: awwwww thank you very much. You really think that was great? ****flushing****
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 18/05/07 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 4
c'mon, M, try to be a bit nicer to our beloved, fair-haired hero........wasn't the torment of last night's season finale ptII bad enough..??........great story, so far.......thanks for all your hard work..................okay enuff said where's the rest of it ????
Author's Response: Sorry hun but i live in southamerica and we are 5 epis behind so i don´t know what tormented Dean last night!!!!!! Thanks for this nice review.....you all have to wait a bit because i have to take an exam in a few weeks ( my last exam at med school) and i won´t be able to post the next chapter. A small spoiler about next chapter...is a Demon POV!!!
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